[SwaRon] For the Best..?! (OS) Prt3last Pg25 Apr9 - Page 21

shaffy_arsha

@shaffy_arsha

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 12 years ago

super duper lyk
dat was beautiful
truly u r awsome writer chahe kriyaansh ho swaron u potrayte dem soo beautifully...i love ur writting...

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Namrata Jadhav

@nj_SRKholic

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Posted: 12 years ago

beautifullly written...awesum really...wonderful...datz wat i cn say... 😊

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-bitz-

@-bitz-

IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

Awesome Khushi...she excepted that she was affected <3

Loved your OS write more OS naa plzzz

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Shivs

@The007Shivani

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey Khushi it was amazing speechless

And I have pressed like on the IJD if that is the one u r talking about

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sukanya.

@Lovenarbhi

IF-Sizzlerz

Posted: 12 years ago

Dono ka barthav with eachother is so so sweet. I just loved it first rain. You are superbbb.

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sukanya.

@Lovenarbhi

IF-Sizzlerz

Posted: 12 years ago

Hey first rain a biggg jhappi for you...🤗. One of the best OS i have ever read. Swaroon=love and romance. It is an awesomeee OS. Thank you sooo much. Plz continue doing it

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Monica

@_Monu_

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

awesome end

loved their convo in girl's locker room

i was laughing at swayam

"the rules cn go 2 hell 4 once Im going in"...lol

awesome dialogue..!!..loved it!!

so finally she told..that is matter 2 her

"since when?" "since forever"...

wwwoooww !!! loved it!!

really great work khushi!!

keep it up

love yaaa

mmmuuaahh

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684730

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

hii khushi am sorry but in the future i will not be able to comment or like as i will be deactive for a month but please send me pmx as soon as i give my exams and get tym i will like and comment on ur FF's and all

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Ritu

@.Comics_Music.

IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 12 years ago

Awesome OS...loved all the three parts!!!

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Surbhi

@surbhi_d3

IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

i just read the second part and it was too good!

very well penned..!

you have projected SwaRon very well, the way they are..

and i hope something progressive happens after i complete reading the 3rd part..

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