My First OS- The Office Party!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
πŸ˜‰Hi forum members Sanchia here ( 14 years old) πŸ˜›
This is my 1st OS and i hope you like it.. Please do not copy this into any other site as i have put in alot of effort and if you dont like it please do not post rude comments πŸ˜Š

One afternoon in RM
(ASR talking to Mr Desai with his  bluetooth walking left and right in his bedroom )
ASR: Oh yes Mr Desai, I hope you received my invitation.. So see you tonight
(He goes into the living-room. Nani,Anjali and Mami are sitting)
Nani: Chote, aaj rath ki thaiyaariyaan ho gayi??
ASR: Haan nani , Akash party venue par gaya hai arrangements dekhne
Nani: Tk.. apne Khushi bitiya ko dekha hai??
ASR: Jee nani woh kamre main hai
Anjali: Toh aap unhe saath me le jaa rahe hai na??
ASR: Oh no!! di.. main use kaise leh jaa saktha hoon.. yeh meri office ki party hain.. (hottie getting angry πŸ˜‘)
Mami: Waise bhi woh phatti sadi waha jayeke ka karegi??🀒 
Anjali: Lekin chote tum dono ki abhi abhi shaadi huyi hai.. Aise unhe akheli chodna theek nahi lagtha..😊
ASR: Tk di.. main usse abhi jaa ke bathatha hoon

In their bedroom
(Khushi is busy watchin TV and eatin jalebi's πŸ˜†)
ASR enters
ASR:khushi tum aaj mere saath party main chal rahi ho
Khushi: Aapse kisne kaha?? Humse pooche bina apne khudh hi faisla kiya??
ASR:Shutup Khushi Kumari Gupta
Khushi: Singh Raizada!!!! (showin her mangalsutra πŸ˜†)
ASR: Whatver, Di chahti hai ke tum mere saath party main chalo
Khushi : Bilkul bhi nahi , hum aise angrezi part main bilkul nahi jaane wale 
ASR: Tum chal rahi ho and thats final.. Nahi tho..😑
Khushi: Nahi tho kya 😑?? aap hamari jeeji ki shaadi thodenge??
ASR: ya right.. Ab tho tumhe patha hai nah ki main kya kya kar saktha hoon
Khushi: Tk.. Aapko dhamki dene ki koi zarurat nahi aur haan hum tho salwar suit hi pehnenge
ASR: Tum kuch bhi pehno, Lekin pichle baar ki tarah lassi aur tumhari jalebi leke math aana.. Ab tho humari shaddi ho chuki hain.. Mere clients ke saamne meri image karaab ho jayegi..
(Khushi gets very angry 😑 πŸ˜‘, offs the TV, stops eatin jalebis)
Khushi: Accha 😑?? Lekin us din tho sab khush the.. Meri wajah se aapki woh Murghe ke poonch ki party main maza aaya πŸ˜† πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜ƒ
ASR: What the 😑.. tumhara mathlab cocktail party?
Khushi: haan wahi "KAAKTAIL party"πŸ˜‰
ASR: Watever lekin aaj koi thamasha math karna aur haan dance karne ki sochna bhi math!!
Khushi: Nahi hume naachna bahuth pasand hai hum zaroor nachenge..
ASR: Shutup Khushi tum aisa kuch bhi nahi karogi.. chup chaap wahi karo jo main kehth ahoon.. nahi tho..
Khushi: Haan haan hume patha hai.. Aap hume dhamki denge ki aap hamari jeeji ki shaadi thodenge.. Tk hum jaake kapde press kar wathe hain

In the Evening
(ASR is outside the room waiting for Khushi)
ASR: Khushi jaldi karo, we are getting late
Khushi: ek minute arnavji, humare jhumke nahi mil rahe hain
ASR: jadi karo DAMMIT!!
Khushi : woh hamare jhumke table ke neeche gir gaye hain aur hum usse nahi nikhaal sakthe
ASR: Toh koi aur earings pehno.. Jaldi karo!!
Khushi:Nahi.. hum wahi pehnege!!
(ASR enters the room and sees Khushi bending under the table trying to reach out for her jhumke)
Khushi: Yaaayyy!!! mil gaye
ASR: Ab jaldi pehno.. nahi tho  hum late ho jayenge!! pehle se hum 1 min late hain!!
Khushi : Mr Raizada abhi to sirf ek hi minute late hoi gaye hain nah! ek hi minute ki tho baath hai 
ASR:Mera har ek minute khimthi hain.. Tum mera wakth barbaad kar rahi ho!!
(khushi's earing gets stuck in her hair and she is unable to wear it properly.. The impatient ASR gets close to her and helps her to put it on)
Khushi is shivering and stammering: Aaarrrnaav ji huuumm kkkaar lenge!
(Both of them are lost in each others eyes and in the background RABBA VE is playing) πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³
Suddenly Akash enters the room and interrupts
Akash: Bhai, aap dono ready hai?? Gaadi bahar wait kar rahi hai.. Oh sorry shayad maine disturb kiya (laughin to himself)
ASR: nahi aisa kuch nahi hain.. chalo chalth hain.. 
Khushi: Chaliye..

At the party... (to be continued)

OK guys there will be a next part only if i get 100 likes and comments on this one.. and i will make the next part very romantic.. Im too small for my age  to write all this romantic stuff but its all about ARSHI so no problem πŸ˜† Please do send a buddy request so when i make a second part i can pm you about it.. Your comments and likes mean alot to me as i want to grow up and become a journalistπŸ˜† so got to learn to write nah  πŸ˜† !! πŸ˜Š.. Hope you all like it!! πŸ˜Š

Luv u all

Sanchia πŸ˜ƒ

 Part 2 is here  πŸ˜†

Part 3 is hereπŸ˜†

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sanchi333 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks alot.. Your commen means alot to me πŸ˜Š
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Posted: 12 years ago
How cute! Do continue! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
@ arch_nat1112  Thanks alot πŸ˜Š 

And so many views and no comments and likes πŸ˜­ is it that bad?? 
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shaaranya thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
very nice do continue soon!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
@shaaranya: Thankyou πŸ˜Š and yes i will but maybe next week after my exams are over πŸ˜›
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Posted: 12 years ago
LOVED your idea!
Do continue!
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey its v nice , do pm me when u post the next part πŸ˜Š
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey yaa.plz translate it to english.plz
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Posted: 12 years ago
very sweet dear...
please continue
kudos 4 writing such a good story in first attempt only😊


thanks 4 the pm darling