MAAN EK MRIT INSAN-UPDATED TEASER PG 16 - Page 2

prologue
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part 1
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so its Geet's reincarnation...
and Maan is a what?
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part 2
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PART-3


Danish had strictly instructed Panchi to keep Geet always happy & warned to make her be in the reality only.Geet was feeling depressed while Panchi & Misha was busy shopping for the marraige.But Geet was still immersed in her own thoughts thinking abt the strange dreams of someone screaming for help & in the burning house.But due to Danish's medicines she was having peaceful sleep & those nightmares had stopped to come.Panchi was still worried abt her little sister but Geet didn't showed any depression in front of her parents.Geet was still immersed in her own thought sitting beside the window sipping her hot chocolate & seeing simply towards nature outside the window.When she was seeing towards the nature then she felt some change in the ground.A muscular body is moving on the ground who was glaring at her like he's going to eat her alive if she went in front of her.Geet saw the man intently who was seeing her intently as if he was going to get an alarm tone from her.Geet saw him innocently & noticed that he was the most handsome guy in the whole world.Geet was seeing him curiously then she noticed that he had sky blue eyes.She blinked & saw his eyes not going to believe what she had seen & saw those eyes which had changed to chocolate brown eyes.He had a very handsome face,chocolate brown eyes,exact M shaped pink lips,long nose & stubble.That man was 21 aged man & the chocolate brown eyes which was stirring in emotions.This man was attracted to Geet's beauty which was the epitome of beauty & an compare to angel.Geet saw the man intently who was standing there glaring at her.She didn't like a man glaring at her since half an hour & said angrily,"Kaun hai wahan?Who's that?"And she turned to call her sister but he was gone from there.Geet was bewildered that he wasn't there & her heart had something change when she saw those chocolate brown eyes.Geet gave up thinking abt that guy & once again immersed in her thoughts.But here that man hadn't went from there just had hid behind a tree & when she became unaware of his presence he once again stalked her.This was Maan Singh Khurana who had first time become clean bowled  in 110 yrs to the beauty of Geet but moreover that face which had his beloved face.This Geet was like his beloved Geet in the structure but he had a pain in his eyes which was that they can't meet each other.Maan still observed Geet filling her in his eyes who was epitome of beauty just like his beloved who died before 110yrs ago.


While Maan was observing her then someone called her from behind,"Geet."Maan repeated the words smiling,"Geet,so her name is Geet."But he was soulless person then why his heart is rejoicing,he touched his left chest.He felt that it is beating rapidly.Then he saw towards window but Geet had gone from there.He was disappointed & walked towards his car which stood in the corner of the road.He hid his face from his jacket & went to his car.Geet had came back & noticed that the same who was stalking her was talking his car & noted the number immediately in the notepad.Then Geet went inside taking the notepad inside.Maan drove to khurana mansion becoz the haunted house has changed into khurana mansion.He entered KM while his servant took his long cloak from him & he ran to his room & opened his wardrobe & took a designed box which was made of wooden & opened it.There stood a photo,Maan took it & saw that photo & said seeing the photo,"Geet woh tumhari tarah hi dikthi hai aur uska naam bhi Geet hi hai.Kya tumhari bhavishya vani sach hogi.Kya tumhi ho jisne uske ander janam liya hai???Bolona Geet..."On that time the wind blews inside his room & the photo slips from his hand & lands on the fire.Maan takes the photo immediately & try to off the ignited fire to photo.But the photo caught the fire & it becomes ashes in front of him.Maan was shocked to see that his last presentation of his beloved also wears off.Maan feels seeing the nature's sign that he have to forget his beloved that's becoz she's not alive makes his eyes welled up & blood pours down from his eyes.



Here Panchi can't see the silence of Geet plans to take her & Misha to the trekking of the biggest mountain of dehradun.Geet refuses as she is afraid of heights but Panchi insists.Then Geet went to the place where she never went in 12yrs of their long residents person.Geet was always afraid of heights so she would stay with her parents & Panchi & Misha would go for trekking.But this time Geet went not having any idea what's going to happen there.Danish had also came there with them & had noticed that Geet was always depressed.When Geet came to the place of the counter to catch the trolley then she had a vision.That vision showed that two children is playing & a boy had scratched a heart shape on the wooden seat writing their names.Geet got the vision & said immediately to her sisters & bother-in-law,"I've been here before..."Panchi,Misha & Danish listened her with awe.Geet said immediately seeing towards the mountain,"Don't go today,today will be avalanche fallen & we'll be struck.Geet walked to the people & said to them not to go there or else their life will be danger but they didn't listen to her & smirked sarcastically & went for trekking.Geet became stubborn when Misha became stubborn of going for trekking thinking that Geet's blabbering.But when they were witnessing the mountain then a series of snow fell downwards making the travel rooted to the spot with fear.Danish was amazed with Geet's prediction but came back to home before the people say thanks to her.
Edited by geetsrir.maan - 12 years ago

I read all 3 parts of this FF...

and I love u have written this Maaneet FF and place is Dehra Dun...I am from Dehra Dun...because of PKEK serial Dehra Dun has become place of Vampires...but I don't mind if that is written on Maan-Geet...😆

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part 3
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so Maan has seen Geet...
what and how does he know about the prophecy?
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PART-4

Danish,Panchi,Misha & Geet reached home.Danish dragged Geet immediately when she got off the car & took her to her room while Panchi & Misha followed him immediately.Danish entered her room with Geet while Misha & Panchi also entered & Danish locked the door.Danish turned to Geet & asked giving a stern look,"Geet,tumhe kaise pata chala ki woh pahad ki barf girne wali hai?"Geet was searching the answer for this question herself.Geet said bewildered,"Jiju,mujhe pata nahin ki mujhe kya hogaya tha,I went to trance & felt that some powers has aroused inside me & told them.But before I would predict I got a vision jiju."Danish asked,"Kaisa vision???"Geet said breathleesly,"Meine do das saal ke bachchon ko dekha,ek ladka aur ek ladki.Aur woh ladka wahan padi seat mein scratch kar raha tha apne knife se.Aur us ladka ne ek heart shape scratch kiya tha aur usme do alphabets likha tha english mein...M aur G.Mujhe kuch samajh mein nahi aaya.Us choti si bachchi ne us ladka ko Maan kehkar bulaya tha..."Danish saw her face which has innocence.Panchi asked worriedly,"Kya baat hai Danish koi serious baat tho nahi???"Danish said calmly,"Ab isse hypnotize karna zaroori ho gaya hai Panchi.Lekin mujhe lagtha hai ki hume shaadi ke baat sochna hoga iske baare mein.Ab tumhi ne to kaha tha ki mom aur dad ko hum pareshan nahi karsakthe."Panchi said nodding,"Thik hai Danish hum mom aur dad ko shaadi ke baat iske baare mein batate hain."Danish said giving the tablet to Geet,"Geet,tum is davayi ko lelo aur so javo.This tablet is for the reamless sleep.You'll feel better."Geet took the tablet & she slept.Danish,Panchi & Misha came outside the room worriedly.Panchi asked curiously,"In sab ka kya matlab hai Danish,Geet ko aise darawana sapna aana aur uske bad woh prediction...am just confused."Danish didn't say anything but he was getting doubtful that this is the case of reincarnation but he had some doubts so he went to the ancient library from where he could get the answers.



Danish searched the topic for he was searching in the ancient library which was famous for dharma shastras,vedas,upanishads.Danish took a book called Upanishad which was translated by Adi shankaracharya.It was in sankrit language & Danish was expert in sanskrit he got the book useful to him.Going through in the book,he came to a topic called lady astrolgers who called themselves as gargayi & maitri.When he started reading their story then he came to know that there was a famous lady astrologer who had the knowledge of predicting the past,presen & future also.It also showed the ancestral chart & showed who are the descendents.Previously there was a clan which despised these community & was always against them.And that clan's name was aryans who argued that the woman are confined to only kitchen not for the other business.Then only a woman who was powerful who had blessings of lord shankara has cursed the families that their clans will be always corrupted with the evil people & they become good for nothing men.This curse was powerful for many centuries.Both the clan had become deadly enemies from centuries but came a girl who had hazel brown eyes,long nose,pink coloured lips & had a warmth.That girl was the epitome of the beauty,the clan had expected her to be the biggest astrologer of the whole world & she became also.But she lost her heart to the enemy clan's son who had chocolate brown eyes,long nose,exact 'M' shaped pink lips.The two clan's hatred won & the girl was burnt alive in the house.But the girl had promised to her lover that she will come once again for him & had died on his lap after saving him.That man was made to take a glass of juice which had the most dangerous poison but was a slow poison.This was given by the rivals of the same clan & was against of the man of becoming the head of the clan after his father.



Danish read the whole story & kept it aside & he remembered his teacher's words who had predicted that he's gonna get an important destiny which had so many problems but you'll win in that in the end.Now he remembered that how he met  Panchi & how he came across the three sister who never leave beside themselves when they are in trouble or problems.Danish took a deep breath & decided to tell that what is the problem in Geet's case to Panchi.


Precap-Maan & Geet meet in their new house's grihapravesh.
Edited by geetsrir.maan - 12 years ago

PART-5


Danish decided to hypnotise Geet after reading the book.He had doubt that the famous astrologer's descended is Geet.But before that he went to meet his guru.Danish was not only an expert psychiartist but also the expert astrologer but the way Geet had predicted which can't be done by any other person made him an objective cast to him.Geet was having strange dreams & with that she was predicting the future.This made Danish to go to his guru who was expert in these type of cases.Danish took the leave from library & went to his teacher who had taught him the ancient culture of our India.Here Mohinder insisted his three angels to get ready for Khurana's party while the three gilrs opposed it.Misha said frowning,"Papa,mujhe yeh party pasand nahi aur agar aapko mujhe leke jaana hai toh mein aise hi aaungi."She wore jeans & t-shirt & was sitting at her study table.Mohinder said sternly to Rano,"Rano,is bandar ko samjhao ki wahan usse dekhne ke liye ladke aa rahe hain."Misha's eyes popped up with shock,"Ladke wale...abhi itni jaldi kyun hai meri shaadi ko...abhi is chidiya ki shaadi ke baare mein toh sochiye ya phir,Geet ki...Mujhe dono jiju miljaayenge ekhi mandap mein..."Mohinder said finally,"Zyada behes mat kar aur tayyar ho jao koi dhang ke kapde pehn kar..."On that time Panchi wore a sari & entered Misha's room...While Rano tried to convince Misha & said,"Dekho Panchi kaisi tayyar hui hai sari pehnke...tum bhi pehno naa...sari..."Misha said angrily,"Sari...!No way,mein yeh 9 yards nahi pehne waali..."Geet saw her argument silently & whisperd to her mom,"Mom aap chinta mat kijiye,mein isse sari pehna kar neeche laungi..."


Rano nodded & she took Mohinder with her.Misha saw Geet doubtfully & asked,"Tumne aisa kya kehdiya ki mom aur dad itni aasaani se chale gaye bahar...?"Geet held the antenna of cockroch & said,"Ab sari pehno ya phir,,,,,,,,,,isse ulajhlo..."Misha was afraid of cockroch & she wore the sari immediately & ran outside with fear.Mohinder & Rano smiled mischievously at Misha & Misha said frowning,"Hasso aur zor se hasso...Lekin mein bhi aapki beti hoon...Geet ko sabak nahi sikhaaya toh mera naam bhi Misha nahi..."Handa family sat in their car & drove towards the Khurana mansion.Misha asked curiously,"Waise uska naam kya hai?"Mohinder answered while driving,"Kabir Singh Rathod...!"Misha's eyes popped up & asked,"Dad don't tell me that you are trying to rope me up to my childhood friend..."Mohinder chuckled & fell silent.Misha started her tantrums..."Dad woh mujhse pyaar nahi kartha...woh sirf T se pyaar kartha hai..."Mohinder was lossing confidence on Kabir & started thinking,"Lekin usne toh kaha ki woh Misha se pyaar kartha hai...Yaar yeh kya horaha hai...Mein is Kabir par nazar rakhni hogi...!"Then he drove towards the outskirts of the Dehra Dun while Panchi asked curiously,"Dad hum is taraf kyun jaa rahe hai..."Mohinder answered,"Are haan bete...yeh Khuranas ki ghar toh woh haunted house thi na woh ahi.Aaj puja ho rahi hai aur uske baad party bhi.Hum party ke liye jaa rahen hai kyunki puja keliye toh aap teeno availbale nahi the na isiliye..."Geet was immersed in her own thoughts & didn't gave any attention but one shout of Panchi & Misha made her come out of her thoughts.Mohinder jerked the car to sideways with panic & asked the both,"Kya baat hai...aap dono kyun chilla rahe ho..."Panchi & Misha saw each other nervously...Geet saw them both curiously.Then Panchi stammered,"Woh...mein...haan,mujhe ek patient ko dekhna tha aaj aur uski appointment bhool gayi aur kya mein Geet ko leke jao yahan se mujhe kuch assistence chahiye..."Rano said softly,"Lekin beta...agar hum akele Misha ko le jao toh wahan poochenge ne ki humaare don bachche kaha hai?"Panchi said firmly,"Mom,aap bhool rahi hai ki mein ek doctor hoon...Aur waise bhi aap hume isiliye leke jaa rahe haina taaki Misha aur Kabir dono akele mile...Toh aap Misha ko leke jaiye na...Mein Danish ko phone karthi hoon aur kehti hoon ki woh mujhe leke jaiye mera matlab hai hum dono ko leke jaiye..."


Precap-Maan aur Geet both meet in hospital.
Edited by geetsrir.maan - 12 years ago

Really it caught my attention ...nice plot..please continue

part 4
nice part...
Geet forsees things?

part 5
wow so Geet is an astrologer...
cant wait for Maan and Geet to meet...
cont soon...