MAAN EK MRIT INSAN-UPDATED TEASER PG 16

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PROLOGUE

                          A man was lying exhausted & half burnt & his eyes fell upon the half burnt house which has engulfed the life of his beloved Geet.Geet,when the name came on his lips always then he felt a peace in mind.But now it has turned into sorrow & agony losing her.He closed his eyes & said painfully,"Geet."And he had rememnered the previous events.Geet was screaming for help trapped in the burning house & when the situation became out of control then she had decided to sacrifice her life in return of her beloved Maan's life.When Maan jumped inside the house to save Geet then she had pushed him forcefully to safer side & has saved his life sacrificing herself.Maan opened his eyes & felt 2 bats flutter past him & turned to a man & woman.The man & woman had sky blue eyes & the man bent to Maan's neck & bit him immediately.Maan felt that his venom is coursing in his body with pain & he closed his eyes fainting immediately.

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INDEX


PART 1-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2860624

PART 2-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2860624?pn=2

PART 3-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2860624?pn=3

PART 4-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2860624?pn=3

PART 5-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2860624?pn=4

PART 6-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2860624?pn=4

PART 7-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2860624?pn=5

PART 8-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2860624?pn=6

PART 9-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2860624?pn=8

PART 10-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2860624?pn=10

PART 11-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2860624?pn=12

PART 12-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2860624?pn=14


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PART-1


                           A girl is screaming trapped in the burning house & saw a man jumping to save her & a log fell upon his head & he was trapped because of the weight of log.That girl was trying to scream in the dream but couldn't becoz the voice didn't came.Then another log fell upon her & she was burnt alive becoz that log had caught fire.Then a girl woke with a jerk because her sister Misha has poked her continously.The girl had hazel eyes,long nose,baby pink lips & was the very pretty girl.But now her beautiful face had turned into sweaty becoz of the dream.Misha saw her younger sister concernedly & said keeping her hand on that girl's head,"Oye,phirse woh darawana sapna dekha kya???"That girl nodded meekly.Misha gave some water to drink & she took it & drank it.Misha said worriedly,"Geet,aaj mat roko mujhe,mein papa ko is baare mein sab bata doongi."Geet was horrified & said,"Nahi Misha,papa toh pareshan ho jayenge."Misha insisted,"To phir mein mamma ko bolungi."Geet nodded no vigorously."Are yaar,pichle 10 saalon se dekh rahi hoon tumhe jabse hum dehra dun shift huyen hain.Tumne kabhi is jagah ke bare mein pata hi nahin tha phir bhi tumhe is jagah ki kona kona pata hai,kaise???Aur uparse yeh darawana sapna bhi.Mein aaj mamma ko bol kar rahungi."Geet said nodding no,"Nahi Misha,mamma aur papa toh Panchi ki shaadi mein busy hai,aur tu yeh sab kehke pareshan korogi kya unhe."Misha said thinking,"Thik he abhi keliye mein chod raha hoon tumhe par shaadi ke baath tumhi mamma aur papa ko batayegi samjhi?"Geet nodded politely.Misha said,"Chalo fresh hojao,aur Danish jiju aarahen hain,unse toh consult kaho is sapnon ke baare mein.Kya pata koi raasta mil jaye tumhe as he's a psychiartist."Geet nodded & went to washroom taking her clothes & towels.


                                      So this Geet handa,who's most beautiful girl in the whole world.She has everything in her life.Good family,lovable parents & sisters but a small past which in these days not in the gossip.Geet Handa is the step-sister of Misha & Panchi but they never saw her like that.They both love her like their own sister.One who saw Geet likes her from their first sight.She's 21yrs old handling the Handa tea estates in Dehra Dun helping her father in the business.Misha is a computer engineer & had opened a IT office of her won without any dad's help,very mischievous & her mother Rano always run away for any other thing.Panchi who is a gynacologist loved Danish who is a psychiartist & now she's going to marry him.As mentioned before Geet's a step-sister to them but they never saw her like that before or now also.Geet's father Mohinder Handa had done a biggest mistake which was result Geet before marriage.But Rano was generous & understood his husband's mistake & opened her arms to Geet & her family.She also loves their three daughters unconditionally.


                                           Here in the lonely forests of Dehra Dun,there stood a big mansion which was protected by sunlight & had stood between dense forests of Dehra Dun.That mansion always gave a haunted scene as there was strange voices of someone screaming for help.But no one didn't dare to enter the house as it was so haunted.Geet had tried to enter the mansion & had found unconscious when she was 12yrs old accidentally.But some magnetic pull was always made Geet to attract to that house.Sometimes Geet would talk to the mansion as if someone is there to talking with her.She always called that person as Maan,but when Misha saw the person then he would vanish.Misha was so worried about her health seeing bad nightmares & talking to thin air.And today that another nightmare Geet saw which made Misha worried.Misha always protective to her sister,she would never made a man come near her having wrong intentions.But when she heard her sister talking to that person whose name is Man then she was surprised.She would always tease her that a handsome ghost is attracted towards you to make Geet laugh heartily.But now this mansion has been occupied by Khurana's who are having constructions business.They said to the society that he had problems in Mumbai that's why they have to change their residence to here.What sinister was that they chose the most haunted house of dehradun.Geet's father was a bit feeling awkward when Khurana came to give invite for the party & puja of their new house's grihapravesh.Becoz Khurana had seen Geet there & felt awkward & had went from there not recieving their hospitality.

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Posted: 12 years ago
too good yaar...
the prologue and the first part is very interesting...
maan as a vampire and geet as mortal...too good

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Posted: 12 years ago
aww heey u have started a new ff,,,,,,,,,,,
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& great prologue...
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PART-2


Geet & Misha went to Danish's clinic with appointment.Danish was surprised hearing his sister-in-laws in working hours.Danish gave an appointment to them & they went to meet him in his clinic not informing their parents.Danish saw his two sister-in-laws entering his cabin & he greeted them.First Misha was hesitant & nudged to Geet to explain but Geet was also hesitant & was also having eye-fights between them.Danish said seeing their expression with amusement,"Aap dono aankhon mein ladna band karange aur mujhe bataayenge ki baat kya hai?"Misha said confidently,"Doctor,hum dono yahan aapki saaliyaan banke nahin aaye hai.Geet ko kuch problem hui thi isiliye yahan aaye hain."Danish was now worried & asked,"Kya problem hai,mein Panchi ko inform karoon?"Geet said immediately,"Nahi nahi,pls aisa mat kijiye di khamakha pareshan hojengi."Someone said from behind,"Pareshan toh hongi aur jab woh apne jiju se nahi ek doctor se milne aarahi hongi tab."Both turned & saw & was shock while Panchi had sat frowning.Panchi asked with concern,"Kya baat hai Geet tum ek psychiartist se milne aayi hoon.Kya baat hai wahi daraawana sapna?"Geet was surprised & thought,"How would di know??"And she saw towards Misha frowning.Misha closed her eyes with guilt but Geet glared at her."Danish was confused & asked,"Tum teeno batayenge ki kya baat hai."Panchi sat beside Geet & said,"danish,geet ko pichale baarah saalon se kuch daraawne sapne aarahe hein.Aur yeh buddhu ladki mujhe kal bataya."Gesturing towards Misha angrily.Misha said angrily,"Meine kya kiya ab Geet ne har baar mana kar rahi thi..."And they started quarelling accusing each other & Danish shouted,"Enough Panchi,kabhi kabhi tum bachchon ki tarah behave karthi ho.Yeh clinic he mera,aur mere liye mere aur bhi patients intezaar kar rahen hai."Panchi apologised & asked keeping her hand on her shoulder,"Geet tum Danish ko apne bimaari ke baare mein batavo hum dono baahar intezaar karthe hain tumhare liye."Geet nodded while Panchi & Misha exited.Danish kept a glass of water in front of her & said,"Ye lo pee lo,you will feel better."Geet took the glass & gulped down some water & kept it back feeling calm.Danish said sweetly,"Ab batavo ki tumhe kis tarah ke darawne sapne aati hain."Geet started to explain everything & Danish noted everything in his notepad.


After half an hour,Geet came outside feeling so calm in her face.Then Danish called Panchi.Panchi entered & asked worriedly,"Kya baat hain  Danish koi serious baat to nahin?"Danish smiled at her concern & said,"Kuch serious baat toh nahin,Geet jis tarike se sapna dekh rahi hai usse detail mein janane ke liye usse hypnotise karna padega.Philhaal mein abhi keliye usse kuch medicine likhke detha hoon usse kaho ki correct time pe le."Panchi nodded & took the prescirption & requested,"Please Maamma aur papa ko mat bathana,kyunki woh pareshan hojayenge."Danish smiled & nodded.Panchi was abt to go from there but Danish held her hand & said,"Itni jaldi bhi kya hai would be Mrs.Singh."Panchi was embarrassed,"Danish,yeh aapka clinic,don't forget."danish said pulling her & pinning to his hard frame.Panchi was abt to protest but he sealed his lips into hers.Danish pinned her to the wall & kissed her passionately.His hands moved inside her shirt feeling her softness & her hands snaked around his neck.He lifted her slightly & she kept her legs around his waist kissing him passionately.She opened her mouth & his tongue entered to suck the sweet honey of her mouth.Then he left her mouth & bit her shoulder which made her moan loudly.On that time someone cleared their throat & they were disturbed.Panchi came down from his waist while Danish left her immediately & saw who's it.They both are shocked to see their saalis who were giggling to each other.Misha said supressing her giggle,"Jiju,thoda sa sabr rakhiye ek hafthe ke baad apki shaadi honewaali.Waise bhi aapko sharam nahi aati,jab di ko dekhthe hain toh chipak jaathe hai."Panchi said glaring at her,"misha aaj tumhe nahi chodungi."And she chased misha immediately while geet left the clinic with them.

Precap-Maan & Geet meeting.

GUYS BEFORE GHSP ENDED THERE HAD A RUMOUR THAT REINCARNATION TRACK IS GONNA COME BUT THEY DIDN'T FRAME IT.SO AM TRYING THE REINCARNATION TRACK.JUST A CHANGE IS MAAN IS IMMORTAL & GEET AS MORTAL BUT HERE GEET IS REINCARNATED BUT MAAN AS SOULLESS PERSON.pls guys i need ur supports in this ff.

Edited by geetsrir.maan - 12 years ago
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congrats 4 d new ff
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awesome
loved the prologue & part 1&2
waiting for the update
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