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Posted: 12 years ago
SATI"'S FEELINGS FOR SHIV AFTER SHE SAW HIM FOR THE 1ST TIME


the first time i saw u
i kept looking at u
i cudnt help admiring ur beauty
i felt like i was being pulled towards u

even thogh my father was around
and hundreds of people staring
i did not care one bit
it was an exception moment i was sharing

while u were standing and  taking
i felt it was just u and me
i felt like all those words u sed
were only for me

as u were about to leave
i started walking towards u
even though i didnt want to
my legs jsut drew

even though you never looked bak
u never sed a word to me
i still think about u
and ur the only thing i want to see

hope u liked it
do comment
Posted: 12 years ago
ull get a standing ovation for me.. i really like ur poem hope to see more of ur workπŸ˜‰Edited by .Reshama. - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
WOW WOW yaar..Beautiful & so passionate..Thank you friend..You are too good..I could imagine Sati saying those words..😍
Posted: 12 years ago
Beutiful...Keep writing more & thank you for sharing it
Posted: 12 years ago
A big thumps up πŸ‘πŸΌ. Want to see more from u.
Posted: 12 years ago
HEY THANX SOOO MUCH GUYS
ULL R REALLY ENCOURAGING AND MOTIVATING!!!!!
:)
Posted: 12 years ago
aww such a beautiful peice
love it dear
such sweet words and perfect words to express her feelings πŸ‘
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