Posted: 12 years ago
its my first one shot hope u all like it
          starts 4rm naitik on stairs in fri epi
naitik make a plan 2 surprise akshara on valentines day he is not able 2 sleep without akshara so he go on chath(terrace)put their a bed and decorate the whole area with curtains etc...
next morning after pooja naksh along with duggu goes 2 their room.akshara is with dugu and naitik was taking his clothes 4rm cupboard himselfakshara comes and said she does all these work
NAITIK: akshara muje pta hai aap ka saara time duggu k sath nikal jata hai lekin muje bhi thoda time chaye I Miss uπŸ˜”
AKSHARA:naitik ab halat phle jaise nae rahe aap samaj rae heina naitik
both hug (as shown in SBS )
naitik go 2 office and ak is busy with duggu
naitik comes aksh is not in room so he take duggus jhola and shifted it 2 terrace he forgot about the mornings incident
then he go to g3 and said her that he want 2 sleep with aksh and g3 unwantedly agreed πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
akshara comes in room and trying 2 make duggu sleep
Naitik:akshara apni ankein bandh karye aur chalye
Akshara:kaha

naitik:surprise
AKSHARA: naitik yeh kya hai mai bache ko chod kar kaise aaon ap bhi na naitik pta nae kya kya krte rhte hein

naitik:akshara maine yeh kab kaha k aap duggu ko chod k aaiye plz ye mera bhi beta hai muje thodi der k lya de digiye

aksh give baby 2 naitik and naitik take hime 2 chath and play ther with hie 4 some time and then make him sleep in jhola ...
aftersome time aksh come 2 chath naitik take duggu 4rm jhola and give him 2 akshsra and he start crying
AKSHARA:lagta hai papa ka beta bhi mujh se naaraz hai im sorry pretending 2 say sorry 4rm naitik
after some time duggu sleeps
naitik was standing in a corner aksh place him in jhula and go 2 naitik hugging him 4rm behind wearing a red and black saare😳😳
AKSHARA:im soo sorry naitik mai kisi waja se preshan hnis waja se aap pe bhadak gaye
Naitik :its ok akshara aap duggu ko le k neeche chale jaye mai ye saman hata k aata hn
AKSHARA:naitik ye saman q hatein gy dekhein mere paas ab double power hai plzz sorry naitik having tears in eyes
NIitik:akshara dekhe plz royye mat or aap preshan q hein??muje bataye
Naitik:maine apne poore pregnency mai apni saari feelings or experince 1 diary mai likha tha maine socha k app k b.day pe aap ko gift dngi pr woh kho gae
Naitik:(pullingaksh towards him) koi baat nae hai meri pyari valentine mai or aap 1 saath hein muje parhne se zyada maza sunne mai aye ga(in romantic tone)😍
lifting her and taking her towards bed on terrace hes arranged having rosepetals on it
aage PIYA BAWRI...and ur imaginations imagin urself as pregnency track has overπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜³πŸ˜³

do comment and tell me how was thisπŸ€—




Posted: 12 years ago
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=Edited=
Superb attempt!
lovely OS..
tu bhi ss part 2 hai.. awww m missing ss like anything😭😭

Anyways.. nice OS.. keep writing!
Edited by -Stutz- - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
nice attempt maha...keep it up
Posted: 12 years ago
great job maha...😳
love dur os...😳
keep writng ...πŸ˜ƒ
Edited by ammu4u - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
wow kya baat hai maha duggu toh good boy hoga soh gaya aram se jhole mein lolzz awesome OS keep writting more :)))
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by simran_20


nice attempt maha...keep it up

thanks simiran aapiπŸ˜ƒ
Posted: 12 years ago
got smthing 2 read in this boring day..)))
 
good job..))) πŸ‘ 
 
pehli khoshish mein itni os well done...πŸ‘πŸΌ
 
try more..πŸ˜ƒ
 
hps we get sme nice scens in our shw 2
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by pree4ru


wow kya baat hai maha duggu toh good boy hoga soh gaya aram se jhole mein lolzz awesome OS keep writting more :)))

thanks pree han bohat acha bacha hai apne papa pe gya haiπŸ˜† and thanksπŸ˜ƒ
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by i4naksh


got smthing 2 read in this boring day..)))
 
good job..))) πŸ‘ 
 
pehli khoshish mein itni os well done...πŸ‘πŸΌ
 
try more..πŸ˜ƒ
 
hps we get sme nice scens in our shw 2

thanks aasha aap bhi toh kardein apni ff update aankhein taras gein parhne ko😳😳
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by mahaayub8



thanks aasha aap bhi toh kardein apni ff update aankhein taras gein parhne ko😳😳
i knw but hd some personal problems anyway i m trying my best..))

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