Deceived Link to thread 2 p.1 - Page 10

Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by music_girl


greedy geet ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰

I know isn't she
Posted: 12 years ago
nice part.. update soon asap.. as need to c who is Mr. Khurana..
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by mel420



Geet is 18 in the diary Maneet is at the moment 10. Geet's life got upside down 12 years back. Love the pics so sweet.
What did Maan do that you hate him did Geet tell you something๐Ÿ˜†
nah, Geet said that she'll only tell Mel and mel is naughty, she wont update soon ๐Ÿ˜ญ
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by mel420



Just wait and everything will get clear
waiting for the update ๐Ÿ˜‰
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by music_girl


nah, Geet said that she'll only tell Mel and mel is naughty, she wont update soon ๐Ÿ˜ญ

Mel will update only for you so don't cry music girl
Edited by mel420 - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago

Part 4

Diary

The bell rang I walked as fast as I could to Meera.

Meer: And Geet how did it go.

G: Oh Meer I made a complete fool out of my self. It's like I can't think when he is around.

Meer:I didn't think you did that bad. She pointed with her eyes to Maan who was coming our way.

G: Oh no Meer let's get out of her. But it was too late Maan was standing behind us.

M: Hey guys going out for lunch. Mind if I join.

Meer:No of course  ot Maan that would be great.

We went to lunch room. Emma was also there.

E:Hi Meer. Hey Sis. Hi Good looking she said to Maan and hit him on his arm.

M:ouch DAHM you hit harder then a guy.

E:OH you are flattering me she said blushing while she hit Maan again on his arm.

                                      Geet's monologue

Was Emma blushing. No way! I looked at Meera. Meer leaned over and whispered in my ear OMG your weird sister knows to blush. I hit Meera on her arm.

M:OMG Geet now you have started hitting too. Meer I am leaving before Emma breaks my arm and think you should leave to before Geet breaks yours.Maan said laughing.

E: OH Maan you are so funny and again Maan hit him on his arm.

M:Okey enough I am leaving I need my arm.

                        Geet's monologue

Maan stood up to leave. I don't know what got in to me. I grabbed Maan's arm. I didn't want him to leave.Gosh I always do stupid things around him.

G:Maan don't leave. You haven't even eaten yet and Emma won't hit you again.

M:Hmm. Maan sat down starring at Geet.

E:I am sorry Maan.I didn't know it really hurt you.

M:Don't worry Em one sweet look of Geet and all my pain disappears.

                               Geet's Monologue

I couldn't believe what Maan said gosh it felt magical. I was totally lost them Emma's what brought me back to reality.

E: WHAT!!

M: What, what Emma?

E: What did you just say.

M: that it is okey.

E:After that.

M:Nothing.

E:No you liar you said one sweet look of Geet and all my pain disappears.

M: Nope I did not say that. You are hearing stuff, right Geet. Maan winked at Geet which no one except Geet saw.

                         Geet's Monologue

Maan looked so sweetly at me I couldn't help but nod. Oh yes Geet Handa was falling really badly for the MSK Charm.

E:Geet how can you agree with him I am telling I am not hearing stuff.Tell them Meer. Meera start laughing.

Meer:Sorry didn't hear anything and she winked at Maan.

E: Fine forget it maybe I am here stuff.Anyway Maan what kind of girls do you like?

M: To start with Girls who do not hit. I like sweet girls. He said while he was looking at Geet. Geet blushed and looked down to the table.

E:I see. You know Maan you are right girls should not hit.It's bad but you know Geet told me that you should always hit guys. Yep that's what she told me thanks for opening my eyes.

G: Oh zip it drama queen.Thanks for opening my eyes Maan she mimicked Emma. I never told you that.You liar.

Maan Couldn't stop laughing, between his laugh he manged to say: Come on Geet don't scream at that sweet girl. She is right you know. Come on look how agressiv you are and she

Before he could say anything else Geet interrupt him.

G: Oh so I am aggressive. Oh I will show you what aggressive means.She grabbed her purse but before she could do something Maan stood up and started to run.

Geet also stood up and start running behind Maan with her purse trying to hit him๐Ÿ˜†.

The ran like little kids through to entire Lunchroom making there way oudside. Finally outside Maan put his arms around Geet and hugged her. Geet calmed down. She looked at Maan shocked by his actions. Maan smirked

M: Where you not supposed to hit me.

G: Maan your horrible. Geet got out of his hug. Maan took her hand in his.

M: Geet can't we go somewhere else. just the two of else without your hitting sister๐Ÿ˜†.

G: Hmm I don't no Maan I mean if we go alone who will be there to protect me from  your boring talks and bad humor.

M: Hello I am funny charming and really interesting.

G:Of course Maan Geet said while rolling her eyes.

M: Come on geet I am trying her to ask you out for a date and your are just making it diffucult for.

Whoops I shouldn't have said that out loud.Maan thought.

                              Geet's monologue

I am dreaming did he first hugged me and now he is asking me on a date. OMG Geet this can't be true you must be dreaming.

Geet pinched herself to know or she was dreaming or not.

G: Ouch. No definitely real

M: Geet why are you pinching your self and what is definitely real.

G: Nothing Maan I would love to go on a date with you.

M: Ahh I see so you where checking or it was real or a dream. Why do you dream about me. Maan smirked wail saying it.

Geet was blushing like never before.

G: ehh wo ehh

Maan did his entire best not to laugh out loud.

M: Yes Geet tell me. I am waiting

G: No Shut up Maan or else I will take my yes back.

M: Alright calm down. Come lets go inside.

Maan and Geet walked back inside hand in hand. Maan and Geet forgot that they where still holding hands.

Meer: Where were you guys for so long. And why are you guys holding hands.

G: wo Meer actually wo

M: Geet was trying to hit me I escaped with a lot of difficulty.So I hold her hand so that she won hit me again. You know to be on the safer side You've got a dangers friend yaar Meer.

Geet let go of Maan's hand. She pointed her finger towords him.

G: YOU

M: See look at her anger. I am leaving Meer before my life is at risk again. Bye guyz

Before leaving Maan turned around and winked at Geet.

Meer: Bye Maan

G: Ehh that jerk,

Meer: what where guys doing Geet

G: Wo where is Emma.

Meer: She left she said she had some important things to do.

G: Hmm Maybe I should leave to. Mom Evelien hates it when I am not with Emma. I don't want her to get angry.

Meer:Alright let's go.

                                    Back to the present

Maneet Maneet.

M: Oh gosh yeh Ramu kaka he always comes on the wrong time.

Maneet hid the dairy papers.

M: Yes ramu kaka.

R.K: Geet told you have to eat your fruit bowl.

M: Alright I will eat it you can go.

R.K:No Geet said I have to see with my own eyes that you eat the bowl.

M: Fine.

2 minutes later

G: Hi Maneet

M: Mom you're home early.

G: yeh was missing you badly.

M: hmm

G: why weren't you missing me

M: No Mom let's play

                               Maneet's monolgue

First that Ramu kaka had to came now even mom is home early ehh no I won't be able to read the diary for a couple of days. have to go tomorrow on a trip I can take the diary with me. I am going to have to wait till Monday, when I am back.

                                     The Monday

Geet was feeling restless Maneet wasn't here either. He would be coming back today. She called up Ramu Kaka.

R.K: Yes Geet didi

G: Ramu Kaka I am really missing Maaneet but I can't pick him up I am got a meeting with some Mr.Khurana.Could you drop Maneet to office.

R.K: Sure didi

G: Thx Ramu Kaka.

Gosh Geet why are you so nervous. It's not like it's Maan who is coming. Geet's phone rang.

G: Yes Abigail

A: Ma'am Mr. Khurana is here. Should I send him in.

G: Yes send him in

When the door opened Geet felt like her breath was stuck. tears wanted to make there way out. But Geet didn't plan to make her tears win, not today.Not when he could move on this easily. She wasted enough years crying over him and thinking about him.

She quickly moved her hand to her arm grabbed her bracelet and put it in her pocket. No he was not allowed to see that she was still wearing the bracelet he gave her. 

She straighten herself up, formed a smile on her lips.

G: Take a seat Mr. Khurana.

I gave a long update so I am expecting long comments๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Part 5:https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2758605&TPN=20

Edited by mel420 - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ its not fair...q akhir q... thora sa aur likh lati...ab wait karna para gaa... ahhh...
Posted: 12 years ago
you're so unfair Miss Mel
very beautiful update dear,
loved it! simply awesome
Emma was funny couldn't help laughing at humourous maan and geet, how could he deceived geet then
waiting for next
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by saharmursleen


๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ its not fair...q akhir q... thora sa aur likh lati...ab wait karna para gaa... ahhh...

Sorry don't cry will try to update as fast as I can
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by music_girl


you're so unfair Miss Mel
very beautiful update dear,
loved it! simply awesome
Emma was funny couldn't help laughing at humourous maan and geet, how could he deceived geet then
waiting for next

Can't help it learnt to be unfair from the best you know a jockey๐Ÿ˜กbut glad you liked it๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Edited by mel420 - 12 years ago

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