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amazing update...

part 2
nice part...
but does Maan really deserves some girl...
cont soon dear...

nice concept 😊plz update 2day 😉

waitng 4r update...

will update tonight...nearly at 10

Originally posted by: tich.1990mg

will update tonight...nearly at 10

1st of all wanted to say sorry,, in previous update i have mention karan's name in maan's gang,, sorry that was my high mistake,, karan is only geet's friend,, and arjun is teh one who was in maan's gang and his brother...

Love for you

part 3...

 

they took the road and the ashram is 20 mins far... but she was no where to seen...maan and gang too enter dhehradun,, and passing by the ashram,,, maan, dev, neha and jay in maan's jeep and other ppls in arjun's car...

 

 

Tak ta tak ta tak, tik thai

Tak ta tak ta tak, mm hm

San sanana nan, san sanana nan - 2

Tak ta tak ta tak, tik thai

Tak ta tak ta tak, tak tak

Tak ta tak ta tak, tik thai, tak tak

 

 

 

maan jeep was ahead of them,, and they heard a sound and he stopped the car,,

neha: ye kis chese ki awaj thi? (who's voice was that)

dev: don't know,,

jay: badhi acchi thi yaar...(it was great yaar) maan came out from the jeep, take off his glasses...

 

 

(San sanana nana, san sanana nan

Jaa jaa re jaa re jaa re, jaa re pawan) - 2

 

they made their way to the backward of the ashram,,, in the mean tim naina, arohi, karan sonali too reach the ashram and walked passed maan and the gang...

 

 

sonali: ye wahi hogi.. (its her)

 

karan: kya yaar chuttiya manae aaye hain but ye ladki to,(what yaar, we are here for our holiday and this girl,) they are rushing and all the gang of maan's comes to the place,,, 

nysha: ye bhoot ki awaj thi kya?(was that a ghost?)

all laughed ,, samir: kisi ladki bhootni ki,,,,, (that will be a lady ghost)

jay: nahi yaar kitni pyari awaj hain chalo na dekhte hain kon hain... (no yaar that was really beautiful, lets see who was that,, ) all made their way to the ashram,,, where there are too many children were standing and in the middle there is a girl clad in a white anarkali suit,,, her dupatta was gone around her shoulder to her waist...

 

 

Mere jaisa dhoondke laa mera sajan

San sanana nana, san sanana nan

Jaa jaa re jaa re jaa re, jaa re pawan

Aisa kahin koi nahin - 2

Aisa ho to shaayad main kar loon milan - 2

Jaa jaa, jaa re pawan, jaa re pawan

San sanana nana, san sanana nan

Jaa jaa re jaa re jaa re, jaa re pawan

 

but they couldn't saw her face as she was so fast in her movement...her hair was in a simple plate,,,

 

 

Aakaash hai koi prem kavi

Main uski likhi kavita

Oh, aakaash hai koi prem kavi

Main uski likhi kavita

Mere jaisa koi nahin aaya jag mein yug beeta

 

she was doing katthak in the beat and slightly manipuri mixed as her facial expression and her hand movement was soft,, but she is fire when the beat changes...

 

Chhoo na sake koi mujhe - 2

Chhoo le to haai lag jaaye aggan - 2

Jaa jaa re jaa, jaa re pawan, jaa re pawan

San sanana nana, san sanana nan

Jaa jaa re jaa re jaa re, jaa re pawan

Yea yea yea yea, yea yea yea yea

 

maan was drown in her milky white skin,, he could saw her eyes, her hazal eyes,,,, her lips was so juicy,, pink lipe were inviting him,, her voice was so powerfull that no one can takes his presence out from there... she dancing in the middle of the children and maan and his gang was little far from them,, but as the song was coming to an end maan was taking one step ahead to the place,,, and so was everyone...

 

Main aap hi apni premika

Main aap hi apni saheli

Haan, main aap hi apni premika

Main aap hi apni saheli

Aur nahin koi apne jaise, bas main ek akeli

Main aaoon to, main jaaoon to - 2

Mujhko dekhe jhuk ke gagan - 2

Jaa jaa, jaa re pawan, jaa re pawan

San sanana nana, san sanana nan

Jaa jaa re jaa re jaa re, jaa re pawan

Mere jaisa dhoondke laa mera sajan

(San sanana nana, san sanana nan

Jaa jaa re jaa re jaa re, jaa re pawan) - 2

 

 

she was lost in her melody she was on fire, the beat the rhythm she took was very powerful and fast,, she has no time to see anyone she was enjoying but a sudden rush gone through her, she met the most desirable pair of eyes in the world,, the eyes of the devil,, MAAN SINGH KHURANA... she was twisting turning her body,, making twirled and beating her ghungroo,, but her eyes were glued on  maan's... but quickly she takes of her eyes from him...but when she stopped her ghungroo breaks and shattered all place,,, she stood in the middle hand hand and was in the air and her head was down,, eyes closed, she was enjoying the movement,, a smile played on her lips when she remember the face of the most handsome guy...the place was very quite fro sometime but then soon the place was echoed by the sound of clapping,, and geet open her eyes and maan saw the face fully,, the angelic face,, she was like a fresh white flower,, as pure as an angel... her scent her smile could melt anyone... geet too saw the face but soon she closed her eyes and turn around and bow herself against everyone...the children were too happy...

 

 

neha : she is beautifull...

 karan(geet's frnd):  ladki hoke ladki ki tarif wah pehli baar dekha koi... (a girl's appreciation by a girl, that's rare)

 

 

neha:acchi cheeso ki tarif neha hamesha karti hain.. (neha always appreciate the good things)

karan: neha? hmm nice name...but dev came there to stopped the convo,,,

dev: lets go,

neha:bhai,,,,  but he take her close to maan..

 

 

maan was staring at geet and geet too was ataring at him but suddenly she fely dizzy and was going down holding her head...maan speed up to take her and before she could touch the the ground karan took her in his arm...

 

 

karan showed maan his hand: back off...

maan stopped mid way and he lift geet in his arm...

naina: kya huya isse?(what happen to her) arohi touched her forehead..

arjun was in the car, he was not feeling to go, now he is feeling bored so he called samir to come

as soon as possible...

maan was looking at geet face which was still smiling...

arohi: fever,,,

karan: aur iss halat me isse dance karne ki kya jarurat thi... (now what was the need to dance in this state?)

one kid: didi ne meri wajah se dance kiya,, aaj mera birthday hain didi ne kaha to maine unse ye gift manga,, k wo dance kare,,, (she dancedbecause of me, today is our bday so I asked her for gift and her dance was the gift)the kid was crying,,

naina: arree baccha rote nahi, koi baat nahi... apki didi ko apko gift dena tha issi liye unhone dance kiya aap kyun roh rahe ho... sshhh rote nahi...  (don't cry baby, ur si wanted to gift u something and that's why she danced for u, why r u crying, don't cry)

geet who was in the arm of karan: usse to rone se mana kar diya but abb mera kya hoga... (she have stop them to cry but what will happen to me now?)

karan: tu thik hain? (r u ok)

geet: hush hush sshhh,, dheere bol warna thappad kahyega,, main thik hu but naina di k samne nahi rahungi...(I m ok but will not infront of her) she made a cute sobbing face...

arohi n sonali knew her too well so they hiding their smile and maan's gang saw the lil convo going on... they looked at geet who was lying in the arms of karan and he is lifting her like a feather...

 

 

dev saw naina's consoling face but there was something else also,, she was concern... naina looked at dev but avoid him and never looked back at him... dev was dumbstuck to see a girl is avoiding him...

naina: lets go,,

jay: yaar ye to abhi baat kar rahi thi firse behosh hogayi kya? (she was talking na, then, did she faint again?)karan was passing by them when geet winked at him and smiled... jay's eyes gone big like merry go round...to which geet smiled sweetly...

nysha: ye ladki kya thi? (What was in that girl?)

saima: apni sister se dar rahi thi.. (she was afraid of her sister)

neha: kyun?(why?)

dev: dekha nahi kitni attitude djikhati hain, jarur apne bahen ko dararke rakhti hogi... (she has so much attitude problem, I m sure she dominate her sister also)

jay: oye hoye pehli baar kisine dev bhai sahab ko attitude dikhaya,,, dev glared at him but he changed the topic,, umm but saima tujhe kaise pata chala wo uski sister hain aur wo darti hain usse... (1^st time in life someone has given attitude to dev brother, but saim awho told u that they are sister and that girl is afraid of her sister?)

saima: saare bacche yehi baat kar rahe the... (all the kids were talking the same)

samir came to maan: maan chale? arjun ka phone aaya tha...

maan : hmm chalo...

 

 

 

 

outside the asram,, naina called her driver to come there as soon as possible... and jay saw that they are waiting for someone...

 

jay: wo dekho,, sayad taxi ka intezar kar rahe hain,, kyun na hum unhe lift de? (hey they must be waiting for the taxi)

dev: kyun nahi he looked at maan who was smirking,, but before they could approce a Scorpio reach there and karan rested geet backside and he himself came the passenger sit and the next thing made them completly buffled,,, naina took the carkeys from the driver and seated in the driver seat... sonali and arohi was in the back seat with geet... they zoomed off...dev was impressed and decide his target... least he knew what is naina made off...

 

maan and his gang reach their bunglow,, khurana bunglow,,, its maan's grand father's home town and this was his house... all of them make them self comfatable,,, maan dev, arjun took their respective room and jay and samir in one romm and all the girls shared one room...

 

 

 

in other end of the town,, naina was pacing the room like millions of time,,, geet's fever increased in no time...

 

sonali: naina doctor ne kaha na wo thik hojayegi,, high power medicines hain, kal tak to thik hojayegi,,(naina doctor said she will be fine till tomorrow, medicines are very powerful) naina shot a glare to her to which she gulped her salive in fear...

arohi was carassing geet's temple,,, she was worried too... and she will stay like this till the time she can see geet like before...

naina: kya jarurat thi isse waha jaane ki, uski tabiyat waise bhi jayada thik nahi rehti, ye jagah waise bhi  usse suit nahi hoti, pata nahi ye ladki kyun yaha aati hain,,, (what was the need for going there, she is not well anyways this place is not so well fited for her, don't know why she have to come here) the answer they are well known...

naina took the sit beside geet and hold her hand, she smiled in her sleep: main tumhe nahi kho sakti...

karan: kuch nahi hoga usse... (Nothing will happen to her)

arohi: dii tum jao, main iske pass rukti hu, (I'll be here, u go and take some rest) but she well knew no one would budge to g their room instead they will be stay awake the whole night,, sitting beside her...

 

 

 

 

 

 

morning time...

 

maan couldn't sleep a sec that night, her face, her lips, her eyes were everywhere around him... he knew he needs her... yeah that is maan... he will get that what made him restless,,, the girl... he want her to be with him... and no one can say no to him...

maan was sipping coffe, siting outside of the house,,, in a wodden place where their is antiqe chairs and table were settle... samir comes there...

samir: hey maan gdmrng...

maan: mrng,, everything is set samir? hum usse kab milne ja rahe hain...

samir: wo uski tabiyat thik nahi so milna post pone kar  diya hain,,(she is not well so, the meeting has postponed) this made man furious,,

 

maan: cancle kar diya? what does she think of herself,, main itne dur se isliye nahi aaya k wo bahana maar sake aur main maan lu..

dev: calm down bro,, kya huya hum aaj nahi mil payenge but dhehradun ka maza to lesakte hain na,, and we can find something,,(so what we can't meet them today but atleast we can have some fun of dhehradun..) he was smiling and so was maan,, and samir who knew what is playing on his mind was worried,, not for work but for the girls that he knew now is these brothers are going to pray...

 

 

 

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naina's house...

 

geet wake up to see the worried faces infront of her that makes her scary,,,,

geet: sorry dii,,

naina hugged her: sorry kyun bol rahi hain,,, tu thik hain bas sab thik hain.. (why u r saying sorry? U r ok then everything is fine for me)

geet: abb jab main thik hu to hill top chale,,, (can we go to the hill top)

arohi: mar khana hain? tu abhi thik huyi hain aur abhi tujhe hill top jana hain...

geet: diii plsss,, aap jante ho na aaj kitna special day hain... plss chalo,, i'll take care of myself and u'll there na to protect me... plsss phuulleejjj,, naina noded to which geet  hugged her,, thank u dii, u r the best...

 

 

 

 

precap: hill top,,, and someone is falling down...

 

 next part Part 4

 

 

guys geet and maan ne just ek dusre ka face dekha hain,, they didn't know each other... and geet's winked at jay was just for fun as he was confused, and staring at her... she is not a flirtiest character,, and more to come about her...

 

 will pm all later...

Edited by tich.1990mg - 12 years ago

Edited by jssood - 12 years ago

Edited by geetsweet - 12 years ago

fab job done!
loved it!
continue soon!