Pyaar keh rang!.a fanfic(sujal n kashish) - Page 4

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Posted: 18 years ago
thank you RS, Areej and shruti...i am glad you guys liked it.....and no thanx shruti yeh to mera farz hai 😆 😆
ok so heres the next part for you all...

....recap:..kashish and sujal meet for the second time!

...RnG house...

Vasu( rishi and sujal's mother)

vasu:....lalit!!!...oh lalit!!!
lalit:...kya baat hai vasundhara...kyun chila rahi ho?..
vasu:...TUM NAHI SUDHRO GE....kitni bar kaha hai keh mera naam vasu hai.....not vasuuundhhhara!...so you better mind it......(lalit makes a yawning face)......waise mein ne yeh batana tha keh mein party peh ja rahi hon.....
lalit:....kyun?
vasu:..HOW DARE YOU ASK ME KYUN?????
lalit:...(gets scared lol)....nahi mera matlab keh ...kyun bata rahi ho....jaana hai to jao....whats the problem.....
vasu:...(gets down to where lalit was sitting....and pats his bold head).....shooo shwweet.....you're a darling!.....byiiiii!
lalit passes a relaxed smile....and gets busy in a business file......

rishi:..hey mom!....goin somewhere?
vasu:...ya!...shekhar keh yahan aaj party hai....you wanna come....?
rishi:..hmmm....shekhar......naaa.....wahan atmosphere kafi boring hota hai.....
lalit looks up at him with disgust....
vasu:..(laughs).....naughty.....but i should better leave...ana ho to ajana.....shayad aaj aattmossphere badal jaye.... .....(she swings her bag and leaves)

lalit:...rishi...mein kafi dino se soch raha tha keh tumhe bhi ab business mein kuch dilchaspi leni chahiye...sujal kitna.....
rishi:..dad....abhi to mein par rah hon.....
lalit:...woh to tum pichle 25 saal se par rahe ho....pata nahi tumhari yeh parhai aur tumhari mom ki parties kab khatam hongi.......(he closes the file)
rishi:..dad please...i like it this way...aur phir Big b hain na.....
sujal:...jee dad....abhi mein hoon na....mere marne keh baad rishi sab kuch zaroor sambhale ga.....kyun rishi...
rishi:..BIG B!!!.....dobara mat kahiye ga....
sujal:..hmm..rishi ....tum meri hone wali biwi ki tarah kyun baat kar rahe ho....(and laughs)
rishi:....jo bhi samjhana hai samajiye...par yeh baat dobara nahi.....(he looks at sujal while sujal smiles..)
sujal:..dekha dad....yeh itna bhi laparwa nahi hai.....
lalit:...tum dono ka pyaar dekh keh nahi lagta keh tum vasu keh bache ho......
sujal:...Dad...not again......
lalit:..haan....mera dukh sune wala hai hi kon........
sujal and rishi look at each other......
lalit:..ek wohi hogi
sujal:..kaun?....
lalit:.....wohi......jisse tu is ghar mein le keh ayega.....meri bahu.....wohi sunegi mere sare dukh dard......(sujal and rishi both laugh).....


Scene two.....
piyush enters the cafe.....and sits on the table where kashish was....
kashish:..are agaye tum....tumhara hi wait kar rahi thi....pata hai kal mein RnG gayi thi.....aur....
piyush:..kasshish.....tumhe abcd ki pari hai....aur yahan sab kuch khatam ho gaya.....
kashish:..(thinks....abcd....oh...rng...lol....)
kashish:..ab kya huwa?....phir kisi larki keh bhai se pit keh agaye? (she gives a half hidden smile)
piyush:....mein aur pit keh aon......hello....shayad tumhe meri deshat ka andaza nahi....
kashish:.....really???
piyush:..ofcourse.....
kashish:...acha to batao phir kya huwa?
piyush:..woh mein jis larki keh saath....i mean...kal jo larki mere saath ayi thi....usne......(as he was continuing kashish ki nazar kahin aur atak gayi.............was she really looking at him...kya yeh wohi tha.....haan....yeh to sujal hi hai.....)
kashish: (to herself)...sujal....yahan?
piyush:...aye hello! (clicks his fingers infront of her).....kahan kho gayi...meri tragedy suni na.....
kashish:..haan...woh......piyush mein abhi ati hon......
piyush:..par kahan ja rahi ho?
kashish:...abhi ayiiiii...(and leaves to where her heart was taking her....to where.....sujal was standing......)

plz comment! take care
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Posted: 18 years ago
i'm waiting for my part to comment... 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
farha ...my dil goes mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
Meri dictionary main se sare alfaz khatam hogaye hain iss se ziyada achhe alfaz mujhe nahi mill rahe 2gud fantastic gr8 👏 filhal issi se kaam chala lo 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
😆 😆 ..harpy sabar yara...ayega..tumhara part bhi jald hi ayega...lol

😳 ..thanx amna...yaar its so sweet of you

R.S...jaani you're liking the story thats enough for me 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
farahyyyy.....achi story hai...bongion se bharpoor...hehehehhee!! 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
dafa ho kiran.. 😆 😆

ok herez the next part...zara jaldhi jaldhi post kar rahi hon so i can continue further from where i had left...

recap:..vasu and lalit are intoduced....and kashish finds sujal in her college once again....and goes to meet him


kashish: (walks towards sujal...but sujal hasnt seen her yet)...(to herself).....kya kar rahi ho kashish....aise jake milo gi to tumhari value kaam hogi.....usse ehsaas nahi hona chahiye keh tum ussi se milne ja rahi ho.....hmmm....to kya karun.......haan....ideaaa!

kashish:..(to the canteen wala)....do samose.....
sujal turns around to see...:.....are aap?
kashish:..oh....ahhnnnn.....sssujal ...right?..(aise ban rahi thi jaise naam tak bhool gayi ho...)
sujal:..(smiles)...jee.....kaisi hain aap?
kashish:..bus theek....par aap yahan kaise.....koi file lene ayen hain?
sujal:..(laughs)....nahi....ek kaam se aya tha....
kashish:..acha....to?
sujal:..to kya?
kashish:...mera matlab..kaam ho gaya? (she asks innocently)
sujal:...(thinks)..nahi.....pura nahi huwa.....par shuruwat zaroor ho gayi hai....(he leans towards her and kashish tries to get back when she realizes that sujal is actually stretching out for the pani ki bottle which was placed next to her......she smiled at herself)
kashish:...aisa kya kaam hai....jo abhi bhi adhura hai?
sujal:....(smiles again).....hai ek kaam....jab pura hoga....to apko zaroor bataonga?
kashish:...jee?
a voice:...jeeeee nahi.....jigar....
both sujal and kashish turn around to see piyush standing there.....(kashish gives him a "leave-us-alone" look)
sujal:....hi!..piyush!
piyush:...oh ho....to yeh apko dekh keh yahan agayi thi.....(he winks at kashish)
kashish:...(suddenly gets a cough)....ahem....woh....pagal ho gaye ho....muje kya pata tha keh yeh yahan hain....mein to.....
(sujal keeps on staring at her)
piyush:..are are....tum to serious hi ho gayi....mein mazak kar raha tha....i know....tum yahan samose lene ayi hogi.....hain na..(he smiles mischieviously)
kashish?:...HAAN (getting annoyed)....
sujal:...lagta hai apko inke bare mein kafi kuch pata hai....
piyush:..kafi kuch??.....yeh kahiye keh muje iske bare kya nahi pata hai.....we are really best friends (he puts his hand around kashish's shoulder while kashish wants to escape.....ab sujal samne khara ho aur woh kisi aur k saath.....no no......)
sujal:..ummm......to mein chalta hon.
kashish:..kahan?
piyush:....office kashish....
kashish looks at piyush once again....with deadly eyes
sujal:..jee....woh ek important meeting hai.......(he passes a smile and turns away.......
kashish:....byee
sujal turns around and smiles again to see kashish still waiting there!.....

kashish suddenly pushes piyush as soon as sujal goes out of sight..........
kashish:....piyush keh bache.....samajhte kya ho khudko....."apko dekh keh yaahn ayi hai" (she copies him).....aaj mein tumhe nahi chorongi......(she runs behind him to hit him while piyush runs forward to bachaofying himself........when he runs into a beautiful girl....and they both fall down....lol

kashish:...oh no..not again!!!!!

sujal was now driving......par nazar sarak se zaida kashish keh chehre peh thi.......when his phone rang
sujal:..hello?
lalit:..kahan ho sujal?...subah ki meeting bhi miss kardi...aur abhi bhi gayab ho......abhi muje lagne laga hai keh tum vasu keh hi bete ho.....
sujal: dad.....woh ek zaroori kaam tha...bus mein araha hon....
lalit:..tumhare zaroori kaam....ufff,.....(they both hang up)
sujal to himself:...yeh kya ho gaya hai tumhe sujal.....itni khaas meeting chor aye.....agar koi nuksaan ho jata...........(suddenly he smiles and changes his tone)......magar uski ek nazar keh liye so nuksaan bhi uthane ko tayar hon.......(he stops at a signal).......akhir college ane ka maksaad pura huwa.......kkkkaaashish......(he smiles and shies again)

comments needed plzz
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Posted: 18 years ago
ok herez the next part to (pyaar keh rang)....

recap:...sujal went to the college to see...kashish yaar......and now that he did see her....he's happy..lol!!

RnG office
sujal:...mornin rosy...
rosy:..good morning sir....sir apka wait kar rahe hain...
sujal:..i know...late ho gaya....(he winks at her to which rosy smiles....)

sujal:..sorry dad..woh bahut zaroori kaam tha....
lalit:..kya kaam tha?
sujal who was about to sit looks at lalit:..dad...ap muj peh shaak kar rahe hain?
lalit:......haan...
sujal:..dad!!!!!!!
lalit:...ek jawaan, handsome aur kunwara larka..itni subah subah ghar se chala jaye....binaa kuch kahe...binna kuch sunne.....kaam keh bare mein bhool jaye...meetings na attend kare....aur phir mere sawalaon peh choke....to har dad ko shaak to hona hi chahiye na......
sujal:...(smile)....dad...ap bhi na....
lalit:...haan sujal...mein bhi kabhie jawaan tha.....kabhie mein bhi yun achanak zaroori kaamon mein phaas jata tha.........par jab se tumhari ma.....
sujal:...aap phir mama keh bare mein shuru ho gaye....churein na dad.....
lalit:...mein bhi yehi soch raha tha...
sujal:..kya?
lalit:..yehi keh vasu ko chor don.....
sujal:...(shakes his head)...mein ne mama ko nahi unke bare mein sochne ko chorne ko kaha tha.......
lalit:..oh....(makes a dissapointing face)....
sujal:...ab kaam shuru karein....
lalit:..haan....ab yehi ek khushi hai meri zindagi mein.......


and both father and son get to work....... aur waqt beete pata hi nahi chalta...kab shaam ho jati hai......

sujal and lalit work in the same cabin...they have more of a friend relationship rather than a father and a son.....

lalit:.kafi late ho gaya hai...ghar chalein...
sujal:..hmmm...(they pack up)


idhar kashish and piyush ek restuarnt mein se nikle....
kashish:..you know piyush...tum sudhar hi nahi sakte...tum chaho na...phir bhi nahi...
piyush:...ab mein ne kya kiya?
kashish:..kya kiya?...tum abhi bhi yeh puch rahe ho......
piyush:...to.....kuch aur puchna chaiye tha? (gets confused)
kashish:..PIIIYUSH!!!....mere saath dinner peh aye the...aur saath apni girlfriend ko bhi bula liya...
piyush:..exxx cuse me.....woh meri girlfreind nahi hai.......
kashish:..to phir kon hai?
piyush:...woh.....bus.....tiiimmmee.....
kashish;..dont you dare...khabardar jo kisi larki ko time paas kaha to....(she was shouting at him in the middle of the road)
piyush:....nahi mera matlab....
kashish:..tumhare sare matlab mein achi tarah se janti hon.....
piyush:..acha yaar...ab sab ke samne danton gi kya?....
kashish:..agar dobara aisi har kat karo ge to yunhi danto gi...sari zindagi dantongi....
piyush:...sari zindagi mere saath jeene ka irada hai...(at saying this piyush became very serious....and kashish suddenly realized what she had just said)......

"BEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEP....BEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEP" (horn ki awaaz)....kashish looks around to see a car just next to her...(woh ek dum anjali (kavyanjali) keh style mein murti hai...with one hand on her eyes coz the lights were too strong).....

lalit:...sujal....lights halki karo......uski ankhon mein lag rahi hai....
sujal:......kkk....kkkkashish!
lalit suddenly looks at sujal in surprise......

comment dena mat bhoolna plzzzzz
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Posted: 18 years ago
😃 wow its so nice. I read the 4 parts together. Its really gr888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888.
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hey! Great!!! Farah kya story hai! Lol..Anjali style..Hhaha..Achaa..Im waiting for ur next part!! Do post it..and cuz im enjoyin it and luvin it..!!! Tc..
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