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Posted: 22 December 2011 at 1:03pm | IP Logged
Hey Smilianz.
i am very bad  at writing but gonna try it again...as i see no FF / OS...
Let's make the forum more active okBig smile

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Outline
  • Harmony&Nimit Loved eachother.their love was eternal
  • Nimit mets with an accident.he breaths his last.
  • Nimit and Harmony had a Baby boy. and his name is Hrithik
  • harmony gets married to shikar . and shikar knows her past. 
  • shikar took all the responsibilty of Harmony & Hrithik
  • harmony haves hard time to move on in her new married life.
  • 5 years later. 


To phir aaooo
Mujhko satao

all the photos are scattered on the floor, there is a harmony lying on the floor, holding a photo in her hand.she touches the photo and she and she embrace it to her heart.
shikar walks in the room and all the sudden,harmony gets up. and goes away from there.

To phir aaooo
Mujhko rulaaw
Dil badal baneee
Aankhen bhene lagee

Flashback
Nimit Kisses harmony on her shoulder.

Aaheein aise uthe
Jaise aandhi chalee

it's night night time. and Harmony & shikar are sleeping on the bed.harmony is unable to sleep .she opens her eyes.

To phir aaooo
Mujhko satao
To phir aaooo
Mujhko rulaaw


Flashback
Nimit opens the garage . takes out his bike. and says Harmony let's go.
Nimit starts his bike and Harmony sits on the bike and wraps her hand around Nimit.

aa bhi jaao
aa bhi jaao

Harmony walks out of the bedroom and goes toward living room. shikar gets up and Hrithik is also in living room playing video games , so shikar joins him and Plays video games with Hrithik. Harmony is looking outside the window. she puts her hand on the window and imagines Nimit. Harmony smiles .and goes back to the room happily and shikar sees harmony.

Gum leja tere
Jo bhi tune diye
Ya phir mujhko batao
inko kaise sahee
To phir aaooo
Mujhko satao

Flashback
Harmony & Nimit  romancing on a boat. Harmony & Nimit touches and kisses eachother.

To phir aaooo
Mujhko rulaaw

aa bhi jaa o

Harmony wored nimit fav's color dress ''white ''. she walked into the bathroom . and turns on the water. water is running and her dress get wet and she collapse and cries her heart out. 
while shikar is setting up the dinning table for dinner. harmony walks out of the bathroom , her dress is wet and she is crying embracing her hands around herself. shikar gets up from the chair , and see her and says what's is this?


while , harmony is walking toward shikar , Harmony has all the flashback of her love Nimit.
shikar is yelling at her. and Harmony walks out of the house. outside the house , she sees nimit standing. and she just walks into him . crying.

Flashback
Harmony & Nimit dancing in a rain, on a peaceful street 

abb to is manjar se
mujhko chale jana hai 
Jin raaahon pe mera yaar hai 
Un raahon ko mujhse pana hai
To phir aaooo
Mujhko satao

Flashback.
Nimit puts on a heart -pendant necklace on harmony's neck . 

Harmony kisses the necklace ,  starts the car. shikar says stop. 
but harmony does not listen . and shikar follows her. harmony is driving and she is crying her heart-out. she is unable to stop the tears. and she has the flashback of 

Flashback
Nimit Hugging her and kissing her from the back.

.in the car , she sees nimit sitting in a passenger seat. harmony stops the car , she gets out of the car . and she threws away all the photos of her &nimit  down.

To phir aaooo
Mujhko rulaaw

Flashback
Harmony & Nimit walked in to a restaurant hand in hand.Nimit orders the food for harmony.Harmony smiles, she hold his hand , and kisses his hand. Nimit feeds to harmony, while harmony feeds to him

shikar , reaches there . and sees harmony on the ground pouring her heart out.
shikar puts his black coat on her , and wraps her . while, harmony tears are not able to stop rolling down .

Nimit sees them, and smiles and Fades away.

| The End | 


i tried my best .so hope u all like it.



Edited by -Pooji- - 22 December 2011 at 2:13pm

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Posted: 23 December 2011 at 2:05pm | IP Logged
aww...sad wala..Cry
great job...Big smile

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Posted: 23 December 2011 at 7:26pm | IP Logged
@ sukru : yes sad wala , Cry
thank you !
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Posted: 23 December 2011 at 8:42pm | IP Logged

THIS IS GENIUS WORK!!!!:D

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Posted: 23 December 2011 at 9:44pm | IP Logged
@Brinda97 : thank you
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Posted: 23 December 2011 at 10:11pm | IP Logged
@pooji:- the first OS of ZKSP forum! =D
awsum...!! luved the way ur expressed each and evry moment!
Emotional Update...!!! i m in luv wid dis show more and more! =D
add do add me in ur pm list for ur future updates!

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Posted: 23 December 2011 at 11:08pm | IP Logged
awww Pooh that was a very emotional OS Cry
but loved it, great job Thumbs Up
all the FB scenes were very nice ... the whole story was shaped up very nicely ...

do write more Embarrassed

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Posted: 24 December 2011 at 11:38am | IP Logged
aww this one is too emotional but i really liked it :)

do write more :)

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