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SwaRon FF- Naa jaane kya hoga! Revival (Page 3)

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Posted: 24 December 2011 at 11:56pm | IP Logged
wow its lovely n awesome

KaranWahi5 Goldie
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Posted: 25 December 2011 at 3:37am | IP Logged
Girl u r such a great writer.
eagerly waiting fr their bollywood number;) (we want sumthng romantic)
next tym plz update longer nd pm me once u update=D
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Posted: 26 December 2011 at 9:29am | IP Logged
Thanks a lot guys for all ur views... Here's part 2...
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Part 2:

Swayam waits for Sharon in the rehersal hall wearing a white shirt and jeans… Sharon walks in also wearing a white dress with her hair flying in the air.. Swayam looks at her with awe for one sec and realizes that it is Sharon the girl who hates him…

Sh: Toh kaunsa gaana choose kiya hai?

Sw: Labhon ko labhon se sajaao…(he sings it actually)

Sh: What!? Pas woh toh….

Sw: Woh kya?! Tumhe kyun sabse koi na koi problem hoti hai?!

Sh: Mujhe koi problem nahi hai.. okay!!

Sw: Toh shuru bhi kare ya phir tum aise hi kuch unwanted bashan dene wale ho?

Sh: (feeling a bit bad) shuru karte hain…

The music starts playing and Swayam comes closer to Sharon… Her hearts starts beating very fast… As the dance progresses they both get lost in each other's eyes.. When swayam touches sharon's hips she almost stops dancing as she senses an electric shock running through her body… As the chorus starts to play She is really tensed but swayam keeps a cool head and dances with the only person he has ever cared about more than anyone else in this entire world.. He touches her lips when the song goes "labhon ko labhon se sajaao" and goes very close to her.. she almost gives in to swayam but then regains control of herself… At one point Swayam goes close to Sharon's ears and whispers

Sw: Yeh mere dil ki har baat batatha hai yeh gaana… Par tum isse kabhi samajh nahi paoge na?

Sh: Swayammm…

Sw: Please atleast don't ruin this moment for me… (keeps his finger on her lips)

Swayam then notices the tears in her eyes slowly coming out… he wipes them slowly still keeping in move with the song.. And slowly wen the song comes to an end he lifts her up and then holds her in her arms..

*LOOK LOOK HAWA HAWA*

Sh: Swayam…

Swayam lets her down… Sharon very confused by this action…

Sw: I have to go now… (very heart broken)

Sh: Par…

Swayam goes off to the boys locker room… He decides to call his bro rey and tell him what happened…

Sw: Rey! I need to talk to you..

R: Haan bolo kya hua?

Sw: Main Sharon ke saath dance kiya.. karne wala hoon…

R: Kya?!

Sw: Haan.. New year fest main…

R: Isme upset hone ki kya baat hai?

Sw: Main use kyun itna pyaar karta hoon?! Main yeh sab she nahi paa raha hoon ? (starts crying)

R: Oye booo… kyun rote ho? Main hoon na? tumhara bada bhaai hoon main… ab rona mat… chote bache nahi ho…

Sw: hmmm…

R: Ab mere baat sun… Tum Sharon se pyaar karo isme kuch galti nahi hai… Main aur kria hai tumhare liye… Main tumse yeh vada karta hoon boo ki is saal college katham hone ke pehle Sharon tumhari hogi aur sirf tumhari… Mujhpe barosa kar aur abhi jao apni class main… but not as my rotlu booo but as my happy booo…

Sw: I love you bro…

R: Me more…

Sw: No I love you more..

R: Actually booo.. Kria loves me the most :P

Sw: Haan who sach toh hai…

R: Chalo ab class jao…

Sw: Theek hai.. bye…


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Posted: 26 December 2011 at 9:38am | IP Logged
awww Nish dats too gud!!! Hug
update as soon as possible!!
waiting eagerly!! and song selection is awesome!!!
thnxx for d PM!!!Smile
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Posted: 26 December 2011 at 9:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by swaron24

awww Nish dats too gud!!! Hug
update as soon as possible!!
waiting eagerly!! and song selection is awesome!!!
thnxx for d PM!!!Smile
Thank u joker.. N just becuz song selection was made by u guys... doesn mean u have to mention it ..

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Posted: 26 December 2011 at 9:41am | IP Logged
hai hai...kitna cute hai..boo...choo chweet...next part bhi aise jaldi update karo yaar...u rock...
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Posted: 26 December 2011 at 9:42am | IP Logged
Nish!! Awesum!!
Arey swayam, sharon ko bolne to de!!
Rey nd swayam ki tok kitni cutee he!!
Amazing!! Luvd it!!
Thnku soo much fr dis b'ful update!! :D
KaranWahi5 Goldie
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Posted: 26 December 2011 at 9:43am | IP Logged
nishhh maar dala tmne.u literally killed me.itna zabardast update.labon ko labon pe hayeeeDay Dreamingi cant tell how much i loved this part.i so wanted them to perform on this song.they r so hot man.
awww brohter bonding.rey is such a sweet brother.the part rey say's kria loves me the most was hilariousROFL
nish update soonn.

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