~Heart Broken~ [Virmaan FF] Chapter 1 pg 2 - Page 5

Posted: 12 years ago
Very interesting...Pls PM me wen u update...
Posted: 12 years ago
omg loved the concept!!!
she is very strong lol. pm me when you continue
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by pinkstars


Very interesting...Pls PM me wen u update...

Thnx. Sure i will.

Originally posted by rizvigal


omg loved the concept!!!
she is very strong lol. pm me when you continue

Thank you. Lol. Yh she is. I will.
Posted: 12 years ago
Gr8 post...typical manvi tho scared stil wont show it 2 virat/kidnapper..
update soon...n pm me ven u do...
Posted: 12 years ago
nice update...

cont soohn
Posted: 12 years ago
Heyy loved it... New concept amazinggg.. :) Hahah lovedd the jalebiii baiii twistt lol Mwahxx Add me to yourr  PM listt.. thnxxx
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by teri-diwani


Heyy loved it... New concept amazinggg.. :) Hahah lovedd the jalebiii baiii twistt lol Mwahxx Add me to yourr  PM listt.. thnxxx

Thnx. Yh lol. I will.

Originally posted by mizzna


add me to your PM list :)

Suree. x

Originally posted by missingremix


Gr8 post...typical manvi tho scared stil wont show it 2 virat/kidnapper..
update soon...n pm me ven u do...

Thank you. Yh, i will.

Originally posted by me.san


nice update...

cont soohn

Thnx n I will. 
Posted: 12 years ago
That was amazing; just read the character description, concept and the first chapter. I found this on the EHMMBH forum page you see; loved the title. The title spoke for itself and had to read it as its about VirMaan. 
And Viraat being a kidnapper just shows another way of showing the dram (if you get what I mean), really liked the change of character in him... Erm as for the rest of it; chapter 1 was really really good. The best part was the 'Jalebi Bai' part... It was actually quite funny.
Would love to see how the rest of the story goes on. And though this was a short part; it really did describe so much. Overall loved the update and can't wait for the next part ðŸ˜‰

Please update soon and please add me to your PM list :)
Posted: 12 years ago
please pm me wen u write again loved it 
its so sick virat as a kidnapper wow 
Posted: 12 years ago
Is was just too adorable and cute please add me to your PM list.

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