That was amazing; just read the character description, concept and the first chapter. I found this on the EHMMBH forum page you see; loved the title. The title spoke for itself and had to read it as its about VirMaan. And Viraat being a kidnapper just shows another way of showing the dram (if you get what I mean), really liked the change of character in him... Erm as for the rest of it; chapter 1 was really really good. The best part was the 'Jalebi Bai' part... It was actually quite funny. Would love to see how the rest of the story goes on. And though this was a short part; it really did describe so much. Overall loved the update and can't wait for the next part 😉
Please update soon and please add me to your PM list :)