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~Heart Broken~ [Virmaan FF] Chapter 1 pg 2 (Page 4)

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Posted: 22 December 2011 at 6:53pm | IP Logged
Nice yaar the first part was really good
Enjoyed reading it
Thanks for the pm
Update the next part soon
Will be waiting Clap

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Posted: 22 December 2011 at 7:03pm | IP Logged
Lovely sweety cont soon n pm me

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Posted: 23 December 2011 at 5:01am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Xx-Anilaa-xX

Niceee Concept! Clap
Lovee the diologue you used for Maanvi! LOL ...

Originally posted by -Nahi-


"First, I'm kidnapped by a man I don't even know. Oh, wait a minute, we aren't supposed to know kidnappers are we? Maanvi, tu kya bol rahi hai?" whispered the girl to herself.

"Hmmm...I'm bored. Maybe I should do something to the kidnapper so that he gets annoyed of me and leaves me on the road. Then I'll run away to Jeevika Di and meet Jiju. Sounds like a good idea Mannu. Chal, kaam pe shuru ho ja." said Maanvi to herself as she coughed. 

Hearing the song, the man shouted at the top of his voice, "Oi, Jalebi Bhai, apna radio band kar aur chup ho ja. Kaha kaha se log aate hai."

"Oi Kidnapper, main uth gaya, Khush? Mujhe sone hi nahi deta. Ajeeb insan kaha se aate ho aur humari zindagi karab kar deta hai." replied Maanvi.


ROFL ROFL ROFL

Looking foward to the next part.. 
Pleasee update soon.. Thumbs Up

Thnx alot Anila. The dialogues just popped in2 my head.

Originally posted by Jafrina_luvs_KM

nahi i love the whole concept of ur FF its very different and unique so love it. i actually like how virat is a bad guy it sound kool as i can imagine the hot angry kidnapper and would love to see how he is influenced  to change. love the first chapter and how u writ it im loving manvis character already looking forward to the upcoming chaps 

Awww, thnx Jafrina. Yh, I was actually gna do a Virika FF on this concept, but Viren wouldn't suit it. He is 2 innocent and sweet. 

Originally posted by Brklyn_gal

Loved it plz pm me wen u update

Thnx, of course I will.

Originally posted by IrUmIBrAhIm

Omg,nahi amazing... Sweety Plz continue soon :)

Thnx Irum. I will.

Originally posted by princess14

great start!! plz add me to the PM list! thanks

Thnx. Sure I will.

Originally posted by -Talli-

I Loved It.. It Was Seriously Awesome.. Continue Soon And Please PM Me When You Do..

Thnx Talli. Yh i will.

Originally posted by inlvwithehmmbh

It was awesomee!! add me to your PM list pls Tongue

Thnx n I will.

Originally posted by Sonika1988

Nice yaar the first part was really good 
Enjoyed reading it
Thanks for the pm 
Update the next part soon 
Will be waiting Clap

Thnx alot Sonika. Ur welcum. Will try 2.

Originally posted by thesh

Lovely sweety cont soon n pm me

Thnx. I wil. x

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Posted: 23 December 2011 at 5:39am | IP Logged
nice... do update soon! eager to know what happens in the story... waiting for the next update... please pm me when u update next... thank you!

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Posted: 23 December 2011 at 5:46am | IP Logged
I really like the concept, esp how Manvi will influence Virat. She was still the typical Manvi even when she was kidnapped. She was not scared but more interested in irritate the kidnapper instead. Please PM me when you updateSmile

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Posted: 23 December 2011 at 6:33am | IP Logged
Virat as a kidnapper,,, very interesting...
first chapter is good, maanvi and her nonstop talking,,, lolz..
add me in your PM list please..

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Posted: 23 December 2011 at 6:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by arul01

nice... do update soon! eager to know what happens in the story... waiting for the next update... please pm me when u update next... thank you!

Thnx. I will.

Originally posted by rev4eva

I really like the concept, esp how Manvi will influence Virat. She was still the typical Manvi even when she was kidnapped. She was not scared but more interested in irritate the kidnapper instead. Please PM me when you updateSmile 

Thank u. :) Yh. I will.

Originally posted by love_never_dies

Virat as a kidnapper,,, very interesting...
first chapter is good, maanvi and her nonstop talking,,, lolz..
add me in your PM list please..

Thnx. LOL Suree. x
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Posted: 23 December 2011 at 10:17am | IP Logged
wowww nice update.. thanks for the pm waiting for more...

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