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~Heart Broken~ [Virmaan FF] Chapter 1 pg 2 (Page 3)

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Posted: 22 December 2011 at 3:08pm | IP Logged
Interesting concept. Plz do PM me when you update.Smile

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Posted: 22 December 2011 at 3:19pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by cdeevianee

Interesting concept. Plz do PM me when you update.Smile

Thnx! 

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Posted: 22 December 2011 at 3:29pm | IP Logged
Niceee Concept! Clap
Lovee the diologue you used for Maanvi! LOL ...

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"First, I'm kidnapped by a man I don't even know. Oh, wait a minute, we aren't supposed to know kidnappers are we? Maanvi, tu kya bol rahi hai?" whispered the girl to herself.

"Hmmm...I'm bored. Maybe I should do something to the kidnapper so that he gets annoyed of me and leaves me on the road. Then I'll run away to Jeevika Di and meet Jiju. Sounds like a good idea Mannu. Chal, kaam pe shuru ho ja." said Maanvi to herself as she coughed. 

Hearing the song, the man shouted at the top of his voice, "Oi, Jalebi Bhai, apna radio band kar aur chup ho ja. Kaha kaha se log aate hai."

"Oi Kidnapper, main uth gaya, Khush? Mujhe sone hi nahi deta. Ajeeb insan kaha se aate ho aur humari zindagi karab kar deta hai." replied Maanvi.


ROFL ROFL ROFL

Looking foward to the next part.. 
Pleasee update soon.. Thumbs Up

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Posted: 22 December 2011 at 3:38pm | IP Logged
nahi i love the whole concept of ur FF its very different and unique so love it. i actually like how virat is a bad guy it sound kool as i can imagine the hot angry kidnapper and would love to see how he is influenced  to change. love the first chapter and how u writ it im loving manvis character already looking forward to the upcoming chaps 

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Posted: 22 December 2011 at 4:17pm | IP Logged
Loved it plz pm me wen u update

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Posted: 22 December 2011 at 4:29pm | IP Logged
Omg,nahi amazing... Sweety Plz continue soon :)

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Posted: 22 December 2011 at 4:50pm | IP Logged
great start!! plz add me to the PM list! thanks

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It was awesomee!! add me to your PM list pls Tongue

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