~Heart Broken~ [Virmaan FF] Chapter 1 pg 2 - Page 5 | Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain

Sugan

@pinkstars

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Posted: 12 years ago

Very interesting...Pls PM me wen u update...

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701448

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Posted: 12 years ago

omg loved the concept!!!

she is very strong lol. pm me when you continue

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Nahiyan (Nahi)

@-Nahi-

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Posted: 12 years ago

This content was originally posted by: pinkstars
Very interesting...Pls PM me wen u update...

Thnx. Sure i will.

This content was originally posted by: rizvigal
omg loved the concept!!!
she is very strong lol. pm me when you continue

Thank you. Lol. Yh she is. I will.

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--Mystical--

@--Mystical--

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Posted: 12 years ago

Gr8 post...typical manvi tho scared stil wont show it 2 virat/kidnapper..

update soon...n pm me ven u do...

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sania

@me.san

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Posted: 12 years ago

nice update...

cont soohn

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teri-diwani

@teri-diwani

Groupbie

Posted: 12 years ago

Heyy loved it... New concept amazinggg.. :) Hahah lovedd the jalebiii baiii twistt lol Mwahxx Add me to yourr PM listt.. thnxxx

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Nahiyan (Nahi)

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Posted: 12 years ago

This content was originally posted by: teri-diwani
Heyy loved it... New concept amazinggg.. :) Hahah lovedd the jalebiii baiii twistt lol Mwahxx Add me to yourr PM listt.. thnxxx

Thnx. Yh lol. I will.

This content was originally posted by: mizzna
add me to your PM list :)

Suree. x

This content was originally posted by: missingremix
Gr8 post...typical manvi tho scared stil wont show it 2 virat/kidnapper..
update soon...n pm me ven u do...

Thank you. Yh, i will.

This content was originally posted by: me.san
nice update...

cont soohn

Thnx n I will.

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Shehroon Riaz

@shehroon_riaz

Goldie

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Posted: 12 years ago

That was amazing; just read the character description, concept and the first chapter. I found this on the EHMMBH forum page you see; loved the title. The title spoke for itself and had to read it as its about VirMaan.
And Viraat being a kidnapper just shows another way of showing the dram (if you get what I mean), really liked the change of character in him... Erm as for the rest of it; chapter 1 was really really good. The best part was the 'Jalebi Bai' part... It was actually quite funny.
Would love to see how the rest of the story goes on. And though this was a short part; it really did describe so much. Overall loved the update and can't wait for the next part 😉

Please update soon and please add me to your PM list :)

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shivu124

@shivu124

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Posted: 12 years ago

please pm me wen u write again loved it

its so sick virat as a kidnapper wow

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virmanforever

@virmanforever

Goldie

Posted: 12 years ago

Is was just too adorable and cute please add me to your PM list.

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