~Heart Broken~ [Virmaan FF] Chapter 1 pg 2 - Page 3 | Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain

KSG_luv

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Posted: 12 years ago

Loved it plz pm me wen u update

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127355

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Posted: 12 years ago

Omg,nahi amazing... Sweety Plz continue soon :)

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princess14

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Posted: 12 years ago

great start!! plz add me to the PM list! thanks

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inlvwithehmmbh

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Posted: 12 years ago

It was awesomee!! add me to your PM list pls 😛

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sonika sharma

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Posted: 12 years ago

Nice yaar the first part was really good
Enjoyed reading it
Thanks for the pm
Update the next part soon
Will be waiting 👏

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thesh

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Posted: 12 years ago

Lovely sweety cont soon n pm me

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Nahiyan (Nahi)

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Posted: 12 years ago

This content was originally posted by: Xx-Anilaa-xX
Niceee Concept! 👏
Lovee the diologue you used for Maanvi! 😆 ...

🤣 🤣 🤣

Looking foward to the next part..
Pleasee update soon.. 👍🏼

Thnx alot Anila. The dialogues just popped in2 my head.

This content was originally posted by: Jafrina_luvs_KM
nahi i love the whole concept of ur FF its very different and unique so love it. i actually like how virat is a bad guy it sound kool as i can imagine the hot angry kidnapper and would love to see how he is influenced to change. love the first chapter and how u writ it im loving manvis character already looking forward to the upcoming chaps

Awww, thnx Jafrina. Yh, I was actually gna do a Virika FF on this concept, but Viren wouldn't suit it. He is 2 innocent and sweet.

This content was originally posted by: Brklyn_gal
Loved it plz pm me wen u update

Thnx, of course I will.

This content was originally posted by: IrUmIBrAhIm
Omg,nahi amazing... Sweety Plz continue soon :)

Thnx Irum. I will.

This content was originally posted by: princess14
great start!! plz add me to the PM list! thanks

Thnx. Sure I will.

This content was originally posted by: -Talli-
I Loved It.. It Was Seriously Awesome.. Continue Soon And Please PM Me When You Do..

Thnx Talli. Yh i will.

This content was originally posted by: inlvwithehmmbh
It was awesomee!! add me to your PM list pls 😛

Thnx n I will.

This content was originally posted by: Sonika1988
Nice yaar the first part was really good
Enjoyed reading it
Thanks for the pm
Update the next part soon
Will be waiting 👏

Thnx alot Sonika. Ur welcum. Will try 2.

This content was originally posted by: thesh
Lovely sweety cont soon n pm me

Thnx. I wil. x

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scorp1AN

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Posted: 12 years ago

nice... do update soon! eager to know what happens in the story... waiting for the next update... please pm me when u update next... thank you!

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rev4eva

@rev4eva

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Posted: 12 years ago

I really like the concept, esp how Manvi will influence Virat. She was still the typical Manvi even when she was kidnapped. She was not scared but more interested in irritate the kidnapper instead. Please PM me when you update😊

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love_never_dies

@love_never_dies

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Posted: 12 years ago

Virat as a kidnapper,,, very interesting...

first chapter is good, maanvi and her nonstop talking,,, lolz..

add me in your PM list please..

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