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Posted: 12 years ago
hi guys this is my first VIRMAN 😳so you all are fre to criticise.
 CONFUSION
PART 1
this is how it starts manvi is know has been staying in vandhera mansion for 5 months and virat and her had fallen in love but they never told each other . on the other side bua and dadaji wants to fix virat's enggagement with their old family friends.but they keep this a secret from virat as they know  he will say no. and do not tell manvi because she has a big mouth. and will tell him every thing to fix the relation the vadheras will go out of town and make some excuse and virat will think this is a good oportunity to propose manvi.he thinks for along time but at last decides so he clls her the way he usually calls.he goes on his kness tajes a rose and proposes her she is shocked but says i love you to. hearing this he goes to kiss her soon they are together in a bed covered by a blanket. and it was morning suddenly they both got up and dressed they were lucky enough tht nobody had come till know.
part two
i'll write the rest if yo like this
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Posted: 12 years ago
pls continue...its good...
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Really nice
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its really nice!
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Posted: 12 years ago
THANKS FOR ALL YOUR COMMENTS😊
 
part 2
it hd ben 3 moths fr this incident  and only 2 monthsleft for maanvi to leave they were still scared tell everybody they decided to to tell but they then cam eto know only jeevika , veien and chaachu dadaji was at ameeting bua and vanshika and chachi was at the mandir. but manvi and virat still went down they wre  shy jevika seeing their expreesion asked them what hapend they said ilove virat and i love manvi together in such a rush that made chachu and viren turned and jevika shocked.
they wre preety scared right know and looked quite embaresed then the three of them together waht how when why.
manvi: what how when why we love each othr
virat :excatly
jeevika: lekn manu
manvi: i know di ya bahat fast hai meni stupid lag rahi ho.jiju  i  i really love virat
virat: bahi l love manvi to pls gussa na hona
three of them begin to laugh. but suddenly they got stricked and realized that dadaji fixed virat's relation and told this to virman they wre shocked and manvi began to cry.
jeevika: mannu ro mat sambhal hum kuch sochaa ga.
viren: ya sali sahiba
suddenly manvi thinks she is about to vomit she runs eveybody run s behind her and see her continuously vommiting. virat goes behind her  and says what happend to my bandirya. i do not know
jeevika: mannu theri halat past 2mhena se begar rehi hai ab doctor ko balati hoon.
manvi: nahi di pls no
jeevika chup
kuch der bad bell baji sahid doc hai pls ender ayaa manvi uppr hai.
manvi: doctor pls mera blood na lejya.
doc: uss ki zrorat nahi  sirf ek normal check up
manvi: shukur hai
veien pecha sa: doctor sab theek hai.
doctor: haa doctor kush khabri ha ya maa bna wali hai. she is pregnant.
virat:kya manvi, prenant.
doctor: kyon app abhi becha ka liya tiyar nahi. lekn i'm sory ro say ka ab abortion nahi kya jai sakhta.
jeevika: assa kyon
doctor: because she is 3 months pregnant .
viren:doc i'll reah you to the door.
then they come back and look at virat and manvi they do not know what to say.
jeevika:abb kya hoga.
manvi:di, i'm sorry, because of me swamni bua and dadaji will scold you.janti hoon ka mujhe or virat ko asaa nahi karna chaia tha
virat: haan babhi, i'm really soory janta hoon ka app gussa han lekin mein manvi aur baby dona sa baht pyar karta hoon pls kuch kijya ,bhai, chachu pls.
veien:kuch to karna hi peragaga.
chachu:lekin hamara pass sirf ek mehna hai ek mehna mein manvi ki halat dekh kar meta chal jayega that she is pregnant aur virat ki saggai teek manvi will be 5 months pregnant.
manvi starts crying
virat: kya hoa meri bandirya ko
manvi: how mean tum mujhe menana ki jaga mujhe bandirya kha rha ho.
chachu:chalo yahan sa kese ko is ka bara mein pata nahi chalna chaiya.
verien: excatly
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Posted: 12 years ago
It was nice. Plz continue and PM me for the update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it!
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Posted: 12 years ago

 part 3😊

Chachu had not completed his sentence a voice like thunder sounded from behind  VIRAT MANVI KYA HA YA SABB.

Swamni :virat iss ladki se mujhe ko upeed nahi lekin tum to kafi sumjhdar ho.

Manvi tumhe sharm nahi atti ka apna didi kaa dewar ka saath yeh kar rahi ho.

J:buaji app ki hemat kasa hoi ka manvi se iss tarha bat kara.

S:bholo met

 viren: abb app shuru met hona

swamni: veieen tum
manvi mecha sa chati hai pls pls chup ho jaeya.
mannu  shant ho tere assi halt mein...
jeevika did not complete her sentence and manvi starts screaming.
 they call the doc she said the pain might have started because of the tension.and to much tension can cause her to losse her baby.
hearing this swmni and dadji realized their mistake.
5months later
manvi baby push what the hell you think i am doing.
wah wah
congratulations beta hoa hai.
 
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