Awesome Update
Poor Maan was begging for her to response...
i m simple speechless for the whole intimate part...
you wrote amazingly well
Finally maan realized that he love her...
but why he want to give her chance to hold back her feelings...
yeh chance bhi de lo Maan kuch nahi hone wala...
wo kya kehte hain
Ishq per zor nahi... hai ye wo aatish ghaaalib
jo lagayye na lagey or bujhaaye na bujheey...
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