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i know
my next update will not be liked
it is for
new twists
so that

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Edited by KITTY&ME - 15 January 2012 at 8:31am

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RajeevsKitty Senior Member

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Posted: 16 January 2012 at 7:49am | IP Logged

Episode Sixteen

In a girl's room..

Curtains removes slowly and sunlight comes inside the room.. music system gets onn.. one lady in red saaree comes and puts off the music..

Lady: good morning Piya baby.. 11 baj gaye hain.. Aapko 12 pm se college me jana hai.. uth jaiye..

Piya: (slowly opens her eyes and smiles and wakes up) good morning nancy..

Nancy serves her juice on her bed.. And Piya picks that glass and leaves her bed.. Sips once.. And comes towards her window.. Nancy cleans the mess..

Piya: (Looking outside) Nancy.. Aaj ki subah kuch jyada hi khubsurat nahi lag rahi..

Nancy: Madam subah to hamesha hi aisi hi hoti hai..

Piya: nahi Nancy.. Aaj sabkuch badal gaya hai..(Smiles)

Nancy: ab naya kya hai wo toh main nahi janti.. Par haan.. Agar aap 40 minutes ke ander ready nahi hui to aap apne naye college me late ho jaogi..

And nancy leaves..


In Mount college

Girls and boys are cheering.. Few are talking in group.. And then a car stops.. Glass slides down and its Akshay..

Akshay: so here I m.. Mount college.. Abhay.. Iss bar tu mujhse nahi bachega..

He gets out of the Car... A girl calls him..

Girl: akshay.. Wait..

Akshay: Tum.. (Drags her aside) Tum yaha kya kar rahi ho..

Girl: (crying) akshay tum mere sath aisa kaise kar sakte ho..

Akshay: just shut up.. Tum sari ladkiya aisi hi hoti ho.. thoda sa bhao kya de diya.. piche hi pad jati ho.. aur fir.. Maine aisa bhi kya kar diya.. Jo bhi hua usme tumhari bhi marzi thi..

Girl: Akshay.. Please.. Tum aisa nahi kar sakte mere sath..

Akshay: shutup.. Warna mujhse bura aur koi nahi hoga.. Tumhari bhalaii isi me hai kit um mera peecha karna chorh do.. Samjhi.. (And he leaves from there and girls still crying..)

Piya was walking from there and watched all this drama unknowing that akshay is Abhay's step brother..

Piya: how insensitive boy.. Poor girl.. (She was about to go to her but she already left)(and Piya moves ahead)

There is a long que of students for submitting admission form..

Neha: Abhay.. line kitni lambi hai.. Humara form submit hote hote to 4 baj jayenge..

Arjun: line to lambi hai.. par hum ek sath hi submit karenge.. so that our roll nos. will be together..

Neha: hey Piya.. Piya.. Piya..

Piya: (calls all them) hi..

Neha: hi.. lagta hai kafi der so ho..

Piya: ya.. but its too hot here.. upper se ye forms v incomplete hai.

Neha: what?

Piya: ya.. I have never filled anything.. I didn't understand..

Neha: to abb...

Piya: I donno...

Abhay: lao... Main fill kar deta hu...

Piya: Thanks Abhay..

Abhiya moves a side.. Abhay sits in a bench and Piya also.. And they fills that.. Tamanna comes and watch them..

Jay: Yaar.. Kahan itni dhoop me khade ho gaye..

Arjun: kya kare.. Admission to lena hi padega na..

Abhay and Piya had done.. And Abhay notices Tamanna..

Piya: tahank u so much Abhay..

Abhay: excuse me Piya..

Piya: Ya sure..

And Abhay moves to Tamanna.. Tamanna starts walking fast to ignore him and Abhay follows her and overtakes her.

Tamanna: Mera rasta chorho Abhay..

Abhay: tumhe ho kya gaya hai.. Pehle to kabhi aise behave nahi kiya tumne..

Tamanna: pehle to tumne bhi esa nahi kiya Abhay..

Abhay: maine kya kiya..

Tamanna: jane do Abhay.. Tum nahi samjhoge..(She crosses him)

Abhay: ek minute Tammy.. (Tammy stops) kya tum mujhe oori bat bataogi ki maine esa kya kiya hai jot um itni naraz ho..

Tamanna: tumne kuch nahi kiya.. Ye sab jo kuch bhi ho raha hai.. Sab meri galti hai.. Bas meri..

Abhay: Tammy pls.. Bas ek baar kaho..  (Tammy is silent) (After a breath comes in front of her and holds her shoulders) Kya in sabki wajah Piya hai?

Tammy: (looks at his face and then puts her head down but don say anything)

Abhay: Tammy.. Main bas Piya ki help kar raha tha.. Kal raat wo hamari mehman thi.. Aur is city me nayi hai.. Hamare group me bhi nayi hai.. Main use utna hi response de raha tha jitna ki tumlog ya Neha use dete.. Ab usme tumhari narazgi ka koi matlab nahi tha..

Tammy: aur tumhara bronze uske pass..

Abhay: kal hum garden me takra gaye the.. v both didn't notice each.. Aur usime mera bronze uski chain k sath fans gaya.. Par tumne mujhe bahut hurt kiya.. Itna bhi bharosa nahi tumhe mujhpar..

Tammy: I am sorry Abhay.. Maine ye sab realize nahi kiya.. Aur tum par shaq kar baithi.. (with wet eyes)

Abhay: (wiping her tears) shh.. Bas.. its ok.. ab rona band.. Ek bat jaan lo Tammy.. Piya ya koi bhi.. Hamare beech nahi aa sakti.. u r my most special friend.. ab piya par shaq mat karna.. We should get a healthy bonding with her.. okk.. (and hugs her) (he gets a call)

End of sixteen Episode



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RajeevsKitty Senior Member

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Posted: 16 January 2012 at 9:44am | IP Logged
i know 
u all 
r l'll 
 trust me.. 
u wil l
dis story..

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--Rose-- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 16 January 2012 at 9:47am | IP Logged
NICE UPDATE YAAR:-) but i dont like Abhay and Tamanna JODI:-(:-( HOPE ABHAY AND PIA WILL TOGATHER SOON:-):-) NOW waiting 4 the next update ... Cont soon:-):-) Hug
bellaaa IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 16 January 2012 at 10:19am | IP Logged
yar i dont like abhay with tammy hate tht thing but hope as u said tht we like this story hope so u unite abhiya together plzzz make it fast somethg tht make abhiya in a bond yar plzzz waiting 4 tht updateSmile when my abhiya get closer
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Posted: 16 January 2012 at 10:36am | IP Logged
lovely update..though i dnt like abhay n tammy bt as u said it wil be will wait for it

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