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PYAAR KII YEH EK KAHAANII (Page 7)

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Posted: 12 January 2012 at 7:29am | IP Logged

thirteen episode


Tammy and Abhay  agrees n dey dance and Abhay moves

Piya: xcuse me Jay.. m just coming..

Jay: ya sure(Neha comes n asks him to dance n now Jay n Neha starts dancing)

Piya moves to Abhay who was standing near of bar

 

Piya: waiter I want strabarry milkshake with soda..

Waitor: sorry mad'm stock me strawberry milkshake khatam ho gaya..

Abhay: Piyali, come with me.. in will get u that..

Piya: tum dilwaoge.. ok..

 

 

Abhay picks a bottle of soda and moves to their kitchen and asks Piya to sit for a while.. he open refrigerator and tooks strawberry icecream and milk and makes 2 chilled glasses of milkshake.. and gives one to Piya.. Piya sips one..


Piya: hmmm.. itna yummy milkshake to mene kabhi taste nahi kiya..

Abhay(with a blush and smile)thanks Piyali..

Piya: call me Piya.. wese mujhe apna ghar nahi dikhaoge..

Abhay: ya sure..

And they moves.. Abhay shows her his house.. and his bedroom..




Piya: wow.. Tumhara ghar to bahut hi khubsurat hai.. aur tumhara room.. its not like boys room

Abhay: matlab

Piya: means its not like those boys room.. na koi models k ya supersports car k posters hai aur na hi koi mess.

Abhay: (with smile) mujhe meri cheezien apni sahi jagah par hi pasand hai.. and m not interested in those k**gfi***r  calendar models. Mujhe simple girls jyada beautiful lagti hai..

Piya: owe that so sweet..

(she watch a picture of a lady in wall )

Piya: ye kaun hai?

Abhay: my mom..

Piya:wow she looks so beutifull.. where is she now?

Abhay: (with l'll pain) she is .. ( door opens and vivek enters and Abhay couldn't answer)

Vivek: dude what are u doing here.. sab neeche enjoy kar rahe hain..

Abhay: ya we are coming.. Piyali..aah Piya(smiles) lets go..

Piya: ya sure..



In dance floor

Tammy is now with Jay and Neha is with another boy, Arjun is with another girl.. vivek was coming)

Tammy: (looks for Abhay,) aah where is Abhay..?

Jay: yaar ye thik nahi.. tum sirf Abhay Abhay kyu karti ho.. samne hum bhi hai.. hum par v nigahein daal diya karo..

Tammy: Shutup jay.. aisi baat nahi hai.. bas yu hi puch rahi thi..

Vivek: ( he was listening) tumhara Abhay Piya ko apna bedroom dikha raha hai.. abhi aata hi hoga..

Tammy: what (worried n feels a pain)

Vivek: yaar tum bhi na.. wo Piya ko hamara ghar dikha raha hai.. aata hi hoga.. lo aa bhi gaya..

Abhay and Piya were coming with a smile.. and as they arrive Tammy was upto say something but Piya interrupts

Piya: wow love this song..(smiles)

Abhay: will you dance with me..?

Piya: ya sure..



(they start dancing in te-amo song)now Dj announce something




end of thirteen episode

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Posted: 12 January 2012 at 7:57am | IP Logged
hey AMAGING UPDATE:-) BUT ITNA CHOTA UPDATE??? :-):-)

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Posted: 12 January 2012 at 8:04am | IP Logged
SO GUYS.. I HOPE KI AAP SABKO UPDATE PASAND AAYA..


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Posted: 12 January 2012 at 8:14am | IP Logged
definately tht update was awsome superb becz is mai abhiya sath hain...Wink nice update..so lovely when piya said yummy milkshake and abhay blush hahhaha...abhiya dance together wow great update
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Posted: 12 January 2012 at 8:18am | IP Logged
nice update ...Smile
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Posted: 12 January 2012 at 9:37pm | IP Logged
nyc update but its too short...
abhay pia dancing cool...
waiting 4 DJ anouncement...
cont soon n thanks 4 d pm
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Posted: 13 January 2012 at 2:06am | IP Logged

 Abhay and Piya were coming with a smile.. and as they arrive Tammy was upto say something but Piya interrupts

Piya: wow love this song..

Abhay: will you dance with me..?

Piya: ya sure..


(They start dancing in te-amo song) now Dj announces something

Dj Raunak: so guys Raunak ki mehfil ko aap enjoy to kar rahe hai na?


Crowed: yo'''''.

Dj raunak: (smiles and says) to bas aaj ki raunak ko aur badane ke liye ye gana main dedicate karna chahunga iss lovely couple ko.. (And Dj spots Abhay and Piya)


Neha: oh wow..

(Background music is now Pyaar ki ek kahaani suno)(Abhiya with a smile dancing under spot light) (Tammy is little unconscious.. but jay again takes her to dance)(Now spotlight is moving to every couple and after lots of masti Dj says)

Dj raunak: guys.. Now it's time to say good bye.. But before going this song is all for u..

He plays jhoom fakira jhoom..


Arjun: now lets have group dance..

Piya: what?

Vivek: isme no couple but friends dance..

(They all start dancing in one group.. Abhay is now near to Tammy, Piya nwas with arjun and jay and a girl)

Tammy: Abhay kya tum Piya ko apna bedroom show karne gaye the?

Abhay: ya.. but sirf bedroom nahi usko poora ghar dikhaya maine.. Hmm (with a naughty smile) lagta hai tumhe bura laga..

Tammy: y so? Muje kyu bura lagega.. Mene to bas aise hi pucha tha..

Abhay: agar tumhe bura laga to aage se mai kisi bhi ladki ko apna ghar dikhane nahi jaunga.. (aur we smile karte hue dance karte hai..)Smile

Neha: oh my God..  Tammy.. so possessive..

Tammy: kya yaar' esa kuch nahi hai..

Neha: bas bas, hume sab pata hai..

(Mrs re comes)

Mrs Re: Tammy, beta chalo ab hume nikalna hai.. bahut der ho gayi hai..

Tammy: ya mamma, bas main abhi aayi..

(she moves back to Abhay)

Tammy: Abhay main.. (same time Piya comes n interrupts)

Piya: Abhay.. mai to bhul hi gayi, its ur bronze.. take this.. (and she puts that on Abhay's coat)

Abhay: Thanks Piya..

Tammy: Abhay ka bronze tumhare pass..

Piya: ya wo mere locket me fans gaya tha..

(It again hurts tammay)

Abhay:Tammy tum kuch keh rahi thi..

Tammy: (with heavy heart) main ja rahi hu Abhay.. sayad mujhe dair ho gayi..

Abhay: ok main tumhe drop kar deta hu..Smile

Tammy: na.. Main aur mamma chale jayenge, tum baki k guests ko attend karo(looks at Piya and leaves)

Abhay: ab isko kya hua.. (Piya comes and puts her hand to his soilders)

Abhay was looking Tammy going.. Tammy turns back and watch abhay and Piya together and Piya's hand in his soilder.. a drop of tear rolls on her cheek)

Mrs Re: kya hua beta,.. khadi kyu ho gayi chalo..

Tammy: ya mamma..( and she wipes her tear and moves..)

Abhay: (thinking) Tammy ki ankho me aansu kyu the.. and she notices Piya and says) Piya..

Piya: tumne mujhe bataya nahi.. where is ur parents?

Abhay gets hurt and he was about to say something but Dj holds the mike..

Dj Raunak: so guys I hopw u all enjoyed my beats.. har achi cheez ka ant hota hai aur ab waqt aa gaya hai ki main aap sab se vida lu.. Izzazat..



Piya: ok abhay i have to leave now.. bye neha, vivek jay and jay.. I really enjoyed ur company..

Neha: bye Piya..

Abhay was standing there.. Arjun comes to him..

Arjun: oye tammy aur Piya dono gaye.. tu abhi bhi yahi khada hai..

Abhay: shut-up Champ.. me wese hi pareshan hu..

Arjun: kya baat kar raha hai.. mere hote hue pareshaan.. achcha bata kya hua.. 

Abhay: chorh na yaar..

Arjun: batata hai ki du ek..

Abhay: are.. achcha sun.. tammy jab yaha se ja rahi thi to she was crying.. as if something hurted her..Ouch

Arjun: bas.. are ye ladkiya bahut possessive hoti hai.. tammy ne esa sirf piya ke karan kiya..

Abhay: Piya.. par wo usne kya kiya..

Arjun: tu to bas.. are samjha kar.. ladki ke dil ki baat(abhay looks lto him as confusion)arjun continues) yaar tammy ko Piya se jalan ho rahi thi.. aur tu bhi use bina bataye Piya ko apne ghar ghumane le gaya.. aur tera bronzebhi.. are haan.. ek baat bata.. Piya ka locket tere bronze pe fasa kaiseWink

(with naughty smile)

Abhay: shut up Arjun.. aisa kuch nahi.. wo bas Garden me hum dono takra gaye the.. usime...

Jay calls Arjun

Jay: oye chalna hai ya nahi.. bye abhay.. bahut raat ho gayi hai.. hume nikalna hai.. u take care of urself ok..

Arjuun: bye abhay (hugs him)(looks at neha.. who was busy in talking and smiling with her friends) smiles and leaves

Abhay: ya sure.. bye everyone..


Mrs. Aggarwal was making her bed and mr. aggarwal was coming out of washroom wiping his hair.. ooks at his wife and throw out his towel in bed.. both are in their night dresses..

Mrs Aggarwal: aaeeii.. Veer.. ye kya tarika hai.. geela towel bed me faik diya..

(she picks the towel to hang that.. and Virendra holds her hand and drags her to him and she fells in bed after loosing her balance)

Supriya: yee kya hai.. chorho mujhe.. 3-3 bachche hai ghar par. Koi agar aise dekhega to kya sochega..

Supriya: chorho na aise kya dekh rahe ho mujhe..

Virendra: aaj kitne saalo ke bad tumne mujhe fir se veer kaha.. (holding her cheek) inn saalo me kitne toofan aaye hamari zindagi me.. Agar tum na hoti to mai to kabka tutt hi jata.. (virendra takes  her right hand in his hand) tumhare niswarth pyar ne mere pure ghar ko kitne achche se sambhala.. Neha Vivek aur Abhay in teeno ki itni achchi parwarish.. warna aajkal k bachche apne maa-baap ki power ka kitna galat istemal karte hain.. par hamare bachcho ne aisa kabhi nahi kiya.. and its only because of you..

tum meri zindagi me kisi mehakte hue foul ki tarah ho jiski mehak meri zindagi me fail gayi.. (kisses on his hand)

Supriya: Veer.. Maine apni zindagi me sirf tumhe hi chaha hai aur ye jo kuch bhi maine kiya.. it's a small dedication of my love to u.. 

 

End of fourteenth Episode

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Edited by KITTY&ME - 13 January 2012 at 2:10am

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Posted: 13 January 2012 at 2:29am | IP Logged
nice update but yar i really dont like tammy...abhay cares 4 tammy not 4 piya yar...waiting 4 somethg just happened tht abhiya came closer

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