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Posted: 08 January 2012 at 4:34am | IP Logged
nice add me in pm list

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hema_rawat Goldie

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Posted: 08 January 2012 at 7:03am | IP Logged
nice update ...
bellaaa IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 08 January 2012 at 9:27pm | IP Logged
tht was nice ff but plzz tht girl was no one else than piyaaa plzzz after reading ur ff waitg 4 abhiya meeting piya some supernatural or not???? did abhay feel somethg 4 tammy yar say no no ...i dont want it yar...abhiya r awsome in any form superb ff plzzz add me in ur pm list...update soon

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RajeevsKitty Senior Member

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Posted: 09 January 2012 at 1:44am | IP Logged
Tenth episode
{Abhay washes his faceand wipes. And moves to the party hall but suddenly he bumps to a girl. She was about to fall but Abhay handles her. And he is lost in her beautiful deep eyes. He can't move her eyes from her moving lips, shiny eyes. }Wink
girl: you idiot. Don't you have eyes to see? 
Abhay: (no action.)
girl: hello... M talking to you. Are you deaf also?(mind me, piya kahan fass gayi tu.. uff ander ki ye party kisi mla ki.. aur bahar yr badtammez.. behra blind uff.. its too irritating) she is trying to free her)
Abhay: (totally lost)
Piyali: Excuse me! Now please put me down. (And she pinches)
Abhay:.. ah.. m sorry miss.. I was.. just…
Piyali: sorry.. hmm u better be..
(And she turns but her locket gets stuck with Abhay's bronge. She is about to fall again but Abhay saves him again. Piyali tries to free that.)
Piyali: O God.. ah.. mm… ye nikal kyun nahi raha.
Abhay: let me try.
(Abhay is also trying but unsuccessful. Then he puts off his bronge and gives that to piyali. And he lefts)
Piyali: ajeeb ladka hai. Apna kimti bronge mujhe de diya isne. (And now she frees her locket with Abhay's bronge)

Abhay enters in the party.
Mr. Aggarwal: ladies and gentlemen. Here is my nephew, Abhay. Come my son. 
(Abhay goes to him. Now open this. Mr. Aggarwal gives him a bottle of champaingn. Abhay opens that and pours that to Mr. Aggarwal's and few others' glasses. And Mr. Aggarwal gives him a glass of but he refuses. And he picks a glass of softdrink. It made Mr. Aggarwal smile again)
Mr. Aggarwal: Abhay, come main tumhe apne kuch khass mehmano se milwana chchta hu.( Abhay looks here and there as f searching someone.)
Mr. Aggarwal: Abhay, ye hain hamare party ken aye member, mr. sharatchandra. 
Abhay: hello( hand sake)
Mr. Aggarwal: aur ye hai Mr. kappor. Kapoor industries ke malik.
Abhay: hello( hand sake)
Mr. Aggarwal: aur inhe to tum jante hi ho. Mr. Prasad.
Abhay: ofcourse.
Mr. Aggarwal: Ab aao tumhe khass logo se milwata hu.( takes him to a couple)
Abhay ye hain Mr. and Mrs. Chandra, the famous business tycoon. 
Abhay: Namaste uncle Namaste aunty. Aapka naam to kai bar suna. Aur aaj apse mulakat bhi ho gayi.
Mrs. Priya Chandra: bte, naam to aapka bhi hamne suna hai. Bahut man tha aapse milne ka. Congratulations. 
Abhay: thanks aunty.
(Mrs. Aggarwal arrives)
Mrs. Aggarwal: aah.. Mrs. Chandra, aapki beti nahi dikhayi de rahi. I thot c wud also be coming.
Mr. Malaya Chandra: Mrs. Aggarwal, there is my daughter, piyali.
(Mrs. Aggarwal and Abhay turns back and there is piyali. Coming towards the party. Looking gorgeous in black dress. And piyali comes to them.)
Abhay: (thinking) to ye inki beti hai.
(Piyali looks at Abhay)
Piyali: ye to wahi ladka hai.
Mrs. Aggarwal: piyali, wat a beautiful name. as you are. 
Piyali: thank u aunty.
Mrs. Chandra: Piya, ye hai mr. and Mrs. Aggarwal. Mr. Aggarwal yaha ke MLA hai. Aur ye hai inka bhanja, Abhay. Isne India me top kia hai. And ye party bhi issi ke liye hai.
Piyali: Hello aunty, hello uncle, hi.
Abhay: aunty sirf mere liye nahi, mere bhai behano ke liye bhi. 
Mrs. Aggarwal: Abhay, y don't u give company to piyali. Wo hamari mehman hai.
Abhay: sure. (And abhiya leaves)

Abhay takes her to Neha Vivek and Arjun.
Abhay: piyali, ye hai meri cousin Neha, and vivek, and my friend Arjun.
Piyali: hi.
Abhay: where is tammy?Confused
Piyali: tammy?
Abhay: my best friend Tamanna.
Neha: tumhari best friend abhi tak aayi hi nahi.
Abhay: (thinking) what, she has not come yet? Par usne to kaha tha ki wo aayegi. Kya hua hoga.
(Abhay calls her. But no response)

Piyali: so Abhay, tumne India me top kia hai. Cool. Handsome hone ke sath sath intelligent bhi ho.Smile
Abhay: thanks. (Abhay now in every 3 minuts looks towards the enterance)
Piyali: so guys whats ur future plan.
Neha: we will take admission to best college.
Piyali: owe. Which college?
Arjun: Mount college.
Piyali: Oh wow. Me too going there.
Neha: oh that's gr8. Sayad hamara sath iss party se bhi aage ka hai. Kyun Abhay.
Abhay: ya (with no interest, coz he is looking for tammy)
(Piyali notice that Abhay is worried for something, but she ignores. And join Neha Arjun and Vivek.)
Vivek: so tum kaha se ho? 
Abhay: excuse me guys.
(And he moves to enterance door and stands in front of that. Mrs. Aggarwal notices him and comes to him)
End of tenth episode

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RajeevsKitty Senior Member

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Posted: 09 January 2012 at 1:50am | IP Logged
Originally posted by rashi.rose

wowww... LOVELY UPDATE:-) poor Abhay:-( That girl was Pia na?? :-) Superb:-):-) CANT WAIT FOR NEXT UPDATE:-) PLEASE IS BAAR UPDATE THODA AUR LONG DENA PLEASE?:-)... Continue soon:-).,.

10q so much 4 liking...

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Posted: 09 January 2012 at 1:55am | IP Logged
Wowww.,. Finaly ABHIYA meet:-):-) thats so CUTEE:-):-) really LOVELY update:-):-)... I LOVE IT:-):-) CONTINUETsoon dear:-):-)

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RajeevsKitty Senior Member

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Posted: 09 January 2012 at 2:08am | IP Logged
Originally posted by hema_rawat

nice update ...

bellaaa IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 09 January 2012 at 2:32am | IP Logged
thanks 4 pm me...really nice meeting f abhiya...abhay is so much attached to tammy...hope new bonding btw abhiya like this...did abhay love tammy???i dont understand it abhiya made 4 them yar...lovely update

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