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PYAAR KII YEH EK KAHAANII (Page 35)

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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 1:20pm | IP Logged
wishing u all a very happy bright lightful safe diwali..




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Posted: 12 November 2012 at 2:18pm | IP Logged
hey u update yupieee
amazing update
but really curious abut teddy story of piya...
but plsss soon update now
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Posted: 12 December 2012 at 3:53am | IP Logged

Fourty episode

 

In Chandra Mansion

 

Piya's room..  door knocks.. Piya wakes up and opens d door..

 

It was Abhay..

Piya: (thinking) Abhay yaha.. kahi wo fir se us teady ki bat to nahi karega..

Abhay: andar an eke liye nahi kahogi..

Piya: ofcourse abhay.. come inside..

Abhay n Piya both sits in bed..

Abhay: so abhi tabiyat kaisi hai tumhari..

Piya: m.. m fine.. kal sayad weather change hone ki wajah se meri tabiyat kharab ho gayi thi.. mere sath aisa hi hota hai.. kal car me bhi bataya than a tumhe.. ki mai thik nahi hu.. sayad weakness ki waja se faint ho gayi thi..

Abhay: relax Piya.. maine tumse sirf ye pucha kit um kaisi ho..

Piya: ya.. wo m sorry..(abhay kal raat ke bare me kuch bhi nahi puch raha hai.. mujhe b khud se is bare me nahi bolna chahiye..)

Abhay: its ok Piya.. ah.. this is ur Xerox..

Piya: (taking that) Abha main subah se yaha pade pade bore si ho gayi hu.. can u please take me out..

Abhay: Piya par.. tum abhi bimar ho.. abhi..

Piya: par war kuch nahi.. main yaha aur jyada bimar ho jaungi.. pls Abhay..

Abhay: okk.. but pehle aunty se permission..

Piya: wo sab chorh do mujhpe.. (n she talks to her mom on intercom)

Abhay: but Piya I think u should not go out..

Piya: please abhay.. do u wanna see me die? I need fresh air..

Abhay: ok lets go..

 

In park

Neha was moving here n der n was waiting for someone.. constantly looking at her watch..

Neha: God.. ye kitni der lagata hai.. mai hi pagal hu iske piche.. aur meri parwah hi nahi..

Her bf: sorry janu.. (its arjun)

Neha: late..

Arjun: I know sweetheart but tum to janti ho na me kyu late hua?

Neha: har bar yahi bahana..

Arjun: look at my eyes neha..(comes closer to her n holds her.. eye contact) do u think I will ever make excuse with u?

Neha: (Stammer) arr..Arjun.. me bas..

A boy distracts them by ball..

Boy: uncle ball please..

Arjun: ya.. ye lo.. (goes to boy n gives his ball then again comes to Neha)

Arjun: m sorry Neha.. meri wajah se tumhe intezar karna pada..

Neha: its completely ok Arjun..

They sits on bench near by.. neha puts her head on Arjun's shoulders..

Arjun: (moving His fingers on Neha's cheek) pata hai aaj Vivek ne hume pakad lia hota..

Neha: matlab?

Arjun: he was trying to snatch my mobile.. agar hamare sms pad lie hote to ganimat aa jati..

Neha: arjun.. ek bat kahu..

Arjun: ha Neha.. kaho na..

Neha: mujhe ye chup chup ke milna pasand nahi.. aakhir kab tak aise..

(Arjun holds her face in his hands n looks with a care in his eye)

Arjun: Neha.. humne mil kart aye kiya than a.. ki jabtak hum apne pairo par khade nahi ho jate.. tab tak hum kisi ko bhi ye nahi batayenge.. so.. we have to wait for that time.. and I am sure ki wo din jald hi aayega.. aur mai tumhe sari duniya ki khushiya de paunga jo mai ab nahi de pa raha hu.. but for this I want to have your faith in me.. do u trust me..

Neha: (with sparkle of love in her eyes nodes in yes)

And he again fills her in his arms..

Abhay and Piya were roaming in park together..

Abhay:(thinking) Piya toh aise behave kar rahi hai jaise kuch hua hi na ho..

Piya: abhay.. m tired wanna sit.. common lets go there..  (pointing a bench)

They come across there.. and suddenly Abhay looks at his right and stunned.. looking him like this Piya also looks there.. Neha was holding Arjun in his arms.. Arjun's back was showing..

 

Abhay comes to them with anger and Piya looking him like this gets worried n tries to stop him n calls her..

Piya: Abhay.. ruk jao Abhay..

By that time Abhay picked Arjun from his t-shirt and arjun and abhay both gets shocked.. Neha also stands up and she too is shocked and her face gets fed.. piya reached there..

Piya gets l'll tired and gets l'll faint.. and was about to drop.. Neha looks at her..

Neha: Piya.. (she goes to her speedly n makes her balance)

Arjun and Abhay also gets her.. 

Arjun: Piya are you okk?

Piya: yeah.. m fine.. m l'll week..

Abhay: piya.. ye lo.. pani piyo..

Piya sips from bottle..

Neha: Piya when you are not ok toh fir bahar kyun aayi..

Abhay: Piya se question karne se pehle mujhse ye batao kit tum aur arjun park me is terah kar kya rahe the? Yaha toh mujhe koi parlor nazar nai aa raha.. ya tumhe yaha special natural treatment milti hai..

Arjun: abhay.. tum neha se aise kaise.. (abhay stops him in mid)

Abhay: tumse mai bad me bat karunga.. pehle apni behan se to nipat lu..

Neha fills her eyes with tears n embaracement.. Piya looks at her n feels bad for her..

Piya: abhay tum use hurt kar rahe ho..

Abhay: Piya.. she is hurting us.. what about my family.. mamu's pride.. mami's faith.. she is destroying it all.. n my friend too..

Arjun: Abhay.. u r misunderstanding.. humne kisi k respect ko hurt nai kia he.. hum dono ek dusre ko pyar karte hai.. parhum apni had jante hai..

Neha bursts with crying.. Arjun comes to her and tries to console her..

Looking this.. Abhay leaves that place with anger.. and Piya tries to stop him.. she calls him back but he moved on.. Piya looks arjun and neha.. n then runs to Abhay..

 

Abhay was walking in speed with anger.. he reached to his car.. piyacalls him from back..

Piya: ruk jao Abhay.. pls..

Abhay stops and hits over his car..

 

 

End of  Forty episode

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Posted: 12 December 2012 at 12:12pm | IP Logged
nice update
ohh poor neha and arjun got catch in front of abhiya
so know piya will make abhay understand
hope he take side of them
cont soon
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Posted: 13 December 2012 at 6:30am | IP Logged
Nice...thanks for the pm..it was great...just lovely..
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Posted: 14 December 2012 at 7:00am | IP Logged

hi very nice update dear Smile
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Posted: 31 December 2012 at 3:45am | IP Logged
sry 4 late reply

awsm update!
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Posted: 31 December 2012 at 11:31am | IP Logged
Happy new year every1. 

thanks for liking.

and new update is on its way.. :)

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