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Trouble. IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 25 April 2012 at 5:16am | IP Logged
amazing updt..continue soon n thnx 4 d pm

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bellaaa IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 25 April 2012 at 5:29am | IP Logged
okkk yar wait 4 of luck 4 ur examzzz

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Jarin04 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 25 April 2012 at 10:26am | IP Logged
Luved ur ff. Pls add me to ur pm list

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RajeevsKitty Senior Member

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Posted: 25 April 2012 at 11:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Jklmnop

Luved ur ff. Pls add me to ur pm list

thanks dear for liking it..

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RajeevsKitty Senior Member

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Posted: 28 April 2012 at 9:06am | IP Logged

Thirty eighth episode


Piya gets faint.. and she fells down..

Looking piya like that.. abhay throws that teddy in his car and runningly comes to piya..

Abhay: (holds piya's cheek) Piya.. Piya.. aankhe kholo Piya.. (slaps her gently) Piya,..

Watchman and a servant comes to them..

Abhay: gate open karo.(he picks Piya and runs inside the house.. he runs like that in upstairs then in colidoor  and finally in Piya's room..)

Nancy runs and come to them..

Nancy: piya baby.. (to Abhay) kya hua piya baby ko?

Abhay: wo behosh ho gayi hai(putting her down in bed.. and adjust pillow for her)

(nancy calls the doctor)

(abhay sprinkles water drops on Piya's face and then rubs her hands to make her awake..)

Abhay: com-on piya.. open ur eyes..

Nancy: abhay baba.. piya baby kaise..

Abhay: she was not feeling well isliye hum party se yaha aa gaye.. and usne clinic jane se bhi mana kar dia.. piya ghar k bahar hi behosh ho gayi and she fell down.. (to himself) abhi teddy k bare me batana thik nahi hoga..

Doctor comes there.. and at the same time a voice comes from outsde.. which was  mr n mrs chandra's car horn.. nancy goes out for them..

Abhay stands up.. and doctor checks up her..

Doctor: inhe halka sa fever hai.. main injection de deta hu.. thodi der me thik ho jayegi..

Nancy comes to them with mrs Chandra and mr Chandra..

Mr Chandra: kya hua doctor

Doctor: bas mamuli sa bukhar hai.. subah tak thik ho jayegi..

Mrs Chandra sits besides her daughter.. and rubs her hands gently on Piya's head..

Mrs chandra: thanks abhay.. tumne waqt par Piya ko ghar drop kar diya.. aur yaha itni der tak ruke sirf iske liye..

Abhay: aunty.. Piya meri bhi dost hai.. iske liye itna nahi karunga.. (looks at his watch)aunty raat kafi ho chuki hai.. mujhe ab chalna chahiye..

Mr Chandra: Abhay.. main mr aggarwal se bat kar leta hu.. bahut raat ho chuki hai.. tum kal chale jana..

Abhay: no uncle iski koi zarurat nahi.. I need to go.. mujhe mere kuch pending kaam pure karne hai.. good night..


Abhay leaves from there.. he turns his car around and moves to Aggarwal house.. tammy and jay were going from that side.. and she saw him..

Tammy calls someone..

Abhay's cell rings..

Abhay: hi tammy.. narazgi gayi ki nahi..

Tammy: kaha ho tum abhi..

Abhay: main.. bas party se nikal chukka hu.. bas ghar ki taraf..

Tammy disconnects..

They reach to tammy's house..

jay: tammy tumhara ghar aa gaya..

Tammy comes out..

Jay: good night..

Tammy: goodnight jay.. and thanks ki tum mujhe music program me le gaye..

Jay: its all my pleasure tammy.. kal milte hai,. Bye


Tammy comes to her room..

She sits on her bed..

Tammy: abhay ye sab kyu kar raha hai.. 

she lies down to her bed and cries.. she hugs her pillow tightly..


In Aggarwal house

Mrs Aggarwal: Vivek, Neha.. raat bahut ho chuki.. tum dono abhi apne kamre me jao..

Neha: mom.. hum abhay ka wait kar rahe hai..

Vivek: ya mom.. piya ki tabiyat achanak kharab ho gayi.. we need to know ki hua kya usko?

Mrs Aggarwal: wow.. good to know ki mere bacho ko dosto ki fiqra hai..


Abhay enters.. hanging his jacket on his hand..

Mrs Aggarwal: abhay bhi aa gaya.. jaan lo use jo puchna hai..

Neha and vivek rush to him..

Vivek: Abhay.. yaar.. piya kaisi hai abhi..

Neha: ha kya hua tha usko..

Abhay: use fever ho gaya.. and uske bad wo behosh bhi ho gayi..

Neha and vivek gets shock..

Abhay: don't worry.. doctor ne check up kia hai.. aura b who thik hai.. raat bahut ho chuki hai.. ab hume so jana chahiye..

Mrs Aggarwal: abhay,. Beta tum bhi jao aur so jao..

Abhay nodes in yes.. n dey leave..


Abhay enters in his room.. picks a towel and clothes and goes to his washroom.. comes out..

He sits on his chair..

Remembers.. (flashback) (background music from pkyek when piya came to know abt abhay dat he is vampi.. and she was remembering how abhay saved her from fire in his real face.. and she writes abhay's name unwillingly by peeling in her bench den removes that by nailpolish..)


piya's smiling face in party..

Her dance and enjoyment..

piya's behavior suddenly changes in garden.. when she looked at that teddy..

she got scared.. and run away from there..

in car.. she was totally tensed..

and when Abhay showed her that teddy again.. she got faint and fell down..


when nancy was asking abhay about Piya.. he looked at Piya's room.. it was full of softtoys.. n different colorful teddy bears..


Abhay: piya ka karma to puri tarah se teddys se bhara tha.. to fir piya ko us teddy se kya problem hui..


He stands up.. opens his wardrobe and took out the same teddy bear..


He remembers doctor's word.. (flashback)

Doctor: sayad koi darawani cheez ya koi baat se lage sadme ke karan ye behosh ho gayi hai..

Abhay: doctor ek request hai aapse..

Doctor: ji.. kahiye..

Abhay: aap filhal Piya ke behosh hone ki waja kisi se b na bataye.. I need to know the exact reason of it.. 

Doctor: (thinks for a while) ok abhay..

Flashback ends

Abhay: aakhir aisa kya hai iss teddy me.. jo piya itni jyada darr gayi.. ki behosh ho gayi.. she lost her consiousness..


End of thirty eight episode



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-CRJ- IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 28 April 2012 at 9:48am | IP Logged
Awsm update luved it

Edited by abhiyakreya - 28 April 2012 at 9:57am

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RajeevsKitty Senior Member

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Posts: 421

Posted: 28 April 2012 at 10:22am | IP Logged
hi all.. 

hope u all like dis update..

now next thirty ninth epi will be posting in the month of june..

as i am having xams..

and will be onn or after 5 june..

till then..

pls have patience..

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Peehu24 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 28 April 2012 at 10:36am | IP Logged
awesome update..whats with teddy?

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