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Posted: 06 January 2012 at 7:38am | IP Logged
nice update
 nw i m waitng 4 abhiya meeting

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Posted: 07 January 2012 at 5:11am | IP Logged

Eight episode

Neha was wearing her blue suit.

Neha: hmmm' not bad. Neha.. Tum jo bhi pehno.. You are always beautiful.

Abhay, u are right. Aaj ki party mein m going to rock.

Vivek in his room. He was wearing his jacket. And watch. And then he spread his deo.

Vivek: beta jaldi se taiyar ho ja. Warna mom watt lagayegi. (He is combing his hairs and his mobile rings)

Vivek: hi hot chicks.

Person in cellphone: u scoundrel. Who the hell is shilpa.

Vivek: shilpa.. mm.. main kisi shilpa ko nahi janta..

Person in the cellphone: jhute makkar.(vivek apna sir pitta hai).. tumne mujhe jo bouqe bheja hai usme shilpa ka naam hai'

Vivek: Sheela.. there wud be a mistake for sure. Sayad shopkeeper ne confusion me likha ho. Belive me Jan. its not my mistake.

Sheela: sure.. U love me..

Vivek: sure jan.. I love u..

Sheela: oh my baby.. m sorry.. love u too muuah'

Vivek relaxed and leaves his room. In baramda he bumps neha.

Neha: idiot... Can't u c?

Vivek: oh... U can see well... Right'

Neha: mera mood kharab mat karo.

Vivek:  mood kharab unka hota hai jinke pas mind hota hai...

Neha: shutup..

Vivek: u shut up.

Neha: I'll kill u.

Vivek: as if I will leave u.

(Mrs Aggarwal arrives)

Mrs. Aggarwal: kya kar rahe ho tum dono. Mehman bahar khade hain and u both are fighting here. Go and host them.

Neha: mom pehle...

Mrs Aggarwal: didn't u hear what I did say?  Go right now.Angry

Both: (with mayushi) ok mom Unhappy

Mrs. Aggarwal: where is abhay? And she pushes Abhay's door.

{Abhay was putting his court on)


Mrs. Aggarwal: hmmm' someone is looking very hot. (Abhay turns to her)

Abhay: thanks Mami.

Mrs. Aggarwal: just wait a second. (She opens Abhay's wardrobe and picks a box, opens that and moves to Abhay) this will make u more handsome. And she puts a brounge to abhay's jacket. Ahh.. Now Ur dressing is complete.  Now go downstairs. Everyone is waiting for you.

Abhay goes downstairs. He again gets a ring and same.. it was of Mr. Aadarsh Khandelwal. Abhay gets irritated and he moves to his garden.


Abhay: ab kya hua? Mera din bigad kar aapko chain nahi mila jo aap ab meri sham barbad kar rahe ho?

Mr. Aadarsh: Beta.. ek barmeri bat to sun lo..

Abhay: Aapko ab bhi kuch kehna hai? Jo itne saalo pehle kaha tha use aapka ji nahi bhara? Aura b itne salo bad apko fir se kuch kehna hai? Bataiye Mr. Khandelwal.. Ab kehne aur sunne ke liye kya reh gaya hai.

Mr. Aadarsh: abhay. Maine tab jo kuch bhi kaha tha usme meri mazburi thi'

Abhay: Aap mazbur nahi the balki mujhe aur meri mom ko mazbur bana diya tha..  Aura ab main mazbur hu.. main aapko kabhi maaf nahi kar sakta(and he disconnects)


Mr. Aadarsh: beta par' (Thinking) kash kit um kabhi samajh sakte. Bhale hi ab tum mujhe apna baap bhi mat mano. Par mera ashirwad hamesha tumhare sath rahega.

Abhay is crying in garden. And flash back

Ashwini: tum aisa nahi kar sakte Aadarsh. Kisi ek ko chunna hi hoga tumhe.

Aadarsh: Main mazbur hu ash. Main kisi ek ko nahi chun sakta. Tum aur abhay meri zindagi ho. Main tumhare bagair nahi reh paunga.

Ashwini: to thik hai unhe chorh do..


Aadarsh: main nahi chorh sakta unhe. Tum samazti kyun nahi.

Ashwini: tumhe faishla karnahi padega. Ya to mujhe aur abhay ko chun lo ya fir chale jao hamari zindagi se.

Aadarsh wants to touch her but she moves and hugs small abhay (10 years old).

Aadarsh: please Ashwini' (But she is not listening) to fir thik hai. Main jaa raha hu'.

Ashwini: (shocked).Shocked (She hugs her son harder and cries)Cry


Ashwini is driving her car. And abhay is also with her.  She is worried and tensed, remembering all and Weeping. CrySuddenly a truck comes and she looses her balance and met with an accident.


In hospital

Abhay got small injuries but Ashwini is very serious. OuchVirendra and Supriya come to him and Mr. Aadarsh also comes and Virendra says.


Virendra: Ab kya lene aaye ho yahan.

Aadarsh: main apne biwi aur bte ke liye aaya hu yaha.

Virendra: ab tumhara inse koi rishta nahi.

Mr. Aadarsh drags abhay but mr. aggarwal stops him and abhay hugs Virendra.

Abhay: Mamu mujhe dad ke pas nahi jana. Wo bahut gande hain. Unhone mama ko rulaya. Main nahi jaunga (he cries) (Mr. Aggarwal consoles him and says).

Virendra: abhay. Ab aap apne mama mami aur neha aur vivek ke sath rahoge. Rahoge na.

Abhay: main dad ke pas nahi jaunga. Kabhi nahi jaunga. Main aapke pas rahunga. (Supriya hugs him and consoles him. Wipes his tears and kiss him.)

Supriya: haan beta. Ab tum mere pas rahoge. Mama-mami will love u a lot.

Virendra: Sun liya tumne. Now leave. Security take this man away from here.

Security guards push him)

Aadarsh: main apne bte ko apne pas bula kar hi rahunga. Dekh lena tum.

In court

Judge: Dono paksho ki dalilo ko sunte hue ye adaalat ye faisla leti hai ki abhay ki custody Mr. and Mrs. Virendra aggarwal  ko hi milegi.

Now abhay in garden cries.


End of eighth episode

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Edited by KITTY&ME - 07 January 2012 at 5:21am

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Posted: 07 January 2012 at 5:31am | IP Logged
dat was nice nd emotional update ..
 flashback was nice ...

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Posted: 07 January 2012 at 1:06pm | IP Logged
OMG:-D How can i missed it? ITS A WONDERFUL FF:-):-):-) I JUS LOVE IT:-):-):-) Abhay is so cute:-):-):-) PLEASE PM ME WHEN U UPDATE THE NEXT PART DEAR:-):-) CONTINUE SOON OK:-):-):-)

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Posted: 07 January 2012 at 10:35pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by rashi.rose

OMG:-D How can i missed it? ITS A WONDERFUL FF:-):-):-) I JUS LOVE IT:-):-):-) Abhay is so cute:-):-):-) PLEASE PM ME WHEN U UPDATE THE NEXT PART DEAR:-):-) CONTINUE SOON OK:-):-):-)

10x for liking dear...


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Ninth episode

Aggarwal Manson is all set for the party. Its Full of light and decorations. Waitors are moving here and there with cocktails. Guests are enjoying. Most of them are youth as this party is for Abhay Neha and Vivek. Mr. Virendra Aggarwal is welcoming his guests.

Guest: wonderful party Mr Aggarwal.Smile

Mr. Aggarwal: thank you mr. Sharma.

Another guest: Really Mr. Aggarwal. Jitni badi aapki shakshiyat. Utni hi badi hai aapki party.

Mr. Aggarwal: Par iss party ki dhoom hamari shakshiyat ki wajah se nahi hai. Iska kaaran kuch aur hai.Big smile

Guest: oh really! Kya hai wo wajah.

Mr. Aggarwal: mujhe ye batate hue behad khushi h=aur use bhi jyada garv mehsus ho raha hai ki mere bhanje ne pure desh me top kiya hai.

Guest: oh wow. Congratulations. Bhanje ki safalta par itni badi party.

Mr. Aggarwal: Mera bhanja Abhay mere bte ki tarah hi hai. Infact mere bachcho se badkar hai mere liye. Usne na sirf khud ko aage badaya balki mere bachcho ko bhi aage badne me madad ki hai. Jab wo aath sal ka tha tab se wo mere parivaar ka hissa hai. Aur mere jigar ka tukda hai. Ye party bhi ussi ke liye hai.

Guest: wo sab to thik hai mla sahib. Par aapke jigar ka tukda hai kaha. Hume nahi milayiega use.

Mr. Aggarwal: haan haan zarur. Abhay yahi hoga.(looks here and there to look for Abhay but not seeing him. He wents to supriya who is talking to her kitty party's friends)

Mrs. Aggarwal: oh this saree, its manish malhotra's design. And this ring, ye virendra paris se le aaye hain mere liye. 2 crores ka hai. Rare collections u know.

Mr. Aggarwal: Excuse me ladies,(drags Mrs. Aggarwal. And she moves with a smile)Supriya Abhay kahan hai? Mehman puch rahe hain.

Mrs. Aggarwal: Par wo to party me aaya tha. Maine khud use dekha tha neeche aate hue. Wait main Neha se puchti hu. (She moves to Neha who is busy with her friends)

Mrs. Aggarwal: Neha where is Abhay.

Neha: Abhay. Usko koi call aaya and he went to garden. Abhi bhi wapis nahi aaya. Wahi hoga sayad.

Mrs. Aggarwal: sayad.. ohk. Vivek. Ye kiske kapde hain.

Vivek: mom.. mom ye Abhay ne dia hai.

Mrs. Aggarwal: Abhay ne..Wink

Vivek: ya mom. Hamne aaj hi shopping ki hai. And he bought this for me. And earrings and bags and perfumes for Neha also.

Mrs. Aggarwal: what..Angry aur apne liye kya lia. Aur itne paise kaise aaye uske pass.

Vivek: bua ke account se jo paise aate hain na.. and usne apne lie kuch nahi lia.Smile

Mrs. Aggarwal: tum teeno ki bad me main khabar leti hu.(thinking) Abhay bhi na.. usko kab samaz aayegi. Angry

(And She moves to Mr. Aggarwal. He is talking to his party members and guests)

Mrs. Aggarwal: Abhay garden mein hain.

Mr. Aggarwal: ohk main dekhta hu. Excuse me gentlemen.

And Mr. Aggarwal moves to garden. He saw Abhay crying and he comes to him.

Mr. Aggarwal: Abhay.. What happened? Y u r crying. Kya hua mera bachcha?

Abhay hugs him and says

Abhay: mamu.. mom ki bahut yaad aa rahi hai.

Mr. Aggarwal: aadarsh ka call tha

Abhay: (apna sar jhuka ke... ankhein nam)Cry ya mamu… wo insane mujhe kabhi chain se jine nahi deta. Kya bigada hai maine unka. Kyun nahi jate we meri zindagi se..


Mr. Aggarwal: ro mat mere bachche. Tumhari mom tumhare pas nahi hai to kya. Tumhare sath uska ashrvad uska pyar hamesha hai. Aur fir main hu. Tumhari mami hai.  Neha Vivek sab hain tumhare sath. We all love you beta. (Abhay hugs him) bas mera bachcha. Ab aansu pocho. Aur ander aao. Everyone is waiting for you. Ye tumhari party hai. Aur ye saare arrangements tumhari khushi ke liye hai beat. Ab fresh ho jao aur ander chalo.

Abhay: ohk mamu. Main abhi aata hu.

(Mr. Aggarwal lefts)

Abahy washes his face. And moves to the party hall but suddenly he bumps to a girl)(tammy or??Wink)

End of ninth episode

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Posted: 07 January 2012 at 11:03pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by hema_rawat

dat was nice nd emotional update ..
 flashback was nice ...

10q so much for ur appriciation..


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Posted: 08 January 2012 at 3:49am | IP Logged
wowww... LOVELY UPDATE:-) poor Abhay:-( That girl was Pia na?? :-) Superb:-):-) CANT WAIT FOR NEXT UPDATE:-) PLEASE IS BAAR UPDATE THODA AUR LONG DENA PLEASE?:-)... Continue soon:-).,.

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