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PYAAR KII YEH EK KAHAANII (Page 27)

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Posted: 21 April 2012 at 3:04am | IP Logged

Thirty Fifth Episode


Pari, Anu and sheetal were walking towards the partyhall..



Anu: to kya sach me prof bakshi ne us ladki ke sath..

Sheetal: Pari.. who dekho.. Abhay.. wow wo kitna hot lag raha hai..

Pari: haan.. hot to hai wo..


Anu: yaar.. Piya ki dress.. wo harbar kitni khubsurat dresses laati kaha se hai.. m surely want to see her collection..

Pari: par we waha kya khichdi paka rahje hai.. gals.. lets see..

 

Abhay, Piya, Tammy, Neha, Jay.. all were laughing.. when they hear a voice that interrupts their enjoyment..


Pari: hello everyone..


All of them turns back.. n their smile vanishes..


Pari: lagta hai tum sabko meri awaz pasand nahi..

Abhay: nahi pari.. aisi koi bat nahi hai..

Pari: khair job hi ho.. ummeed karti hu  tum sab ye party enjoy kar rahe hoge..

Piya: yes ofcourse pari.. it's a nice party..

Pari: ab tumlog yahan akele group banakar logo ko tease karoge ya fir sach me iss party ko enjoy karna chahoge..

Anu: ya.. pata hai.. hum teenagers ke liye.. (Pari interrupts)

Pari: anu.. let them decide.. (to them) so.. kya bolte ho tumlog..

Tammy: no pari.. thanks

Abhay: ya sure Pari.. aakhir hum bhi toh dekhe tumhari mehman nawazi..

Pari: ok come guys…

 

All starts follow her.. tammy feels bad that abhay disobeyed her.. piya is tensed for whatever n same for neha vivek n jay..

 

They enters a hall room of Malliks' house..

This room was like a pub.. where teenagers were drinking n smoking drugs s** and dancing inappropriately ..

 

Neha: (to abhay) abhay.. ye pari hume kaha le kar aa gayi.. this place is like.. u know agar mom ko pata chala toh..

Vivek: ya abhay.. neha is right.. humari band baj jayegi..

Abhay: okk.. main kuch karta hu..

 

He goes to Pari


Abhay: (in a mild voice) Pari.. look.. hum ye sab pasand nahi karte.. this alchohal party, drugs, disco.. m very sorry.. but.. hume in sab me interest nahi..

Pari: come on Abhay.. tum toh ek mla k bte I mean bhanje ho.. neha.. vivek.. jay, piya.. tum sabko to in sab chizo ki adat hogi na.. ab chupao mat.. aur specially piyali..(looks at Piya) tumhari to ye sab hi zindagi hogi na.. its nothing changed for u I guess.. after all u r from London

Piya: Pari.. sayad tumhe galat fehmi hui hai.. main bhale hi London se hu.. par iska matlab ye nahi ki apne sanskaro ka mujhe pata nahi.. main janti hu ki kya sahi aur sachchai hai aur kya jhuth aur galat.. sahi aur galat ki achchi pehchan hai mujhe..

Pari: wow.. kaafi achi speech deti ho tum..


Piya moves her neck with irritation..


Pari: achcha koi bat nahi.. tum sab drinks nahi karna chahte na sahi.. par dance toh kar sakte ho na.. achcha me tumsab k lie koi achcha sa bollywood song bajati hu..

 

Pari moves to dj.. n dj plays bollywood song.. race is on my mind..

 

Pari moves to abhay n all..


Pari: I think ab tumsab hume join kar sakti ho.. ab to koi prob nahi hai..

Tammy: pari in sabki koi zarurat nahi thi.. hum ye..

Pari: oh common tamanna.. ab me ek achi host banne ki kosish kar rahi hu aur tum..

Tammy: but pari.. (abhay interrupts)

Abhay: ok pari.. we will join u..

Tammy: but abhay..

Abhay: (to Tammy) may I have the pleasure of dance with you my angel..

And he holds the hands of tammy.. they comes in dance floor.. jay asks neha for a dance.. n vivek joins piya..

 

Piya was little uncomfortable for.. but little time she accompanies Vivek.. Neha looks at both.. n smiles..


Jay was dancing with Neha but he was noticing Tammy.. who is now enjoing her dance with Abhay..

 

Pari notices this.. and she understands that jay is attracted to Tammy.. she goes to jay..


Pari: jay.. would u like to dance with me?


Neha breaks their pair.. n Pari replaces her.. n Jayraj n Pari starts dancing..


Pari: Jay.. tumse ek bat kahu..

Jay: (with no interest) pucho..

Pari: tum Tammy se pyar karte ho.. hai na?

Jay: (shock) what?

Pari: tumahri aankho me dikta hai.. jo abhi bhi Tammy ko dekh rahi hai..

 

Jay looks at tammy.. who was dancing with abhay and was smiling..


Abhay was looking at Piya.. n his thoughts.. Piya was looking very beautifull.. when vivek was talking with her.. she was laughing.. and was looking awesome.. her red dress was flowing n complementing her..

 

Tammy discovers it.. n she breaks Abhay's attraction..


Tammy: kya soch rahe ho?

Abhay: kuch bhi nahi..

Tammy: abhay.. chupao mat.. tum pia ko dek rahe ho..

Abhay: nahi aisa nahi hai..

Tammy: abhay.. mujhe der ho rhi hai.. I need to go..

Abhay: par tammy.. abhi to sirf 9 bajr he..

Tammy: actually mujhe kuch assignments pure karne hai..

Abhay: thik hai mai tumhe ghar chorh deta hu,..

Tammy: nahi uski zarurat nahi..


And tammy leaves..


Jay seeing her leaving.. xcuse from pari.. n goes to tammy.. who was crying outside..


Jay: (from besides) Tammy.. kya hua.. bahar kyu aayi..

Tammy: (wipes her tears to hide this from jay) haan who.. ander ka mahol acha nai laga..

Jay: oh. Mujhe bhi.. ok.. do one thing.. garden me ghumte he..

Tammy: nai jay.. me.. mera mann nahi hai,. Mujhe ghar jana hai..

Jay: ok to me tumhe ghar chorh deta hu..

Tammy: par var kuch nahi.. lets come with me..

 

And tammy agrees to go with him.. abhay ye sab dekhta he.. aur usko achcha nahi lagta.. wo party k abnder aata he.. Piya looks at Abhay and excuses from vivek.. n goes to abhay..


Piya: abhay.. chalo sath me dance karte hai..

Abhay: piya.. mera mood nahi hai..

Piya: common abhay.. agar mood kharab hai toh dance karne seman behal jayega..


Abhay joins her.. but with a bad mood.. Piya notices it


End of thirty fivth episode

 

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Posted: 21 April 2012 at 3:33am | IP Logged
awsm update thx for pm

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Posted: 21 April 2012 at 4:30am | IP Logged
awesum updt...continue soon n thnx 4 d pm me
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Posted: 21 April 2012 at 5:17am | IP Logged
nice update..loved it

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Posted: 21 April 2012 at 5:24am | IP Logged
nice update...
but i dont want to se abhay tammy yar...
i want my abhiya...
plss make it fast nw...4 my abhiya...
cont soon
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Posted: 22 April 2012 at 1:20am | IP Logged
Nyc update... loved it...
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Posted: 22 April 2012 at 4:26am | IP Logged
Wowww Nice update:-):-) but You didnt PM me this time???
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Posted: 23 April 2012 at 12:52am | IP Logged
m very sorry raashi.. i have tried to sent u all.. m very sorry for not pm u..

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