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Twenty sixth Episode

 

In Aggarwal house


Mr aggarwal & abhay neha and vivek were sitting for breakfast.. Mrs Aggarwal was serving..


Neha: college ke 1st day ka excitement hi khatam kar diya..

Vivek: sach me.. Wo Akshay hamare piche hi kyu pada rehta hai.. Kabhi main kabhi ye kabhi wo..

Neha: kyun ka jawab tum sab jante ho.. Jaisi maa waisa beta.. Zindagi me zehar gholna hi aata hai inhe..

Mr Aggarwal: Neha.. Vivek.. Ye baat yahin khatam karo.. (To abhay) Abhay (Abhay looks at him) beta maine char bodyguards ka intezam kiya hai.. 2 for girls and 2 for u boys.. Inhe apne aaspass hi rakhna.. 

Abhay: ji maamu..

Mrs Aggarwal: aur haan.. Piya aur tammy ko bhi unke ghar se pick kar lena.. maine Mrs Re aur Mrs chandra.. dono se iss bare me baat kar liya hai..

Abhay: par mami.. kya apne Piya ki mom ko uss raat ki.. (mrs aggarwal interrupts)

Mrs Aggarwal: nahi nahi.. maine unse ye kaha ki Piya ab hamare bachcho ki achchi dost ban chuki hai aur sab sath me ghumte hai to uski safety ke liye ye zaruri hai..

Abhay: thanx mami..

Mr Aggarwal: jayraj aur arjun bhi abhi aate honge..

Jayraj: aa gaye uncle..

Mrs Aggarwal: beta breakfast me kya loge tum log..

Arjun: nahi aunty kuch nahi.. hum nashta kar kea aye hai..

Vivek: hamara bhi finish ho gaya hai.. bas princess Diana ka khatam ho jaye.. fir 12 baje nikalte hain..

Neha: shut-up..

Mrs Aggarwal: offo bas bhi karo tum dono.. jab dekho ladna suru ho jata hai tum dono ka..

Arjun: neha.. jaldi karo.. hame sach me der ho rahi hai..

Neha: bas ho gaya mera..

Abhay: ok lets go now..

Neha: bye mom.. Bye dad..

Mrs Aggarwal: bye beta..


And they all gets out..

 

In Mount college


All boys and girls are moving around.. Piya Tammy Neha Jayraj Arjun Abhay and vivek.. All are together.. And they have their bodyguards too..


Arjun: yaar.. Sab sah me hi rehna.. Saanp jakhmi hai kabhi bhi dass sakta hai.. Ek bar mil jaye to saale ki..

Neha: relax..  Hum sath rahenge to kuch nahi hoga..

Abhay: neha tum aur tammy Piya ke sath hi rehna.. And (turning to one of the bg) aap dono in ladkiyo ko akele mat hone dena.. aur aap dono hamare sath rahiyega.. Specialy vivek..

Bg1: ji..

Jayraj: waise aaj ki is security ka koi asar nahi hone wala hai..

Tammy: kyun.. Aisa kyu keh rahe ho..

Jayraj: kyunki Jalebi aaj college nahi aaya.. Maine pata lagaya hai.. Wo kuch dino ke liye bahar gaya hai..

Abhay: fir bhi.. Hum koi risk nahi le sakte.. Kya pata usne kisi aur ko hire kiya ho..

Arjun: Abhay sahi keh raha hai.. Hume chance nahi lena chahiye..

Tammy: achcha hamare classes ka waqt ho chukka hai.. Abb hum sab ko classes ki taraf badna chahiye..


And they separates for their respective classes..


Piya: (to girls) god.. Itni security.. Only for a guy.. its so awkward..

Tammy: Piya tum janti nahi ho ki ye akshay kya cheez hai..

Neha: haan piya.. Akshay jaisa ghatiya insaan koi aur ho bhi nahi sakta..

Piya: (thinking) main janti hu neha.. ki us insane ne sif tumhari hi nahi.. (looks at neha) Balki baki ladkiyo ki life v kharab ki hai.. ye wahi ladka hai jo us din uss ladki ke sath badtamizi kar raha tha.. (enters in class room) aur main ye bhi janti hu ki wo ab Abhay ko bhi nuksaan pahunchane ki puri taiyari karega.. (sits in a bench with tammy and neha) par sayad tum log nahi jante ki ab wo chah kar bhi hamara kuch nahi kar saktaye baat tum sab nahi jante ki uski agli chal kya hogi.. mainv bhi nahi janti.. par haan.. uski har chal ka jawab rakhne ki taqat hai mujhme..


In Party office

 

Party worker: sir ye raha indra aawas ka naksha.. iss nakshe ke mutabik kam se kam hum 100 parivaro ko iss ilaqe me basa sakta hain..

Mr Aggarwal: aur us ilake me parivar kitne hain..

Partyworker: 200 parivaar..

Mrs Re: iska matlab baki ke 100 parivaaro ko kahin aur basana padega hamein..

Mr Virat: un 100 parivaaro ko alag se basane ki jimmedari hamari.. ab aapne hamari itni madad ki.. hamare project ko badawa diya.. aur (turning to Mrs Re) aapke social contacts ki wajah se hamare project ko protest wagera ka bhi samna nahi karna padega.. aur sath me govt bidding program me v aapka sath rahega..

Mr Aggarwal: ji haan.. bilkul..

Mrs Re: Mr Viraat.. ab hamara ye saath aage bhi bana rahe.. to isme hamara hi faida hai..

Mr Virat: ji bilkul.. aur ye relationship ki suruaat ki khushi me kal sham ek jashn manate hain..

Mrs Re: ji bilkul..

Mr Virat: to fir thik hai.. aap dono ko pure parivaar ke sath hamare party me shariq hona padega..

Mr Aggarwal: ji bilkul..

Mr Virat: achcha to ab main izzazat chahunga..

Mr Aggarwal: ji.. (and he and mrs Re stands up and says namaste)

 

End of twenty sixth episode

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Edited by KITTY&ME - 03 February 2012 at 9:41am

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Twenty seventh episode

In piya's class room..

Students are sitting.. teacher is asking for their introduction..


A girl: (whispers to her benchmate) yaar.. ab ye ladkiya kaon hai.. bhao to dekho inke.. class room ke ander bodyguards.. film hai kya..

second girl: I guess us beechwali ladki ke liye hoga.. attitude to dekho.. class me aayi hai ya glamour show me.. kitna style show off kar rahi hai..

Third girl: par wo blue dress kitni hot hai.. kitni beautiful lag rahi hai..

First girl: yaar.. beech wali nahi.. ye bodyguards neha name ki ladki ke hai.. jo side me baithi hai.. MLA ki beti hai.. aur dusri side wali social worker hai na.. Isha re.. uski beti hai.. Tamanna.. par blue dress wali kaun hai.. that I donno.. par jab intro degi tab pata chal jayega.. ki ye hai kaun..

Third girl: wow pari.. tumhe sabkuch pata hai..

Pari: Pari ke sath rahogi to tumhe bhi sab pata chal jayega..

 

Now its Piya's turn to speak about her..

Piya: hi friends.. my name is Piyali Chandra.. my father is a businessman in this town..  I am from Chalcot School, London.. and I want to be a nurologist..

 

Pari: Piyali Chandra.. okk.. ye to tab sayad Mr Malay Chandra ki beti hai..

Third girl: kaun Malay Chandra..?

Pari: famous business tycoon.. par ye London se yaha padai ke liye aai hai.. that's too.. anyways.. I think.. hume in ladkiyo se friendship badani chahiye..

Second girl: pari.. aur kaun kaun hai Mr malay Chandra ki family me..

Pari: pata nahi.. unki family hamesha hi media se door rehti hai.. infact maine kabhi Malay Chandra ko bhi nahi dkeha.. aur mujhe aaj pata chala ki inki ek beti hai..

Second girl: lagta hai we apni family ko lekar bahut possessive hai..

Third girl: aur ye tamanna.. iski family me kaun kaun hai..

Pari: ye aur iski mom.. aura b ye v puchogi ki neha ki family me kaun kaun hai.. (third girl nodes in yes) to lemme tell u.. uski family me uske mom dad uska bhai aur cousin bhai hai.. par I tell u uska cousin.. he is damn hot and intelligent.. usne pata hai.. all over India me top kiya hai..

Second and third girl: wow..

Pari: aur wo bhi isi college me hai..

Second girl: wow.. who is he..

Pari: Abhay.. Abhay khandelwal.. MLA ka nephew hai wo.. aur Neha Aggarwal aur Vivek aggarwal ka cousin..

 

(lecturer comes there but they were busy in gossip and they didn't realized)

Lecturer: Pari, Anu, shital.. kya lagta hai aapko.. mujhe kya kehna chahiye.. aap teeno ko fir se isi class me dekh kar bahut khushi hui..?

 

All students laugh..  and they feel embaraced..

Lecturer: aap teeno ki gossip ka koi the end bhi hai ya nahi.. aaj aap logo ka topic kya hai.. studies to ho hi nahi sakti.. any new boy in our class aur college?

 

 Bell goes.. and everyone gets out of the class..

 

In chandra niketan

 

Door bell rings

Servant opens that

 

Servant: yes..

Person: ji main MR and Mrs Chandra se milne aaya hu..

Servant: aap baithiye.. main unhe bula kar aata hu..

 

Servant leaves and that person sits.. second servant comes with a glass of water..

Mrs Chandra comes..

Mrs Chandra: yes.. kahiye main aapki kya madad kar sakti hu..

Person: mad'm main mr Virat ke taraf se aapko ye invitation dene aaya hu.. kal ki sham ki party ka..

One servant comes and holds the card..

Mrs Chandra: ji shukriya..

Person: madm.. now allow me to leave..

Mrs Chandra nodes in yes..

 

In mount college canteen..

Neha: jab Bidyapati Sir ne kaha ki firse isi college me dkh kar khusi hui.. to me has has kar pagal ho rahi thi..

Tammy: seriously.. mera v yahi haal tha..

Piya: par hume kisi ka mazak nahi udana chahiye..

Then they looks each other and laughs again..

Jayeaj comes..

Jay: yaar.. tum ladkiya bhi na.. ek hi bat ke piche pad jati ho.. waise tumhe pata hai we kis par gossip kar rahi thi..

Tammy: how could we know..

Jay: (smiles) tum teeno par..( all are surprised) (Abhay and vivek and Arjun joins)

Neha: what?

Vivek: what happened.. itni surprised q ho tum teeno..

Piya: Jay kya keh rahi thi wo hamare bare me..

Jay: tumhare dress ki tariff kar rahi thi.. aur tum teeno ka family discussion..

Tammy: par use hamari family se kya matlab?

Jay: MLA, social worker aur city ke sabse bade business tycoon ki betiyo se faida uthana.. meri mano to un teeno se durr rehna.. waise.. hamare group me se ek par us ladki Pari ka dil aa gaya..

Abhay and Arjun is not so more interested and they are having tea and snacks..

Vivek: wow.. kaun hai..

Girls laugh lightly..

Jay: Abhay..

Abhay choked his tea..

Tammy gets l'll angry.. and Piya too felt bad..

Abhay: what.. but main to unhe janta bhi nahi..

Vivek: par tujhe sab jante hai dude.. u r topper man..

Neha: haan aur handsome bhi..

Abhay's cell rings.. he saw his dad's number flashing..

Abhay: excuse me guys.. (and he leaves)


Piya looks at him..

 

Abhay in campus garden..

No one was there xcept him..


bhay: (picks up the phone)(angrily) kam se kam aaj to mera din kharab na karte.. aapko chain nahi milta kya meri zindagi me zehar ghole bagair..

Mr Aadarsh: beta

Abhay: beta mat kahiye mujhe.. ye rishta aap 10 sal pehle tod chuke hain.. aur me aapse kisi bhi tarah ka rishta nahi rakhna chahta.. jitna aapko bhulana chata hu.. aap, apki biwi aur aapka beta akshay.. utna hi mujhe aur mere dosto ko taqleef pahunchane ke bahane dhundte hain.. aura b usne meri sabse masoom  dost ko apna shikar banaya.. aap yad rakhiye.. agli bar main uska wo hasrra karunga ki aapko use India bhejne ka afsosh hoga..

Mr aadarsh: par beta (abhay disconnects) (thinking) iska matlab wo ladki abhay ki dost thi.. pata nahi Akshay kyu uske piche pada rehta hai.. Oh God.. kash ki chandramukhi mere life me kabhi aati hi nahi.. to main apne bte aur patni ke sath kitna khush rehta.. Ashwini ki ye halat bhi nahi hoti aur Abhay.. mera beta mujhse nafrat nahi karta..

 

In college..


Abhay turns around and Piya was standing there..


End of twenty seventh episode

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