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Posted: 27 January 2012 at 10:22pm | IP Logged
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abhay's moms bday
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Posted: 27 January 2012 at 10:52pm | IP Logged

SARASWATI PUSHPANJALI

 

OM BHADRAKALYE NAMO NITYAM SARASWATYE NAMO NAMAH|

VED-VEDANT-VEDANSH-VIDYASTHANEBHYA EV CHA||

ESH SACHANDANA BILVAPATRA PUSHPANJALI OM AEING SHREE SHREE SARASWATYE NAMAH||

 

OM JAYE JAYE DEVI CHARACHAR SAARE| KUCH JUG SHOBHIT MUKTA HARE||

BEENA PUSTAK RANJIT HASTE| BHAGWATI BHARATI DEVI NAMOSTUTE||

OM SARASWATI MAHA BHAGE| VIDYA KAMALLOCHANE|

VISHWARUPE VISHALAKSHI| VIDYAM DEHI NAMOSTUTE||

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nice update ...
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nyc update dr!!!!!
abhay mons birthday!!!!
cool..
cont soon
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Posted: 28 January 2012 at 12:19pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by KITTY&ME

<h1><font color="#ff0000" size="3" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">SARASWATI PUSHPANJALI</font></h1>

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<font color="#ff0000" size="3" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">OM BHADRAKALYE NAMO NITYAM SARASWATYE NAMO NAMAH|</font>


<font color="#ff0000" size="3" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">VED-VEDANT-VEDANSH-VIDYASTHANEBHYA EV CHA||</font>


<font color="#ff0000" size="3" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">ESH SACHANDANA BILVAPATRA PUSHPANJALI OM AEING SHREE SHREE
SARASWATYE NAMAH||</font>


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<font color="#ff0000" size="3" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">OM JAYE JAYE DEVI CHARACHAR SAARE| KUCH JUG SHOBHIT MUKTA
HARE||</font>


<font color="#ff0000" size="3" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">BEENA PUSTAK RANJIT HASTE| BHAGWATI BHARATI DEVI NAMOSTUTE||</font>


<font color="#ff0000" size="3" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">OM SARASWATI MAHA BHAGE| VIDYA KAMALLOCHANE|</font>


<font color="#ff0000" size="3" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">VISHWARUPE VISHALAKSHI| VIDYAM DEHI NAMOSTUTE||[/font]


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Posted: 30 January 2012 at 10:41am | IP Logged
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Posted: 30 January 2012 at 11:22am | IP Logged

Twenty Fifth Episode


Outside a hospital

Abhay stops his car and goes inside with a bag.. He enters in a room.. Where his mom is lying on a bed.. 


He goes to her.. Sits.. And holds her mom's hands.. 


He opens that bag.. And tooks out the heart shaped chocolate cake..


Abhay: happy b'day mamma.. (He was about to cut that but) how do I cut ur heart mamma..


And he again holds her mom's hand and let her pick that knife.. And cuts the cake.. He was very sad

 

Abhay: mom… wen will u cut this by yourself.. Kab aap mujhe apne haatho se ye cake khilaoge? Dus salo se aap yu hi letti hui hai.. Don't u love me.. Kal mere engineering college ka 1st day hai.. Mount collegeof Engineering & Medical science.. Aap chahti thi na ki mai issi college me admission lu.. Engineer banu.. So mom I m here.. But u said u will make me ready for that.. But.. U r still lying in this bed since last 9 years.. Wake up mama.. Pls wake up.. And he starts crying..


A nurse/warden comes


Warden: Abhay beta.. Don't cry.. Don't loose ur hope..


Abhay: M fine.. And Abhay leaves..


Warden: (to nurse) bechara.. Pata hai.. Jab ye 10 saal ka tha.. Tabse iski maa yu hi comma me hai.. Mujhe bahut bura lagta hai iske bare me soch kar.. Aaj kal ke bachche apne maa-baap ko ghar se nikal dete hai aur ye.. Khair.. Tum patient ki clothing change kar do..

 

In hostel

Akshay was packing his clothes..

Saurav: oye.. Kithe ja rahe ho.. Dar ke Dubai to nahi bhag rahe..

Akshay: Darre mere dushman.. JA raha hu.. Ek week ke baad laut aunga.. Tab tak tu mere dushmano ka khyal rakhiyo..

Saurav: tu v apna khyal; rakhna.. aur hamara intezam zara kar k jana..

Akshay: tu saala nahi sudhrega.. janta tha me.. isliye uss drower me teri dawa rakh k jar aha hu khurak thik se liye.. Overdose na ho warna me mar jaunga..

Saurav: (goes there n opens that.. it was drugs packets) tu tension na le..

Akshay: (had finished his packing.. and tooks his bag) chal me ja rah hu.. (Hugs saurav)

 

In Neha's room


Neha: (on her cell) pata hai main bahut darr gayi thi wen I saw u like That... ki pata nahi kya hua hoga..

Piya: (on next side) even I was.. When that bastered pushed me on wall.. I was feeling so helpless.. I was praying God pls send some1 to save me and He sent Vivek on time..

Neha: bewakuff ne pehli bar apni zindagi me kuch achcha kaam kiya..

Piya: (laughs) tum dono bhai behan jitna ladte ho.. Utna mene kisi ko v ladte hue nahi dekha..

Neha: (laughs) yahi to hamara pyar hai..

Piya: (laughs) achcha pyaar to mai bhi apne bro se bahut karti hu.. n he too loves me loves me par hum to jhagda nahi krte..

Neha: apna apna tariqa hai bhai.. Waise tumhare bhai tumse bade hain.. Kitna pyar karte hai tumse..

Piya: yes.. 4 years.. And we meri khushi ke liye we kuch bhi karvsakte hai.. Infact unhone chand ka ek tukda v mere naam kar dia...

Neha: matlab

Piya: moon me mere name se ek plot buy kiya hai bro ne mere liye..

Neha: wow.. Dats too amazing..

Piya: n u know wat.. Maine jab uss kamine ki bat batayi unhe we apni training chorh kar use sbak sikhane aane wale the.. Par maine unhe bataya ki tumhare dad MLa hai n he will solve it out.. To we ruk gaye..

Neha: kaisi training.. Kya karte hai tumhare bro?? Kahin we nurologist to nahi jis liye tumne v nuerology choose iya..

Piya: no.. He is a lawyer and in undergoing training right now..

Neha: okk..  Piya.. Ab baaki bate kal hongi college me.. Right now I have to go..Bye..

Piya: ok bye..

Piya disconnects her phone.. Nancy comes..


Nancy:  Piya Baby.. Aapka college ka first day ke liye London se sir ne dresses bheje hai.. Aap choose kar le.. Ki kal unme se aapko kya pehanna hai..

Piya: wow.. That's gr8.. (2 servants come with a range of dresses..) (Piya calls her Bro)

Her Brother: hmm.. Lagta hai dresses meri princess tak pahunch gaye hai..

Piya: (with smile) yes bro... N I wanna know.. Which one u would like me to wear..

Her Brother: hmm.. That sky blue..

Piya: (to nancy) keep this a side.. (Pointing to that in sky blue)

Her brother: my little doll.. Are u fine r8 now? I mean dat bloody.. Did he troubled u again?

Piya: (to nancy) nancy.. Ur work is done.. And u can go now.. No bro... Till now not..

Her brother: if he again comes near to you.. u just tell me.. And now 2 more months.. And I'll b there..

Piya: (with excitement) wow only 2 months.. m eagerly waiting for this moment..

Her Brother: so do I my l'll angel..


In tamanna's house


Abhay comes to her room and knocks..


Tammy: (with a big smile) Abhay..  Tum.. Ander aao na.. Bahar kyun khade ho?

Abhay: kya kar rahi thi..

Tammy: nothing.. Just kal ki preparation..

Abhay: main help kar du..

Tammy:  (again busy with her stuffs) no abhay.. Ye mera kaam hai aur mai hi ise karungi..Smile

Abhay: waise main yaha tumse ek imp baat karne k liye aaya tha..

Tammy: haan Abhay..(Releases herself and sits besides Abhay) kaho kya kehna chahte ho..

Abhay: Akshay..

Tammy: (with angerness) again.. Ab uss @[email protected]#$ ne kya kiya?

Abhay: is bar uska nishana bechari piya bani.. us din hall me use der hui.. Kyunki Akshay ne uske sath misbehave kiya.. wo to Vivek time par pahunch gaya.. Warna uss bechari ke saath wo pata nahi kya karta..

Tammy: oh my God.. Akshay itna kaise gir sakta hai..Its just too much..

Abhay: relax tammy..

Tammy: how can Abhay..  Usne mere dream dance competeition se nikalwaya.. I forgived.. Neha ka itna bada accident karwaya ki uski jaan jate jate bachi.. Jayraj ko suspend karwa diya tha usne.. Arjun ka to ghar hi nilaam karwaya.. Vivek ko national team se disqualify karwa diya tumhare sath to aaj tak galat hi kiya.. par aaj.. ab usne ek ladki ki izzat ke sath khelne ki koshish ki hai.. aur Piya.. wo to kisi ko yahan janti tak nahi..

Abhay: right.. Piya humare alawa kisi aur ko nahi janti yahan.. Isliye main tumse kehna chahta tha ki ab hume use yaha akela nahi chorna hai.. Akshay par hum bharosa nahi kar sakte.. Aur Vivek ne use pta wo is bat ka badla piya aur Vivek dono se lega..

Tammy: haan abhay.. Ab Piya aur Vivek dono ko savdhaan rehne ki zarurat hai..

Abhay: tumhara neha jayraj aur Piya.. Tum charo ke subjects ek hain aur tum charo sath sath hi rehna.. Main aur arjun vivek ke sath rahenge.. Aur classes ke bad sab sath rahjenge.. Piya meri wajah se musibat me padi hai aur wo ab meri jimmedari hai.. Aur we cant take any risk with her life..  (looks at his watch) tammy ab mujhe bhi jkaana hai.. you take care.. bye..

Tammy: bye Abhay..

Abhay leaves..

Tammy: (thinking) bechari Piya. Pata nahi kya beeti hogi uspar..

 

End of Twenty Fifth episode

 

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Posted: 30 January 2012 at 11:34am | IP Logged
Great update dear! Plz make abhay fall for piya soon and thanks for the pm.

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