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Posted: 24 January 2012 at 11:10am | IP Logged

Twenty third Episode

 

Akshay was injured and one of his friend was bandaging him..


His friend: yakin nahi ho raha.. Ki Vivek ne tera ye haal kar diya aur tune use jaane diya.. Wo v ek ladki ke saamne..

Akshay: dekh saurav mera dimag pehle se hi garam hai.. Us ladki ne bina baat ke mujhe thappad mara.. Main to dosti badana chahta tha.. Par wo ghamandi ladki..

Saurav: tu tension mat le.. Ek ishara aur wo ladki tere kadmo me..

Akshay: us ladki ko main akele hi dekh lunga.. Aur Vivek.. Ab to main uska wo haal karunga ki wo pachtayega mujhpar hath uthane ke liye.. Aur wo ladki.. Ab uski zindagi nark se v baftar bana dunga main.. (He picks up phone and call someone) haa.. Tumhare liye ek kaam.. Inaam jo tum bologe.. Nahi.. Filhal abhay ko bhul jao.. Ek ladki hai.. Uska agla pichla sab jaankari mujhe chahiye.. Jitni jaldi ho sake..

Person on the phone: aapka kaam ho gaya samajhiye..

Akshay disconnects with a wicked smile..

 

Piya and Abhay in mid way

Piya: Abhay tum jante ho ki usne aisa kyun kiya

Abhay: haan piya..  wo insan meri zindagi ka ek aisa kadwa sach hai jise main chah kar bhi bhula nahi pata..

Piya: kaun sa sach Abhay..

Abhay: (bg music is na na na from pkyek) meri zindagi ka sabse kadwa sach.. wo mera sautel bhai hai.. Uski mom ki wajah se mere mom-dad ko alag hona pada aur us aurat ke karan hi mujhe apne mama-mami ke pass rehna pad raha hai.. Mere dad ne unhe chuna aur meri mom ko besaharac horh diya.. Aur main ye sab bhulna chahta tha par Akshay.. wo hamesha mere raste me aa jata hai.. Mujhe satane ke liye wo usi school aur college me admission leta he jahan main jata hu.. Mama-mami, Vivek, Arjun, jay, Tammy, Neha.. Usne kisi ko bhi nahi chorha.. Sabki life me zehar ghola usne.. Uski waja se Arjun ke parents aaj karz me dub gaye.. Kyunki uski mom ne unka business me bahut bada loss karwaya.. Aur ab.. Ab usne tum par bhi hamla kiya.. Sayad usne mujhe tumhare sath dekha hoga isliye tumhe bhi nuksaan pahunchane ki kosish ki hogi.. (With watered eyes) Piya.. I am very very sorry to u.. Jo bhi hua.. Uske liye main zimmedar hu..

Piya: nahi Abhay.. In sab me tumhari koi galti nahi.. Ab ek insane bura hai.. Usme tum kya kar sakte ho.. Tumhe dukhi hone ya sorry bolne ki zarurat hi nahi hai.. wo tumhe dukh pahuncha kar khush hota hai.. Par tumhe use ye khushi chinni hogi.. Don't feel bad Abhay.. Its hurting me more..

(Hugs him) (After a pause) Raat bahut ho chuki hai.. Hume chalna chahiye..

Abhay: ya Piya.. Lets go..

Both sits in their jeep.. Abhay was driving.. Piya was looking at him.. and was smiling..

Piya: (thinking) Abhay aur Akshay.. Dono bhaiyo me kitna farq hai.. Akshay kitna insensitive hai kitna badtamiz.. Aur Abhay.. Abhay kitna sweet aur caring.. (looks at him)Abhay.. (abhay looks at her while driving) Thanx..

Abhay: for what Piya..

Piya: mujhe apni dil ki baat batane ke liye.. Apni zindagi meshamil karne ke liye..

Abhay: (didn't understand wat she wants to say)

Piya: My bro says insan apne dil ki baat ya apni zindagi ke kale panno ko unhi ke samne kholta hai.. Jo uske liye mayne rakhta hai.. Aur mujhe ye jankar bahut khushi hui ki mai tumhare liye mayne rakhti hu..

Abhay: (smiles and stops the jeep) Piya.. Tumhara ghar aa gaya..

Piya: (she was about to leave but she turns back) Abhay.. Pls tum mere parents ko aaj ke bare me kuch mat batana.. Warna mujhe kuch problems ho jayehi.. (Abhay nodes in ok) (Piya smiles) good night Abhay.. Apna khyal rakhna.. (And gets out of)

Abhay: thanx.. N bye.. Abhay turns back the jeep and leaves..

Piya smiles and enters at the house..

 

Mrs Chandra: Piya ye koi waqt hai ghar aane ka.. Ye tumhara London nahi hai.. India hai..aur raat ke 11 baje tak ladkiya bahar nahi jati..

Nancy: rehne dijiye na madam.. Piya baby new he yaha.. (Mrs Chandra looks at her angrily and she puts her head down)

Mrs Chandra: raat bahut ho gayi hai.. u go n sleep..

Piya: ok mom..


And she enters in her room.. She calls her brother.. In London


Piya: hello.. Bro...

His brother:  Hi my l'll Princess.. Hmm India me to abhi adhi raat hogi.. Itni raat ko call kiya.. Any problem..

Piya: ya bro... There is.. But promise me u wouldn't say anything to mamma..

His brother: seems a serious matter.. Ok I promise..

Piya tells him all happened.. In mount college and in theater..

His brother: what.. Are u ok.. Just tell me who is that bastered..

Piya: bro don worry.. Abhay's uncle is MLA here.. And m sure he will look after this matter..

His brother: are u sure dear..

Piya: I guess yes..

His brother: okk.. But wnever u think.. U can call me..

Piya: ya bro..

 

In UAE

 

Mrs Chandramukhi comes to mr Virendra who was doing his work on his laptop..


Mrs Chandramukhi: suna tumne.. uss Vivek ne aaj kya kiya..

Mr Virendra: ab uss bechare ne kya kiya?

Mrs Chandramukhi: bechara.. Tumhari Ashwini ke bhai ke bte ne mere bte ko itni buri tarah se pita hai.. Aur tum use bechara keh rahe ho..

Mr Virendra: (getting irritate) ab Vivek koi pagal to hai nahi.. na jane kya kiya hoga.. Tumhare bte ne..

Mrs Chandramukhi: ha ha.. galti to hamesha meri ya mere bte ki hi hoti hai.. Ashwini ua uska parivaar.. wo to hamesha sahi hi hote hain.. hain na..

Mr Virendra: (angrily) ab is baat me bhi tumhe Ashwini ko beech me lane ki kya zarurat thi.. hamesha tumhe Ashwini ya Abhay se problem hoti hai.. hamesha unhe neecha dikhane ka sochti ho tum..  Aur apna ego satisfy karne ke liye tumne apne bte tak ko nahi chorha.. jan bujh kar use India me Abhay ke hi school aurb colleges me admission dilwaya.. mere laakh mana karne ke bawajud.. aur waha bhi akshay ne kam problems create nahi ki.. main jitna unsab se door rakhna chahta tha.. tumne aur tumhare bte ne utni hi jayada Abhay ki life me dakhalandazi ki.. Aur uski musibatein badayi.. Aur Abhay un sabka zimmedar mujhe manta hai.. (Chandramukhi angrily looks at him)

Aur rahi baat vivek ka akshay ki pitayi karne ka to sun lo.. maine sab pata laga liya hai.. Akshay ne ek ladki ke sath misbehave karne ki koshish ki aur Vivek ne us ladki ko bachaya.. par tumhara beta to kabhi galat ho hi nahi sakta na..

Mrs Chandramukhi: ab isme galat kya kiya usne.. Agar ek biwi bachche wala aadmi kisi aur se affair kar sakta hai to uska beta kisi ladki ko cherh de isme kaun si aafat aa gayi..

Virendra looks at her in a very disgusting way.. And he leaves..

 

End of Twenty Third Episode

 

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Posted: 24 January 2012 at 11:23am | IP Logged
:-):-):-):-)wowww... AMAGING UPDATE..., ABHIYA JUS SO CUTE... Now Pia has feeling 4 Abhay:-) I jus loved it:-):-)   Hug
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Posted: 24 January 2012 at 8:21pm | IP Logged
nyc update... abhay pia was cool..
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Posted: 25 January 2012 at 6:07am | IP Logged
so nice update...abhiya scene r tooo gud loved it...so now they become more gud friends day by day...hope so akshay didnt do anthg tht harm piya and asbhay save piya from tht jerk...cont soon
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Posted: 27 January 2012 at 10:35am | IP Logged

Twenty fourth Episode


At Morning


In Aggarwal mansion


Mrs Aggarwal comes to Abhay.. who was sitting with Mr Aggarwal.

Mrs Aggarwal: abhay ye main kya sun rahi hu.. Akshay ne kal Piya ke sath badtamizi ki.. ab wo ladki kaisi hai..

Abhay: mami.. Piya ab bilkul thik hai.. Maine kal raat usko apni saari sachchai bata di.. Main bhi is bare me aapse aur mamu se bat karna chahta tha.. (Neha and Vivek comes) Mami.. Piya apne mom dad ko ye sab batana nahi chahti.. par I think usko ab aur careful rehna chahiye.. Kal agar Vivek time par nahi pahunchta to Piya ke sath wo kuch bhi kar sakta hai.. Aura b Vivek ko bhi sawdhan rehna chahiye..

Mr Aggarwal: hmm.. sahi keh rahe ho.. aur.. Abhay.. tum teeno har waqt Piya ke sath rahoge.. ok.. aur main dekhta hu ki main kya kar sakta hu..

Abhay: ok mamu..

Mrs Aggarwal: us Akshay  ki ye himmat.. wo Piya bechari.. pata nahi kya soch rahi hogi.. abhi abhi to aayi hai wo.. (to her kids) beta.. tum teeno Piya ko ab kisi v hal me akela mat chorhna.. Akshay ne hum sabki life me kuch na kuch kia hai.. ab Piya ke sath bhi.. tum teeno jante hi ho na..

Vivek: relax mom.. hum ab Akshay ko ab Piya ko kisi tara nuksan pahunchane nahi dungi

 Neha: yes mom.. and Vivek.. tu bhi ab sambhal ke rehna..

Outside a temple


Piya was climbing the stairs of temple with Puja ki thali.. she enters and rings the bell.. and start worshiping..  and that time a women's thali was abt to fall but Piya helped her.. (it was geet)

Geet: haye.. abhi thali gir jati to kitna bada apshagun ho jata…  chalo.. babaji.. apki mehar se kuch nahi hua..  aapko bhi thanks hai ji..

(jay comes)

Piya: jay.. tum yaha..Shocked

Jay: (surprised) Shockedhi.. miss London tum yaha is temple me..

Piya: ya aaj Tuesday hai na..

Geet: tum dono jante ho ek dusre ko..

Jay: ji bhabhi ye Piyali hai.. par hum isko Piya bolte hai.. meri dost.. aur Piya ye meri Geet bhabhi..

Piya: Namaste

Geet: namaste ji namaste.. bada changa naam hai ji aapka.. aur kitni bholi aur masum surat hai tumhari..

Piya: thanks..

Geet: waise tumhara ghar kahan hai?

Piya: ji main Chandra Niketan me rehti hu..

Geet: Chandra Niketan.. oh,, to tum Mr. Malay Chandra ki rishtedar ho..

Piya: ji wo mere dad hai..

Geet: achcha.. (jay interrupts)

Jay: bhabhi.. aap Piya ka biodata bad me lena.. abhi aapko der ho rahi hogi na..

Geet: are haan.. ye to badi er ho gayi.. achcha Piya baad me mulakat hogi.. aati rehna..  Sat sriyakaal..

Piya: ji.. Namaste.. (thinking) jay's bhabhi is so sweet.. and she then turns inside and gives thali to Pandit ji there..

 

In Chandra Niketan

Mrs Chandra: (on phone) what are u talking about.. Mujhe wo haweli jald se jald renovate chahiye.. agar koi kaam nahi karna chahta to kisi aur ko kahiye.. Jungle ke beech hai to kya hua.. Aap ko main demanded money v to de rahi hu na..

Manager: par madam.. wo un logo ka kehna hai ki haweli me kisi ka saaya hai..

Mrs Chandra: what nonsense.. Mr Mehra, aap 21st centuary me rehte hai ya fir 15th.. Iss zamane me v inn sab bato par believe karna.. I mean its ridiculous.. aur ye sab bat to bakwas hi hai. Koi saaya waya nahi hai wahan.. anyways.. aap dusre logo ko hire kijiye par renovation ka kaam jaldi kariye.. that's it.. aur haan.. aainda se ye ghatiya excuses mujhe nahi chahiye.. u get that..Angry

 

Mrs Chandra disconnects.. Mr Chandra arrives with a cup of coffee..

Mr Chandra: kya hua jaan.. kis par itna bhadak rahi thi..

Priya: ye manager.. ek no. ka kaamchor hai.. aur iss bar had kar di..

Malay:  kyu.. kya kiya usne… (sips his coffee)

Priya: keh raha tha ki haweli me kisi ka saaya hai..

Malay: what.. (laughs) LOLis he kidding.. saaya.. kiska tumhari maa ka.. LOL(Priya gives angry look)Angry ok baba sorry jaan.. wese haweli to sasu ma ki thi na.. isliye..LOL

Priya: isliye?

Malay: isliye bahut khubsurat hai..Wink

Piya comes..

Piya: hi mom hi dad..

Malay: here my princess.. where have u gone?

Piya: Mandir..

Malay: (surprised) Mandir..

Piya: ha mandir..

Priya: m very happy to know ki meri bachchi apne rituals ko v follow karti hai..Big smile

Piya: mom.. ye to bro ne sikhaya.. we har Tuesday ko London me mandir jate the.. aur mai bh unke sath hi jati thi.. isliye mujhe bhi ye aadat ho gayi.. J

Malay: thank God ki mera beta har roz bar wagera me nahi jata tha..  warna aaj tumhari mom bahut dukhi hoti..

(Both Piya and Malay laughs)LOL LOL(And Mrs Chandra is frustrated. And she leaves)

Malay: Priya suno to.. (To Piya) lagta hai bahut irritate ho gayi.. Lets go to market.. Ek new saree for her will make her smile..

Piya: ok dad lets go..

 

In Mall..

Malay stops the car and he and Piya comes out. And enters in a shop for ladies..


Malay: (to shopkeeper) pink me kuch achchi saareeiya dikhaiye..

Sales girl: Sure Sir..


And she shows them few sarees..  Piya picks one mong them..

Piya: dad.. I guess this design will be perfect for mamma..

Malay: you think so.. (Piya nodes in yes) okk (to salesgirl..) pack this one..)


They gets out of the shop and Piya notices Abhay walking out of a shop..


Piya: (thinking) Abhay itni jaldi me.. 

Malay calls her

Malay: Piya.. beta jaldi chalo.. 

Piya: yes dad.. (looks at Abhay.. and den goes to his dad.. and dey drive away..)

 

Outside a hospital


Abhay stops his car and goes inside with a bag.. 

He enters in a room.. 


Where his mom Ashwini is lying on a bed.. he goes to her.. sits.. and holds his mom's hands.. 


He opens that bag.. And tooks out the heart shaped chocolate cake..



Abhay: happy b'day mamma..

End of Twenty fourth episode

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nice update yar...sorry but there is a problem in like button tht didnt press...lovely update...oh abhay mom birthday i m sure abhay only shares this to piya hope so rite...cont soon thts ok yar u update a liitle late
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Wowww... FABULAS UPDATE dear:-)... Loved it:-) CONTINUE SOON...

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