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PYAAR KII YEH EK KAHAANII (Page 13)

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Posted: 21 January 2012 at 6:08am | IP Logged
nice update...
hope abhay saves pia frm akshay

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Posted: 21 January 2012 at 10:55am | IP Logged
Hey AWESOME UPDATE Yaar:-):-) HOPE ABHAY will SAVE Pia FROM THAT AKDU AKSHAY;-);-) cont soon:-)
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Posted: 23 January 2012 at 1:10am | IP Logged

Twenty Second Episode


Piya slaps Akshay and then Akshay gets angry and holds Piya's both the arms tightly and pushes her to wall forcely

Akshay: tum jaisi ladkiyo ko sidha karna mujhe aata hai.. Tumhari sirf tareef hi ki maine aur tumne thappad maara.. Akshay ko Thappad marne ka anjam ab tum dekhogi..

Piya: chorho mujhe warna main chillaungi.. (Piya tries to free herself but she couldn't)

Akshay: Ab chalao haath mujhpar.. (Suddenly someone come there and pull's Akshay and throw him down)(its Vivek)

Akshay: Tu... Saale.. Dekh mere aur iss ladki ke beech mat aa.. (piya sits down on earth and cries)

Vivek: dekh.. Tu door reh isse.. Warna anjam achcha nahi hoga.. (drags him up holding his shirt)

Akshay: kya kar kya lega tu..

And both start fighting.. Vivek punches him and he gets unconscious..

Vivek: Piya.. Piya r u ok..

Piya: (crying.. donno wat to say)

Vivek: Piya.. lets go from here (he make her stand and let her go) come Piya..

 

Outside

Neha: yaar.. mujhe darr lag raha hai..

Arjun: kuch nahi hua hoga..

Neha: lets hope so..

Abhay comes

Abhay: well strawberry icecream mili nahi.. (looks piya still missing) Piya abhi tak nahi aayi.. aur Jay Vivek Tammy ye teeno ab kaha gaye..

Neha: Tammy ko der ho rahi thi to jay use drop karne gaya hai.. Aur Piya..

Abhay: Piya aur Vivek..

Arjun: Piya tab se aayi hi nahi..

Abhay: what.. Kahan gayi wo.. She is new here and don even know anything..

Arjun: relax..Vivek gaya hai..

Abhay: I just hope ki wo thik ho.. She is our responsibility.. (And Vivek comes with crying piya.. everyone gets worried and move to her) Piya..

Neha: Piya.. What happened..

Piya: (cries and hugs neha)

Neha: don worry par batao to..

Arjun: (to Vivek) dude.. Kya hua..

Abhay: kya hua Vivek.. Tumhe chot kaise aayi.. Aur Piya.. Why she is crying like this..

Vivek: Humara shaq sahi tha.. Piya musibat me thi..

Neha: What..(Consoling her.. rubbing her hand gently on her back)

Vivek: ya.. That bloody looser.. When I get her.. He was trying to.. Rest I cant say.. Bechari Piya.. Bahut darri hui hai..

Abhay: kaun thaw o..

Vivek: hamara jani dushman..

Arjun: Ab batao bhi kaun tha..

Vivek: jalebi.. Aur kaun..

Neha: oh my God.. Ab Piya par bhi..

Abhay: this time he crossed all his limit.. Ab wo mujhse nahi bachega. (And he was about to move to catch Akshay but Arjun and Vivek stops him)

Neha: (to Piya.. are u okk.. )

Piya nodes in yes.. 

Neha: ye lo Piya pani pi lo.. (And she gives water to her)

Vivek: Abhay.. Ruk jao.. I mean.. Maine uske sath fight ki aur abhi wo behosh hai..

Arjun: right Abhay.. Use bad me nipatna.. Pehle Piya ko dekhte hain..

Piya:  (have now stopped crying) tumlog jante ho use..

Abhay: bahut achchi tarike se.. But u don worry Piya.. Use main dekh lunga.. Bahut der ho gayi hai.. Hume ab nikalna chahiye..

Arjun: ya comeon lets go from here..


They all sits in Jeep.. Piya was sitting in front with Abhay..

After dropping Arjun Neha and Vivek.. He drives to drop Piya..


Piya: gadi rooko Abhay..

Abahy: (stops) What happened..

Piya comes out of the jeep.. And walks a bit and stands.. Her hairs start waving… (bg music Piya and Abhay's  reunite time before going to Mumbai dat time a dhaba wala bujurg tells der story dat music)


Abhay also gets out of jeep.. And comes to her.. Puts her hand in his soilders.. Piya hugs him… and Abhay first gets surprised with her behavior.. And then puts her hand on Piya's soilder and and try to console her)


Abhay: what happened Piya..

Piya: Abhay.. Mujhe bahut darr lag raha hai.. Agar aaj Vivek time par mujhe bachane nahi aata to.. wo mere sath.. (Starts crying) agar usne firse aisa kuch..

Abhay: stop crying Piya.. Akshay aisa kuch nahi kar payaega.. Main janta hu ki usne aisa kyu kiya..

Piya: (separates and confusingly asks) tum jante ho Abhay..

In Vardhan Mansion

Jay enters and see its all dark..

Jay: lagta hai bhai so gaye..

Suddenly lights onn and his elder brother is standing in front of him..

Jay: bhai.. aap..

His brother: tumhe kya andaza hai ki waqt kya ho raha hai..

Jay: Bhai.. wo aaj thodi si der ho gayi..

His brother: thodi der.. Jay..Raat ke 11 baj rahe hain.. Aur tum bina kisi ko bataye bahar ghum rahe ho..

Jay: bhai.. Maine Geet bhabhi ko bataya tha ki main apne dosto ke sath movie dekhne ja rahe hain..

His brother: haan magar ye nahi bataya ki itni der lagaoge.. Movie to 1:30 baje ki thi..

Jay: haan bhai.. Uske baad humne icecream ka plan kiya.. fir hamari dost Piya wo usne der tak aayi hi nahi.. Aur Tammy ko bhi der ho rahi thi.. To maine Arjun ki bike pe usko uske ghar drop kiya.. aur waha aunty ne lunch kiye bagair jane nahi diya.. Fir Arjun ko uski bike dene gaya.. Waha pata chala ki gayi.. Piya ke sath Akshay ne misbehave kiya.. ab bas in sab me der  ho gayi..

His brother: wo sab thik hai.. Lekin kya tumhe ek phone karne ki bhi fursat nahi mili..

Jay: sorry bro...

His Brother: aaj ke liye jane diya.. par iske baad aisi kisi bhi galti ko MaanRaj Vardhan maaf nahi karega.. Kisi halat me nahi.. Raat bahut ho gayi hai.. Apne kamre me ja ker so jao..

Jay: ok Bro.. (And he moves)

 

End of twenty second Episode

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Posted: 23 January 2012 at 2:12am | IP Logged
lovely update..poor piya! She is shaken...
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Posted: 23 January 2012 at 2:41am | IP Logged
nyc dr...
i hope pia will be fine...
cont soon n thanks 4 d pm
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Posted: 23 January 2012 at 2:52am | IP Logged
nice update...poor piya hope so now abhay explain her the whole situation...lovely scene when piya hug abhay...cont soon
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Posted: 23 January 2012 at 6:03am | IP Logged
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Posted: 24 January 2012 at 6:05am | IP Logged
NICE UPDATE..., Hug :-)

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