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bellaaa IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 20 January 2012 at 10:34am | IP Logged
really awsome update lovely i can see my abhiya scene wow...abhay losted in piyas beauty the movie scene jeh interested in tammy may be i guess so??? now i can see a progress in abhiya a little bit but thts gud cont soon

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Posted: 20 January 2012 at 11:40am | IP Logged
lovely update..aww loved abhiya!
Akshi0019 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 20 January 2012 at 10:43pm | IP Logged
amazing dr!!! abhay pia are amazing...

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Posted: 20 January 2012 at 11:34pm | IP Logged

Twenty first Episode

In Aggarwal house

Mrs Re and other party members were there and discussing a problem..

Mrs Re: achchi soch hai aapki Mr Aggarwal.. Par kya aap unke ghar ko basana chahte hain ya unki basti ko..

Mr Aggarwal: matlab..

Mrs Re: MAtlab aap uss basti me base logo ko beghar hone se bachana chahte hain.. aur Virat Mallik uss basti ko hata kar waha development karna chahte hain..

Mr Aggarwal: haan toh..

Mrs Re: (smiles) toh wo zamin Government ki hai..  Par uss bastiwalo ne avaidh kabza kar rakha hai.. par sarkar ki anumati ke bagair we iss zamin par kuch nahi bana sakte..

Mr Aggarwal: yes u r right.. Unhe iss zamin par development ke liye government bid ka intezar karna padega.. Par usme abhi waqt hai..

Mrs Re: aur aapko issi waqt ka faida uthana padega..


After movie gets finish.. All of them comes out..

Arjun: achchi movie thi na..

Vivek: ya.. Aur wo bitch ki shaqal to kuch jani pehchani si lagi mujhe.. ah.. Kahan dekha.. Ya.. Right.. She was looking alike of Neha right..

Every one laughs.. Jay noticed Tammy's smile and found its beautiful..

Arjun: shutup Vivek.. Neha is so beautifull..

Abhay: Tammy mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai..

And they comes aside..

Abhay: main janta hu ki main Piya ke sath aaya.. Tumhe iss baat se thesh pa..(Tammy interrupts)

Tammy: kuch kehne ki zarurat nahi hai Abhay.. Main janti hu kit um Arjun ki bike ko repair karane ke liye gaye the aur kisi aur ko Piya ka address pata nahi tha.. Isliye tum dono ko akela aana pada..

Abhay: (gets satisfied and smiles) Thanks.. Mujhe laga tumhe bura lagega..

Tammy: Abhay.. Maine pichle do dino me jo kuch bhi kiya.. un sab ke liye main tumse maafi mangna chahti hu.. Aur me ab tumpar shaq nahi karungi.. m sorry..

Abhay: its ok Tammy.. (He moves his head and looks at iceream shop..) Icecream khaogi..

Tammy: nahi Abhay.. Der ho rahi hai.. Mom will be waiting..

Abhay: sirf ek icecream se der nahi hogi.. (Looks at his friends where others were talking) tum unsabke pass jao.. Main sabke liye icecream lata hu..

Tammy: mere liye strawberry..

Abhay smiles and leaves.. Tammy goes to others..

Neha.. Hmm.. Kya batein ho rahi thi lovebirds ke beech..

Tammy: Neha.. Pls...

Neha: ok baba..

Piya: Abhay kahan gaya..

Tammy: Icecream lane..

Piya: guys excuse me.. Main abhi aayi..

She wents to girl's washroom..


Abhay comes with icecream for them.. and gives each to them..

Neha: thanx Abhay..

Abhay: (wen he realize Piya is not here..)Piya kahan hai..

Tammy: wo abhi aa jayegi..

Abhay: okk..


Piya comes out of washroom and washes her hands.. In basin there..  And after done.. She comes out.. But in her way he bumps to a guy..

Piya: ouch..


Everyone was waiting for Piya.. It's a l'll more than xpected time.. Piya has not come.. Abhay was still hold her strawberry icecream.. Which was now melted..

Abhay: shit.. its all melted.. now I don think.. Piya will have it..

Neha: Ya.. she wouldn't.. waise..  tumhe kaisepata ki Piya ko strawberry flavor pasand aayega..

Abhay: (he throws that melted dirty icecream..)aah.. Main janta hu..

Tammy: wo kar kya rahi hain..

Neha: I donno.. may be she is on her way..

Abhay: main Piya ke liye dusri icecream le aata hu.. (and he leaves)

Jay: Tammy.. Main tumhe drop kar deta hu..

Tammy: rehne do Jay.. Tumhe problem ho jayegi..

Neha: tammy.. tumhe late ho raha hai.. jyada der hui tohb Isha aunty pareshan ho jayegi..

Arjun: right tammy.. Jay tumhe meri bike par chorh aayega..

Tammy: par..

Jay: par war kuch nahi.. just come..


And tammy and Jay leaves..

Arjun: piya ko kuch jyada der nahi ho rahi..

Neha ya.. now its l'll worrying.. wo to yaha kisi ko janti bhi nahi..

Vivek: main jakker dekhta hu..

Piya bumps to a guy and he is Akshay.. who did that intensionally.. to touch her.. Piya gets angry..

Piya: idiot.. dikhayi nahi deta.. (recognize him but donno his identity) (thinking) ye to wahi ladka hai jo us ladki ke sath college me tha)

Akshay: tumhari jaisi khubsurati dekh kar to koi bhi andha ban sakta hai..

Piya: shut up.. Angry(And she crosses him) (But he picks her hands and piya gets angry)

Piya: tumhari himmat kaisi hui mera hath pakadne ki..Angry

Akshay does not leave her hand.. Piya gets more angry..

Piya: chorho mera hath.. (And she manages to free it and slaps him)

Akshay: (gets angry and holds Piya's both the arms tightly and pushes her) tum jaisi ladkiyo ko sidha karna mujhe aata hai..

Piya: chorho mujhe warna main chillaungi..


End of Twenty First Episode


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Akshi0019 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 20 January 2012 at 11:41pm | IP Logged
akshat is misbehaving with pia...
hope abhay comes dere 4 pia..
ccont soon
Trouble. IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 20 January 2012 at 11:47pm | IP Logged
i hate akshay
i hope abhay saves piya(ofcourse he'll)
--peehu-- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 21 January 2012 at 2:38am | IP Logged
awesome update..nw abhay is gonna save piya!
bellaaa IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 21 January 2012 at 5:40am | IP Logged
great hope so abhay save piya from tht jerk idiot akshay...cont soon

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