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PYAAR KII YEH EK KAHAANII (Page 11)

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Posted: 19 January 2012 at 11:40am | IP Logged


guys... 
i m understanding
wat u all wants,..
just wait for few more episodes..
so that love can blossom..
between themm
r8 now..
abhay is attracted to Tamanna..
and Piya is only impressed by Abhay..
so.. it will take few updates..
and..




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Posted: 19 January 2012 at 12:15pm | IP Logged
gud one update...i will wait 4 tht episode yar when love can blossom btw abhiya...now wait 4 tht cont soon
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Posted: 20 January 2012 at 1:10am | IP Logged
lovely update n will wait for it to happen
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Posted: 20 January 2012 at 3:29am | IP Logged
Nice update:-):-) loved it:-)
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Posted: 20 January 2012 at 4:35am | IP Logged
nyc update dr!!!
waiting 4 update full of abhay pia...
cont soon n thanks 4 d pm
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Posted: 20 January 2012 at 9:20am | IP Logged
guys..
i hope u all will like it..
only for u all..
i've made few changes..




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Posted: 20 January 2012 at 9:37am | IP Logged


Twenty Episodes

Neha and abhay were waiting for Vivek..


Neha: pata nahi nalayak kahan reh gaya hoga..

Abhay: aa raha hai.. (vivek arrives setting his wet hairs by hands)

Vivek: lets go.. m ready.. (sitting in frontside of jeep..)

Neha: ya.. bahut jaldi.. itni jaldi to kabhi Angelina jolie bhi taiyar nahi hui hogi..

Vivek: (turns around to answer her) dekho neha.. Mera mood kharab mat karo..

Neha: just shutup.. (Abhay starts the jeep) hum kitni der se wait kar rahe hain.. Abhi jay ka call aaya tha.. wo aur arjun wait kar rahe he.. Aur tumhara pata hi nahi.. Responsibility naam ki koi cheez hi nahi hai..

Vivek: responsibility mujhe mat sikha.. Kabhi apna room dekha hai.. Dresses to bed par bikhre rehte hain..  Aur toys.. Itni badi ho gayi ho fir v tedy bears se khelti ho.. aur.. (Abhay pushes the break and Vivek gets disbalanced)

Vivek: awe..Ouch Abhay.. Dude wat happened.. Break kkyu lagaya.. Atleast warn to kar deta..(Neha laughs.. Vivek looks angrily to her)

Abhay: sorry.. Arjun and jay aa rahe hain..

Jay: yaar.. Kitni der laga di..

Neha: kya kare… Prince Williams ne time llaga diya.. ghar par hi 12 baja diye isne.. ghadi ke bhi aur hum sabka bhi..

Vivek: just shut-up..

Arjun: yaar bas v karo tum dono.. (And Arjun sits besides NEha)

 

In Tammy's house..

Tammy was waiting for Abhay and other people.. Jeep stops in front of her gate.. She comes out running.. But she gets l'll disappointed..

Jay: you are looking too beautiful..

Tammy: thanks.. But..

Jay: Tammy.. Tum aage baith jao..

Tammy: (sitting in front with Jay who is driving) where is Abhay??

Jay: (gets l'll frustrated) Wo Piya ko lene gaya hai..

Neha: we directly hall me milenge..

Jay starts the jeep.. And while driving.. In between.. He looks at tammy.. For few minutes..

 

In Chandra Niketan

Abhay rings the door bell.. a servant opens the door…

Servant: yes..

Abhay: Piya madam hai?

Servant: Your name Sir

Abhay: Tell her Abhay have come..

Servant: Aap baithiye main unhe bula kar lata hu..

Abahy sits there.. one more servant comes and asks him if he need something.. and abhay replies in no..


After few minute.. Piya comes downstairs.. wen she was coming abhay kept staring at her.. As she was looking too beautiful in Indian dress..)

Piya: hi abhay.. (Looks here n der) baki sab kahan hai..

Abhay: (silent in her beauty)

Piya comes closer and snaps her finger in front of him and says.. Abhay.. (he gets back) maine pucha sab kahan hai..

Abhay: we will get them in theater.. Lets go..

Piya: ya sure.. (they leaves and Piya looks at Abhay and smiles)

 

In theater..

Abhay stops the bike and they both gets down..


Neha and Tammy were standing there.. 


Tammy: lo.. AA gaye dono..

Neha: ya but Arjun aur jay ab kahan reh gaye..


Piya and Abhay comes to them..


Piya: hi..

Tammy: hi Piya..

Neha: wow.. Such a lovely dress.. U r looking too beautiful in Indian dress..

Piya: thanx..

Abhay: baki sab kaha hai?

Tammy: vivek aur Jay popcorn aur snax lene gaye hain aur Arjun tickets..

Arjun: Aur wo tickets le bhi aaya.. hi Piya… looking nice..

Piya: Thanx..

Jay and Vivek arrives..

Vivek: Lets get inside..

 

They gets inside.. Arjun sits besides Neha.. Vivek sits with jay.. Tammy is sitting in mid of Abhay and jay.. And Piya is in Abhay's next seat..

 

Movie was a horror movie and Piya while watching sometimes holds Abhay's hands with scare.. And while she realizes.. She puts her head over and looks at Abhay.. And Abhay too looks at her..


Piya: m sorry..

Abhay: its ok Piya..


And they again watch movie.. but after some time again such scary scene and Piya again holds his hands.. Abhay holds her hand and says

Abhay: Piya.. relax.. its just a movie.. (and piya nodes her head in yes..)

 

In Aggarwal house..


Mr Aggarwal were sitting with party members.. And discussing about some political problem


Party member: MLA sahib.. Agar aapne unn bastiwalo ki madad ki.. To Virat sahib naraz ho jayenge.. Aur we iss sehar ke jane mane Industrialist hain..

Mr Aggarwal: Sirf ek indrustrialist ke narazgi ko na jhelne ke liye main itne saare garib logo ko beghar nahi hone de sakta.. Aapko pata hai wahan ki kull aabadi kitni hai? 200 parivaar hai wahan..  aur ek parivaar me kam se kam 5-6 log hai.. Matlab.. 1000 se 1200 log.. (Mrs Re arrives) aur un logo ke ghar ko basana chahta hu.. Ujadna nahi..

Mrs Re: achchi soch hai aapki Mr Aggarwal.. Par kya aap unke ghar ko basana chahte hain ya unki basti ko..

Mr Aggarwal: matlab..Confused

Mrs Re: Matlab aap uss basti me base logo ko beghar hone se bachana chahte hain.. aur Virat Mallik uss basti ko hata kar waha development karna chahte hain..

Mr Aggarwal: haan toh..Confused

Mrs Re smiles..

 

End of Twenty Episode

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Wowww... AMAGING update dear:-):-) yeppiiee ye hui na Abhiya wali baat:-) cont soon:-)... Hug

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