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Posted: 16 January 2012 at 8:18pm | IP Logged
nyc dr...
i dont like abhay n tammy togather...
tammy is very poaaesive about abhay...
i hope we get abhay pia soon

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Posted: 17 January 2012 at 5:09am | IP Logged

Seventeen Episode

 

Neha: finally.. its our turn to submit.. Seriously its too hot here..

Vivek: oye Rajkumari ke liye koi alishan Singhasan ka intezam karo..   warna ye yahi gir jayegi..

Neha: (looks cruicially to him) Shutup Vivek.. warna tumhe yahi gira dungi..

Piya and Arjun and Jayraj start laughing)

Vivek: as if I will leave u my twin sister..

Piya: Twin sister? (Confused)

Arjun: ya.. They are twins…

Piya: owe..

Jayraj: hey guys stop it.. Abhay and tammy ko bula..

Vivek: ok.. m just calling them.. (To Neha) tujhe to bad me dekh lunga..

Neha: Ja ja.. Bada aya..

Vivek: dekh..(Arjun interrupts)

Arjun: kyu bechari ke piche pade rehte ho.. Abhay ko call karo na..

Vivek calls Abhay..

Abhay:  ab piya par shaq mat karna.. We should get a healthy bonding with her.. okk.. (and hugs her) (he gets a     

call)

haan Vivek.. Achcha thik he.. we are just coming. (to Tammy) lets go.. form submit karna he..

Tammy: ya lets go..

 

After submitting.. All went to college canteen and girls were sitting..

Neha: yaar.. M so tired..

Piya: so do I.. Uff.. Kitni der tak que me khada rehna pada.. Upper se bodyoder ki smell.. Eeyaak..

Tammy: Piya tumne apni schooling kahan se ki hai..? Aur abtak kahan thi tum..?

Piya: Chalcot School, London.. I was very small when my parents left me and my bro with my dadu.. In London and they came in India.. My governese nancy took all care of us.. Aur abtak ki meri education London me hi hui hai..

(Boys come and sit with lunch)

Jay: here we come with lunch.. Piya.. Here is Pasta for u..

Piya: thanx.. U know its my favorite..

Neha: oh wow.. Its Tammy's favorite too.. R8 tammy

Tammy: ya.. (And smiles)

Vivek: tum dono ka taste and choices ek jaisa hai..

Piya: (taking some meal on spoon) aah.. May be..

 

In Chandra Industries Ltd.

Mr Chandra: Qoutations taiyar ho gaye hain..

Assistant:  Yes Sir.. as u have instructed..

Mr Chandra: Good.. and Project Josh?

Assistant: Mad'm have said she will take personal care of it..

Mr Chandra: hmm.. Ohk You may leave now..

Assistant leaves. Mr Chandra calls someone

Mr Chandra: soni.. Come to my cabin r8 now..

 After few minutes soni comes..

Mr Chandra: ye sab kya hai Soni.. U r working from last 3 years still this mistake..

Soni: I'm sorry Sir..

Mr Chandra: what sorry.. Go and rectify all these..

Soni: ok Sir..

Mr Chandra: wait.. Soni.. Tumne loan application diya tha?

Soni: yes sir.. Mere kuch personal problems hain aur mujhe paiso ki emergency hai..

Mr Chandra: Tumhara loan grant ho chukka hai..

Soni: thank u so much sir..

Mr Chandra: I haven't finish yet.. (stands from chair)Soni.. u r one of my efficient worker.. main chahta hu kit um aage bado.. aur tum bhi yahi chahti ho r8..(soni nodes her head in yes) par Aagey badne se pehle meri kuch bato ka khyal rakho.. Sabse important baat.. Ki tum apne personal problems aur professional problems ko alag rakhna sikho.. As u enter in our office.. U r no more soni Chauhan but an employee  of Chandra Industries.. Ur donno anything else but ur job..  To be perfect u have to be efficient n fully dedicated towards ur work.. This time is only for Chandra Industries.. And rest all problems r after ur working hours.. baki tumhari financial problems ki baat.. to wo tum mujhse ya Mrs Chandra se discuss kar sakti ho.. we all are here to look out.. but in sabki waja se work me dis improvement main bardast nahi karunga.. I hope u get it..

Soni : yes Sir.. And Thank u once again..

Mr Chandra: Now u may leave..

 

End of episode Seventeen

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Posted: 17 January 2012 at 5:48am | IP Logged
ITNA SHORT UPDATE???... But AWESOME DEAR:-):-) JUS LOVED IT:-):-) NEXT time we want a long update ok:-):-)
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Posted: 18 January 2012 at 12:15am | IP Logged

Episode Eighteen

 

In Chandra Niketan..

Piya: hey dad.. Hi mom..

Mr Chandra: (was taking a glass of Beer) hi beta.. Kaisa tha aaj ka din..

Piya: (sitting in front) It was quite good.. But m so tired.. Itni dhoop and such a long que.. firstly I thought.. It will take the whole day.. And my form too was incomplete.. But.. Abhay helped me.. And me and Neha.. in just a day we have a good bonding..

Mrs Chandra: What.. how could you be so irresponsible.. u better knew that it was ur day to submit the form.. Then y it was incomplete..

Piya: mamma.. Leave na.. Wats d problem.. Now its filled and submitted.. Waise bhi mujhe iss country ke forms.. These r too hard to understand.. (Looks at the watch) ok m now leaving need to call Bro and Dadu..

 

Mrs Chandra: (to Mr Chandra) Dekha apni beti ko.. Itni irresponsibility.. Incomplete form.. I mean..(Mr Chandra interrupts)

Mr Chandra: Relax.. Its just a form..

Mrs Chandra: just a form.. Ye tum keh rahe ho.. Malay.. Tumhe to perfectism pasand hai..

Malay: right my jan.. I love perfectism.. And my daughter too.. But Piya is new to this town.. Use apna man yaha jodne me waqt lagega.. Once she accepts this city.. She would not do a single mistake.. (Holds Priya's soilders) look jaan.. Use humne yaha bulaya hai.. WO apne dadaji aur London ko chorh kar nahi aayi.. Bachpan se hi waha ka mahole usme bas hua hai.. Ye baat achchi hai ki bahut jald usne Mr Aggarwal ke bachcho sedosti kar li.. Ab use jyada waqt nahi lagega.. Aur avi to use aaye hue kuch din hi huye hain..

Priya: sayad tum thik keh rahe ho.. Ok.. I will give her some time.. (Kuch der soch kar) Malay.. Main socjh rahi thi ki Piya ko aur Mr aggarwal ke bachcho ke sath uski haweli me bhej de.. Picnic ke liye..  Piya unke sath rahegi.. To unke beech achci bonding v hogi aur Piya Indian salike bhiseekhegi.. Aur ek bar uss haweli ko bhi dekh legi..

Malay: I think u r right.. isse MlA sahib se hamare talukatme bhi madad milegi.. Jan.. U r too brilliant.. Tum Piya se pehle baat kar lo.. Fir Mrs Aggarwal se.. lekin us sabse pehle.. uss haweli ko renovate karwane ki zimmedari bhi tumhari.. na jane kaisi halatme hai.. i have to leave now.. clients wait kar rahe honge..

Priya nodes her head on yes..Smile

(mr Chandra leaves.. Mrs Chandra have a preety smile on her face and she wents upstairs)

 

In Abhay's room..

Abhay was busy in reading a book..

Neha comes to his room.. and reads the book's name Abhay was reading..

Neha: Pyaar ki ye ek kahani.. Wow love story..

Abhay: ya.. A love story of a vampire and a human.. Thier love was so powerfull.. Lastly they had to reunite..

Neha: hmm.. interesting.. have u read it all'Smile

Abhay: not yet.. I have just started.. but I know the climex.. I want to know how its all started.. (Vivek comes)

Neha: ohh.. ok wen u finished give it to me..

Vivek: What.. Neha.. U will read this.. OMG.. Kabhi books ki shaqal bhi dekhi hai..

Neha: I got more percentage than of u..

Abhay: pls stop it.. Tum dono thak nahi jate.. Waise tum dono ko kuch kehna tha..

Neha: ya.. Hum soch rahe the.. Koi nayi movie dekhe..

Vivek: Arjun aur jay se bat ho gayi hai..Tammy aur Piya se bat karni hai.. Tumhe to koi prob nahi hai na..

Abhay: no M fine.. Kitne baje ka show hai..

Neha: 1:30..

Abhay:  okk I m ready for that..

Neha: puchoge nahi ki kaun si film dekhne jana hai..

Abhay: tumlogo ne decide kar liya hai na.. Dats it..Smile

Vivek: ok.. Toh tum tammy aur Piya ko bhi msg kar dena.. Waise Tammy Piya ke aane ke bad kuch badal gayi hai..

Abhay: matlab..

Vivek: I mean wo pehle ki tarah nahi hai.. Thodi upset hai..

Abhay: don worry.. Aisa kuch nahi hai.. she is fine..

Neha: ab tum keh rahe ho to fine hi hogi.. ok m leaving.. mujhe facebooking karni he..

Vivek: m also going.. Abhay.. Dono ko bata dena.. ab ye teri zimmedari hai..

Abhay: fine.. I will..Smile

Vivek leaves.. Abhay puts his book down.. and calls someone..



In Tammy's room.. cell rings.. Tammy comes wipes off her hand.. picks d phone and smiles after watching the name..

Tammy: (with a blush) hi..Blushing

Abhay: (smiling) hi.. kya kar rahi thi..Smile

Tammy: kuch nahi bas.. ab tumse batein kar rahi hu..

Abhay: kal ka kya plan hai..

Tammy: m totally free.. Kuch khas baat..

Abhay: Neha and Vivek aaye the.. kal movie ka program hai.. be ready.. I will come to pick u up..

Tammy: which movie..

Abhay: I donno.. ask Neha about that.. timing is 1:30.. so we will come to u at..

Tammy: aur kaun kaun ja raha hai..

Abhay: sabhi.. Arjun, Vivek Neha Jay me and Piya bhi

Tammy: oh.. Abhay.. mom is calling me.. I'll get u later..

 

End of Eitghteen Episode

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Edited by KITTY&ME - 19 January 2012 at 11:08am

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Posted: 18 January 2012 at 5:35am | IP Logged
nyc dr... plzz put some abhay pia movements...
cont soon
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Posted: 18 January 2012 at 6:14am | IP Logged
lovely update...the way it lead was gud but there is no abhiya yarConfused i know u made it but phr be do somethg 4 them atleast...cont soon and make it a bit long
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Posted: 19 January 2012 at 1:22am | IP Logged
lovely update..nw plz i want some abhiya moments!
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Posted: 19 January 2012 at 11:21am | IP Logged

Nineteenth Episode

After disconnecting.. Tammy gets worried and moves here and there in her room.. Thinking

Tammy: Whats wrong with u.. Piya to abhi abhi aai he yaha.. Aur tum Abhay ko barso se janti ho.. Fir bhi..  Main itni unconscious q ho rahi hu.. Aur Abhay ke bare me main shaq kaise kar sakti hu uss par..

(Sits in her bed)

Tammy: ye mujhe kya ho raha hai.. Piya ke aane se mujhe itni problem kyun ho rahi hai.. Oh God.. Abhay ne to mujhe sab kuch bataya.. Fir bhi main itni unsecure kyun feel kar rahi hu.. God pls help me..

 

In Piya's room

Piya: bro u know wat.. It was too hot here.. And there was such a long que.. Now I realized y India is in second position for population..  and that was horrible.. in fully sunshine.. dat yacky smell.. with unfilled form.. Thankfully Abhay helped me in filling that..

Her Brother: oh my sweetheart..  Apne native land ke bare me aisi bat nahi karte.. Jo bhi hai.. Hamari apni hai..

Piya: whatever.. M missing u all.. My room my friends my family my London..

Her brother: little princess.. Me too missing u a lot..

Piya: ok if u r missing me so much den y don u make mom-dad understand to sent me back..

Her Brother: because after my training I will also come there with dadu and we will live happy ever there.. ok princess.. Now I have to leave.. u take care of ur self..

Piya: love u bro..Smile

Her brother: I love u too.. Take care.. bye..

 

Piya disconnects her phone.. with a happy smile.. And her mom enters..

Mrs Chandra: Dadaji se bat karli..

Piya: yups.. N bro se bhi..

Mrs Chandra: ok.. Apne bhai ko jyada disturb mat kiya karo.. Uske trining chal rahe hain.. Kabhi office me hota hoga.. Pareshani hoti hogi use..

Piya: with a smile: Mom.. Bro kitne bhi busy ho.. Unke pass apni choti behan ke liye time hi time hai..

Mrs Chandra: haan.. Ek tumhara bhai aur ek tumhare dad.. Dono ke lad-pyar ne to tumhe sir pe chada rakha hai.. Anyways.. Main tumhe tumhare new friends ke sath kahin bhejna chahti hu..

Piya: new friends..

Mrs Chandra: mrs aggarwal ke bachche..

Piya: oh abhay aur uske bhai behan.. Okk par kahan..( Excitingly)

Mrs Chandra: tumhare haweli picnic ke liye..

Piya: Meri haweli.. (confused)Confused

Mrs Chandra: (little sad) beta jab tum 10 saal ki thi to tumhari nanima ne marne se pehle tumhe wo haweli apni will me diya tha..

Piya: kahan hai ye haweli?

Mrs Chandra: jungle ke beech me..

Piya: wow.. Forest me.. Kab jana hai.. M ever ready for it..

Mrs Chandra: Aah.. Kuch din bad.. Me renovation kar du.. Uske bad.. Par tum apne friends se bat kar lena..

Piya: ok (gets very happy to hear it)Big smile

Mrs Chandra leaves.. Piya is l'll exited.. and picks her cell to call someone but her before it her cell rings..

Piya: (whose no. is this) hello..

Abhay: Piya??

Piya: ya who is it?Confused

Abhay: abhay..

Piya: oh hi abhay.. (smiles)Smile

Abhay: hi.. I need to ask u something..

Piya: ya..

Abhay: are u free tomorrow at 1:30 pm..

Piya: ya.. in India.. m totally free.. but why?

Abhay: ok then let's go to a movie?

Piya: (thinking) ye to abhay to bada fast nikla.. do din hue mile hue and he is asking for movie(smiles)Smile ( to him) Ok.. Lets go.. Btw which movie..Big smile

Abhay: neha will inform u about that..

Piya: kaun kaun ja rahe hain..Confused

Abhay: we all..

Piya: (thinking) achcha to group me ja rahe hain (to abhay) ok.. I will be ready.. Waise.. Where I need to come?

Abhay:  I will come and pick u up at 12pm.. Be ready on time.. Goodnight.. Take care..

Piya: ok.. I will.. Bye..

 

In Tammana's house

She was cutting vegitables..

Mrs Re: tammy.. Beta ye kya kar rahi ho.. Sabjiyo ka shape to dekho.. koi chota koi bada.. dhyan kahan hai tumhara..

Tammy: (realizes) oh.. M sorry mama..

Mrs Re: its okk.. But dhyan se.. Agar dhyan nahi rakhogi toh hath kat sakta hai..

Tammy: mama me khyal rakhungi.. And she was aboutb to leave..

Mrs Re: beta main sirf in vegitables ki bat nahi kar rahi thi.. Zindagi ki bhi bat kar rahi thi..

(Tammy turns around.. with a big questionmark on her face)Confused

Mrs Re: beta.. Tumari age ke bachche hamesha life me dhyan nahi rakhte.. Filhal tumhara concentration idhar udher ki bato me nahi balki tumhare career ki taraf hoo to better hoga.. Maa hu tumhari.. Janti hu ki ajkal tum kya sochti ho..

Tamanna: Main kuch samjhi nahi mama.. Aap kya keh rahe ho..Confused

Mrs Re: bas yahi.. (After thinking something) kuch nahi.. tum jao.. me dinner lagati hu..

Tamanna: okk.. (Thinking) mama bhi na.. (she leaves)

Mrs Re: (thinking) beta.. Tumhari soch ko main achchi tarah samjh sakti hu.. kash ki main tumhe samjha pati.. Mene apni zindagi me kai kisse dekhe hain.. Jisme tumhari jaisi ladkiya kis tarah apni zindagi tabah kar leti hain.. Aur mai abhay par to kabhi bharosa nahi kar sakti.. bhale hi wo kitna hi achcha ladka kyu na ho.. hai to wo Aadarsh khandelwal ka hi beta na..

End of Episode Nineteenth

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