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Posted: 12 years ago

 Thirty epiosode

 

Abhay was in his room.. lying on his bed. Mrs Aggarwal comes

 

Mrs Aggarwal: Abhay, ye lo tumhare liye green tea. Ab kaisa feel ho raha hai..

Abhay: (waking up) its same.

Mrs Aggarwal: have it.. u will feel good..

Abhay: okk (takes cup and sips) tastes good..

Mrs Aggarwal: Abhay tumse kuch baat karni thi..

Abhay: haan mami.. kahiye na..

Mrs Aggarwal: Abhay.. kal hum ek business Party me jana hai.. aur humsab ka jana important hain..

Abhay: ok mami.. I'll b ready.. kitne baje jana hai..

Mrs Aggarwal: 7pm.. haan par neha aur Vivek lana ab tumhe hai.. kyunki we dono

Abhay: don worry mami.. jab man chal raha hu.. toh we to mana nahi karenge.. aur kiya to me mana lunga.. don worry of dat..

Mrs Aggarwal: thanks beta.. aur haan.. tumhe kale k aur kaam karna hai..

Abhay: kya mami..

Mrs aggarwal: kal humein tumhari mom ke lawyer ke pass jana hai.. aur tumhe uske liye college se chutti leni padegi..

Abhay: thik hai mami.. waise chai bahut achchi bani thi..

Mrs Aggarwal: ab tum rest karo..

 

Mrs aggarwal leaves.. and walks in.. suddenly she notices something..

 

In Mall


MLA's car stops and bodyguards come out wid der guns and opens d door of backseats.. Neha and Vivek come out.. 


they enter in Mall.. as usual khitpit between dem. Suddenly dey surrounds wid media.. clicking piks..


Neha: yaar firse.. uff I h8 dem

Vivek: first tym in lyf.. same pinch.. (neha looks cruicily) abhay ko aana chjahiye tha.. kitne achche se handle karta hai..

Neha: ya.. whatever.. just come out wid dem..

Vivek: how?

Neha: try to karo.. ok lets enter in a shop n bgs will handle..

 

They enter in a shop.. her cell rings.. she looks at the no. n piks a cloth


Neha: Vivek main abhi aati hu..

Vivek: ok


She enters inside TR


Neha: hi β˜ΊοΈ(with a blushing smile)❀️😊

Boy in cell: hi.. kya hua.. itni jaldi kyu bulaya tha..'

Neha: Dad ko shopping par le jana tha..

Boy in cell: hmm.. so kya kya shopping ho rahi hai..

Neha: abhi to enter kiya hai aur media ne gher lia.. kisi tarah ek shop ke ander aaye aur thodi rahat mili..

Boy in cell: Abhay nahi tha wahan?

Neha: uski tabiyat kharab hai.. aur wo ghar par aaram kar raha hai..

Boy in cell: college me to wo thik tha..

Neha: ya.. but.. agar wo yaha hota to ye media ko sambhal leta kuch kaam nahi hai inhe.

Boy incell: we apna kaam hi to kar rahe hain.. pata nahi inhe kaise pata chal jata hai.. ab tum ho hi itni khubsurat ki koi bhi tumhe follow karega..

Neha: ☺️(with a blush) achcha.. ok abhi main rakh rahi hu.. baad me baat karenge..

Boy in cell: achcha kal college to aa rahi ho na..

Neha: ofcourse aa rahi hu..

Boy in cell: ok.. bye.. I love u..

Neha: I love u 2.. (and she disconnects) (comes out)

Sales girl: madm shall I pack dis..

Neha: no..

Vivek: jab lena nahi tha to uthaya kyu..

Neha: tumhe kya.. aur maine kuch kaha tumse ki tumne ye ladies top ku uthaya..

Vivek: se main tumharen liye lene wla tha.. par ab rehne do..

Neha: thik he thik he.. jyada bhao khane ki zarurat nahi.. ab socho bahar kaise jaoge..

Vivek: shall v call Abhay..

Neha: no way.. bechare ki tabiyat waise bhi kharab hai..

Vivek: toh..

Neha: hmm.. pata nahi..

Vivek: dad v na.. hume yaha chorh kar party meeting me chale gaye.. ok.. lets face dem.. bajki jo hoga.. dekh lenge..

Neha: okk..


They comes outside..

 

Reporters come and started asking questions..

 

In Tammy's room


Mrs Re: tamanna.. tumhari kal ke liye wear taiyar hai..

Tammy: ok mom.. n all r coming na.. else I eill get bore..

Mrs re: haan beta.. yash, abhay, neha vivek Piyali.. sab aa rahe hain.. lekin haan.. wahan tamij se pesh aana.. mere social relationship par asar nahi panda chahiye.. okk..

Tammy: ok mom..

Mrs Re: raat bahut ho chuki hai.. now u sud take rest.. good n8..

Tammy: gud n8 mom..

 

End of Thirtyth Episode

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Posted: 12 years ago
hey ye story abhiya ke upar hai ya kisi aur couple ke upar haiπŸ˜• becoz abhi tak abhiya have not falling in love wth each other of unke dil me bhi kuch nahi hua haiπŸ˜•
hume abhiya ka romance kab milega ????????????????
gn tc ks hsd πŸ˜Š
HAPPY KICK DAY πŸ˜Š
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Posted: 12 years ago
guys 


know 

it 

was 

not 

as 


were 

xpecting 

but 

promise 

to 

make

it

wonderful

πŸ˜‰πŸ˜ƒ


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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update dear! But plz yr i want abhay and piya together soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
working on dat dear..



http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2788434#

ye meri ek aur fiction hai..  but no abhiya...

 hope u guys will like dat too..

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Posted: 12 years ago
THANKS PEEHU.. AND M VERY SOON WILL CONTINUE aBHIYA ROMANCE


Edited by KITTY&ME - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update...
waiting 4 tht update when abhiya came closer yar..
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Thirty First Episode

 

Aggarwal Mansion

 

Mrs Aggarwal was shouting at her husband..

 

Mrs aggarwal: aap esa kar bhi sakte hain.. bachcho ko akele mall me chorh aaye..

Mr Aggarwal: Supriya.. meri important meeting thi..


Abhay comes downstare.

 

Abhay: mamu., Mami.. anything wrong??

 Mrs Aggarwal: wrong.. tumhare mamu neha aur vivek ko akele bhej diya shopping ke liye..

Abhay: what..😲

Mr aggarwal: common Supriya, bachche ab bade ho gaye hain.. aur fir.. agar meeting zaruri nahi hoti toh main unhe akela nahi chiorhta..

Abhay: I hope they r not in trouble.. its already 10.. main jakar dekh ke aata hu..

Mrs aggarwal: par abhay.. tumhari tabiyat..

Abhay: I'm fine..

 

After few minutes..

 

Abhay was coming downstare..

 

Abhay: mami.. main jake dekh aata hu..

 

And dorrbell rings. Abhay opens that.. it was Arjun in frnt of him..

 

Abhay: arjun.. tum itni raat ko.. koi problem..

 

Neha and Vivek comes after him..

 

Abhay: Neha.. Vivek.. main abhi tum dono ko hi lane wala tha..

 

They all comes inside..

 

Mrs and Mr Aggarwal comes to them..

 

Mrs aggarwal: arjun.. tum yahan.. Vivek aur neha ke sath..

 

Arjun: ya aunty.. Neha aur Vivek jis mall me the.. main bhi wahin tha..


Vivek: mom.. we were surrounded with media and it was arjun who took us out of that.. he helped me a lot and handled dis all..

 

Mrs Aggarwal gives an angry look to her husband..😑


Abhay: thanks a lot Arjun..


And he hugs him..

Arjun: Abhay.. ye tere bhai –behan nahi mere dost bhi hai..

Abhay:ofcourse..

Mrs aggarwal: Arjun beta.. thank you so much..

Arjun: my pleasure aunty..

Mrs Aggarwal: beta.. bahut raat ho chuki hai.. aaj aap yahi hamare sath hi ruk jao..

Arjun: but aunty

Vivek: ya buddy.. dekh ab itni raat ko hostel me entry milegi nahi.. aaj ruk jao.. kal hum sath me hi college jayenge..

Arjun: ok.. and they all leaves..

 

In morning

 

Mount college

Piya was walking towards class..

 

Jay: hey Piya..

 

(she didn't realize)

 

Jay: Piya..

 

(she turns back)

Piya: hi..

 

(They starts walking 2gether..)

 

Jay: hi.. so.. r u coming 2night's party..

Piya: unfortunately yes.. hey.. u too is coming.. Thank God.. I thot I'll be bored..

Tamanna: even I will be there,..


(tamanna and Piya hugs)

Jay: hi tammy.. you r looking gorgeous..

Tammy: thanks..


(She walks out with Piya)

 

Jay: (to himself) pata nahi tumhare sath mujhe kya ho jata hai..

 

And he follows them.. they all enters in class..

 

Pari: hey Piya.. hi Tammy..

Jay sits in his bench

Piya: hi Pari..

Pari: so tum London se ho.. hmm.. yahan ke log padai ke liye uk jate hai.. tum sayad pehli ho jo padai ke liye London se yahan aai ho..

Piya: well its just a wish of my parents..  excuseme.. we need to go.. lets go tammy..

Pari felt l'll embaraced..

Pari: (to herself) how dare she.. mujhe ignore kiya..

 

When they sit.. Piya gets a call..

Piya: unknown number.. she picks up.. hello.. (no voice) hello.. 

Tammy m just coming..

Tammy: class avi start ho jayegi..

Piya: just 2 minutes.. I need to check..

Tammy: ok..

(she gets out of the room in colidor..)

Piya: hello.. may I know who is this.. (irritatingly she disconnects)

Stupid fellow.. uff wasted my time..

 

She gets a msg.. she checks

 

"Meet me near canteen"

 

End of thirty first episode



 

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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update:-) but why so late??
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Posted: 12 years ago

thanks for appriciation and lovely support..


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