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Posted: 12 years ago
:-):-):-):-)wowww... AMAGING UPDATE..., ABHIYA JUS SO CUTE... Now Pia has feeling 4 Abhay:-) I jus loved it:-):-)   πŸ€—
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Posted: 12 years ago
nyc update... abhay pia was cool..
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
so nice update...abhiya scene r tooo gud loved it...so now they become more gud friends day by day...hope so akshay didnt do anthg tht harm piya and asbhay save piya from tht jerk...cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Twenty fourth Episode


At Morning


In Aggarwal mansion


Mrs Aggarwal comes to Abhay.. who was sitting with Mr Aggarwal.

Mrs Aggarwal: abhay ye main kya sun rahi hu.. Akshay ne kal Piya ke sath badtamizi ki.. ab wo ladki kaisi hai..

Abhay: mami.. Piya ab bilkul thik hai.. Maine kal raat usko apni saari sachchai bata di.. Main bhi is bare me aapse aur mamu se bat karna chahta tha.. (Neha and Vivek comes) Mami.. Piya apne mom dad ko ye sab batana nahi chahti.. par I think usko ab aur careful rehna chahiye.. Kal agar Vivek time par nahi pahunchta to Piya ke sath wo kuch bhi kar sakta hai.. Aura b Vivek ko bhi sawdhan rehna chahiye..

Mr Aggarwal: hmm.. sahi keh rahe ho.. aur.. Abhay.. tum teeno har waqt Piya ke sath rahoge.. ok.. aur main dekhta hu ki main kya kar sakta hu..

Abhay: ok mamu..

Mrs Aggarwal: us Akshay  ki ye himmat.. wo Piya bechari.. pata nahi kya soch rahi hogi.. abhi abhi to aayi hai wo.. (to her kids) beta.. tum teeno Piya ko ab kisi v hal me akela mat chorhna.. Akshay ne hum sabki life me kuch na kuch kia hai.. ab Piya ke sath bhi.. tum teeno jante hi ho na..

Vivek: relax mom.. hum ab Akshay ko ab Piya ko kisi tara nuksan pahunchane nahi dungi

 Neha: yes mom.. and Vivek.. tu bhi ab sambhal ke rehna..

Outside a temple


Piya was climbing the stairs of temple with Puja ki thali.. she enters and rings the bell.. and start worshiping..  and that time a women's thali was abt to fall but Piya helped her.. (it was geet)

Geet: haye.. abhi thali gir jati to kitna bada apshagun ho jata…  chalo.. babaji.. apki mehar se kuch nahi hua..  aapko bhi thanks hai ji..

(jay comes)

Piya: jay.. tum yaha..😲

Jay: (surprised) 😲hi.. miss London tum yaha is temple me..

Piya: ya aaj Tuesday hai na..

Geet: tum dono jante ho ek dusre ko..

Jay: ji bhabhi ye Piyali hai.. par hum isko Piya bolte hai.. meri dost.. aur Piya ye meri Geet bhabhi..

Piya: Namaste

Geet: namaste ji namaste.. bada changa naam hai ji aapka.. aur kitni bholi aur masum surat hai tumhari..

Piya: thanks..

Geet: waise tumhara ghar kahan hai?

Piya: ji main Chandra Niketan me rehti hu..

Geet: Chandra Niketan.. oh,, to tum Mr. Malay Chandra ki rishtedar ho..

Piya: ji wo mere dad hai..

Geet: achcha.. (jay interrupts)

Jay: bhabhi.. aap Piya ka biodata bad me lena.. abhi aapko der ho rahi hogi na..

Geet: are haan.. ye to badi er ho gayi.. achcha Piya baad me mulakat hogi.. aati rehna..  Sat sriyakaal..

Piya: ji.. Namaste.. (thinking) jay's bhabhi is so sweet.. and she then turns inside and gives thali to Pandit ji there..

 

In Chandra Niketan

Mrs Chandra: (on phone) what are u talking about.. Mujhe wo haweli jald se jald renovate chahiye.. agar koi kaam nahi karna chahta to kisi aur ko kahiye.. Jungle ke beech hai to kya hua.. Aap ko main demanded money v to de rahi hu na..

Manager: par madam.. wo un logo ka kehna hai ki haweli me kisi ka saaya hai..

Mrs Chandra: what nonsense.. Mr Mehra, aap 21st centuary me rehte hai ya fir 15th.. Iss zamane me v inn sab bato par believe karna.. I mean its ridiculous.. aur ye sab bat to bakwas hi hai. Koi saaya waya nahi hai wahan.. anyways.. aap dusre logo ko hire kijiye par renovation ka kaam jaldi kariye.. that's it.. aur haan.. aainda se ye ghatiya excuses mujhe nahi chahiye.. u get that..😑

 

Mrs Chandra disconnects.. Mr Chandra arrives with a cup of coffee..

Mr Chandra: kya hua jaan.. kis par itna bhadak rahi thi..

Priya: ye manager.. ek no. ka kaamchor hai.. aur iss bar had kar di..

Malay:  kyu.. kya kiya usne… (sips his coffee)

Priya: keh raha tha ki haweli me kisi ka saaya hai..

Malay: what.. (laughs) πŸ˜†is he kidding.. saaya.. kiska tumhari maa ka.. πŸ˜†(Priya gives angry look)😑 ok baba sorry jaan.. wese haweli to sasu ma ki thi na.. isliye..πŸ˜†

Priya: isliye?

Malay: isliye bahut khubsurat hai..πŸ˜‰

Piya comes..

Piya: hi mom hi dad..

Malay: here my princess.. where have u gone?

Piya: Mandir..

Malay: (surprised) Mandir..

Piya: ha mandir..

Priya: m very happy to know ki meri bachchi apne rituals ko v follow karti hai..πŸ˜ƒ

Piya: mom.. ye to bro ne sikhaya.. we har Tuesday ko London me mandir jate the.. aur mai bh unke sath hi jati thi.. isliye mujhe bhi ye aadat ho gayi.. J

Malay: thank God ki mera beta har roz bar wagera me nahi jata tha..  warna aaj tumhari mom bahut dukhi hoti..

(Both Piya and Malay laughs)πŸ˜† πŸ˜†(And Mrs Chandra is frustrated. And she leaves)

Malay: Priya suno to.. (To Piya) lagta hai bahut irritate ho gayi.. Lets go to market.. Ek new saree for her will make her smile..

Piya: ok dad lets go..

 

In Mall..

Malay stops the car and he and Piya comes out. And enters in a shop for ladies..


Malay: (to shopkeeper) pink me kuch achchi saareeiya dikhaiye..

Sales girl: Sure Sir..


And she shows them few sarees..  Piya picks one mong them..

Piya: dad.. I guess this design will be perfect for mamma..

Malay: you think so.. (Piya nodes in yes) okk (to salesgirl..) pack this one..)


They gets out of the shop and Piya notices Abhay walking out of a shop..


Piya: (thinking) Abhay itni jaldi me.. 

Malay calls her

Malay: Piya.. beta jaldi chalo.. 

Piya: yes dad.. (looks at Abhay.. and den goes to his dad.. and dey drive away..)

 

Outside a hospital


Abhay stops his car and goes inside with a bag.. 

He enters in a room.. 


Where his mom Ashwini is lying on a bed.. he goes to her.. sits.. and holds his mom's hands.. 


He opens that bag.. And tooks out the heart shaped chocolate cake..



Abhay: happy b'day mamma..

End of Twenty fourth episode

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update yar...sorry but there is a problem in like button tht didnt press...lovely update...oh abhay mom birthday i m sure abhay only shares this to piya hope so rite...cont soon thts ok yar u update a liitle late
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wowww... FABULAS UPDATE dear:-)... Loved it:-) CONTINUE SOON...
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovd it
abhay's moms bday
continue soon n thnx 4  d pm
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Posted: 12 years ago

SARASWATI PUSHPANJALI

 

OM BHADRAKALYE NAMO NITYAM SARASWATYE NAMO NAMAH|

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OM SARASWATI MAHA BHAGE| VIDYA KAMALLOCHANE|

VISHWARUPE VISHALAKSHI| VIDYAM DEHI NAMOSTUTE||

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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update ...
my lik button is not working ..