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Posted: 12 years ago
#81
guys..
i hope u all will like it..
only for u all..
i've made few changes..




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Posted: 12 years ago
#82


Twenty Episodes

Neha and abhay were waiting for Vivek..


Neha: pata nahi nalayak kahan reh gaya hoga..

Abhay: aa raha hai.. (vivek arrives setting his wet hairs by hands)

Vivek: lets go.. m ready.. (sitting in frontside of jeep..)

Neha: ya.. bahut jaldi.. itni jaldi to kabhi Angelina jolie bhi taiyar nahi hui hogi..

Vivek: (turns around to answer her) dekho neha.. Mera mood kharab mat karo..

Neha: just shutup.. (Abhay starts the jeep) hum kitni der se wait kar rahe hain.. Abhi jay ka call aaya tha.. wo aur arjun wait kar rahe he.. Aur tumhara pata hi nahi.. Responsibility naam ki koi cheez hi nahi hai..

Vivek: responsibility mujhe mat sikha.. Kabhi apna room dekha hai.. Dresses to bed par bikhre rehte hain..  Aur toys.. Itni badi ho gayi ho fir v tedy bears se khelti ho.. aur.. (Abhay pushes the break and Vivek gets disbalanced)

Vivek: awe.. Abhay.. Dude wat happened.. Break kkyu lagaya.. Atleast warn to kar deta..(Neha laughs.. Vivek looks angrily to her)

Abhay: sorry.. Arjun and jay aa rahe hain..

Jay: yaar.. Kitni der laga di..

Neha: kya kare… Prince Williams ne time llaga diya.. ghar par hi 12 baja diye isne.. ghadi ke bhi aur hum sabka bhi..

Vivek: just shut-up..

Arjun: yaar bas v karo tum dono.. (And Arjun sits besides NEha)

 

In Tammy's house..

Tammy was waiting for Abhay and other people.. Jeep stops in front of her gate.. She comes out running.. But she gets l'll disappointed..

Jay: you are looking too beautiful..

Tammy: thanks.. But..

Jay: Tammy.. Tum aage baith jao..

Tammy: (sitting in front with Jay who is driving) where is Abhay??

Jay: (gets l'll frustrated) Wo Piya ko lene gaya hai..

Neha: we directly hall me milenge..

Jay starts the jeep.. And while driving.. In between.. He looks at tammy.. For few minutes..

 

In Chandra Niketan

Abhay rings the door bell.. a servant opens the door…

Servant: yes..

Abhay: Piya madam hai?

Servant: Your name Sir

Abhay: Tell her Abhay have come..

Servant: Aap baithiye main unhe bula kar lata hu..

Abahy sits there.. one more servant comes and asks him if he need something.. and abhay replies in no..


After few minute.. Piya comes downstairs.. wen she was coming abhay kept staring at her.. As she was looking too beautiful in Indian dress..)

Piya: hi abhay.. (Looks here n der) baki sab kahan hai..

Abhay: (silent in her beauty)

Piya comes closer and snaps her finger in front of him and says.. Abhay.. (he gets back) maine pucha sab kahan hai..

Abhay: we will get them in theater.. Lets go..

Piya: ya sure.. (they leaves and Piya looks at Abhay and smiles)

 

In theater..

Abhay stops the bike and they both gets down..


Neha and Tammy were standing there.. 


Tammy: lo.. AA gaye dono..

Neha: ya but Arjun aur jay ab kahan reh gaye..


Piya and Abhay comes to them..


Piya: hi..

Tammy: hi Piya..

Neha: wow.. Such a lovely dress.. U r looking too beautiful in Indian dress..

Piya: thanx..

Abhay: baki sab kaha hai?

Tammy: vivek aur Jay popcorn aur snax lene gaye hain aur Arjun tickets..

Arjun: Aur wo tickets le bhi aaya.. hi Piya… looking nice..

Piya: Thanx..

Jay and Vivek arrives..

Vivek: Lets get inside..

 

They gets inside.. Arjun sits besides Neha.. Vivek sits with jay.. Tammy is sitting in mid of Abhay and jay.. And Piya is in Abhay's next seat..

 

Movie was a horror movie and Piya while watching sometimes holds Abhay's hands with scare.. And while she realizes.. She puts her head over and looks at Abhay.. And Abhay too looks at her..


Piya: m sorry..

Abhay: its ok Piya..


And they again watch movie.. but after some time again such scary scene and Piya again holds his hands.. Abhay holds her hand and says

Abhay: Piya.. relax.. its just a movie.. (and piya nodes her head in yes..)

 

In Aggarwal house..


Mr Aggarwal were sitting with party members.. And discussing about some political problem


Party member: MLA sahib.. Agar aapne unn bastiwalo ki madad ki.. To Virat sahib naraz ho jayenge.. Aur we iss sehar ke jane mane Industrialist hain..

Mr Aggarwal: Sirf ek indrustrialist ke narazgi ko na jhelne ke liye main itne saare garib logo ko beghar nahi hone de sakta.. Aapko pata hai wahan ki kull aabadi kitni hai? 200 parivaar hai wahan..  aur ek parivaar me kam se kam 5-6 log hai.. Matlab.. 1000 se 1200 log.. (Mrs Re arrives) aur un logo ke ghar ko basana chahta hu.. Ujadna nahi..

Mrs Re: achchi soch hai aapki Mr Aggarwal.. Par kya aap unke ghar ko basana chahte hain ya unki basti ko..

Mr Aggarwal: matlab..😕

Mrs Re: Matlab aap uss basti me base logo ko beghar hone se bachana chahte hain.. aur Virat Mallik uss basti ko hata kar waha development karna chahte hain..

Mr Aggarwal: haan toh..😕

Mrs Re smiles..

 

End of Twenty Episode

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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
Wowww... AMAGING update dear:-):-) yeppiiee ye hui na Abhiya wali baat:-) cont soon:-)... 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
really awsome update lovely yar...now i can see my abhiya scene wow...abhay losted in piyas beauty ...love the movie scene too...is jeh interested in tammy may be i guess so??? now i can see a progress in abhiya a little bit but thts gud cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
lovely update..aww loved abhiya!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
amazing dr!!! abhay pia are amazing...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87

Twenty first Episode

In Aggarwal house

Mrs Re and other party members were there and discussing a problem..


Mrs Re: achchi soch hai aapki Mr Aggarwal.. Par kya aap unke ghar ko basana chahte hain ya unki basti ko..

Mr Aggarwal: matlab..

Mrs Re: MAtlab aap uss basti me base logo ko beghar hone se bachana chahte hain.. aur Virat Mallik uss basti ko hata kar waha development karna chahte hain..

Mr Aggarwal: haan toh..

Mrs Re: (smiles) toh wo zamin Government ki hai..  Par uss bastiwalo ne avaidh kabza kar rakha hai.. par sarkar ki anumati ke bagair we iss zamin par kuch nahi bana sakte..

Mr Aggarwal: yes u r right.. Unhe iss zamin par development ke liye government bid ka intezar karna padega.. Par usme abhi waqt hai..

Mrs Re: aur aapko issi waqt ka faida uthana padega..

 

After movie gets finish.. All of them comes out..

Arjun: achchi movie thi na..

Vivek: ya.. Aur wo bitch ki shaqal to kuch jani pehchani si lagi mujhe.. ah.. Kahan dekha.. Ya.. Right.. She was looking alike of Neha right..


Every one laughs.. Jay noticed Tammy's smile and found its beautiful..


Arjun: shutup Vivek.. Neha is so beautifull..

Abhay: Tammy mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai..


And they comes aside..


Abhay: main janta hu ki main Piya ke sath aaya.. Tumhe iss baat se thesh pa..(Tammy interrupts)

Tammy: kuch kehne ki zarurat nahi hai Abhay.. Main janti hu kit um Arjun ki bike ko repair karane ke liye gaye the aur kisi aur ko Piya ka address pata nahi tha.. Isliye tum dono ko akela aana pada..

Abhay: (gets satisfied and smiles) Thanks.. Mujhe laga tumhe bura lagega..

Tammy: Abhay.. Maine pichle do dino me jo kuch bhi kiya.. un sab ke liye main tumse maafi mangna chahti hu.. Aur me ab tumpar shaq nahi karungi.. m sorry..

Abhay: its ok Tammy.. (He moves his head and looks at iceream shop..) Icecream khaogi..

Tammy: nahi Abhay.. Der ho rahi hai.. Mom will be waiting..

Abhay: sirf ek icecream se der nahi hogi.. (Looks at his friends where others were talking) tum unsabke pass jao.. Main sabke liye icecream lata hu..

Tammy: mere liye strawberry..


Abhay smiles and leaves.. Tammy goes to others..


Neha.. Hmm.. Kya batein ho rahi thi lovebirds ke beech..

Tammy: Neha.. Pls...

Neha: ok baba..

Piya: Abhay kahan gaya..

Tammy: Icecream lane..

Piya: guys excuse me.. Main abhi aayi..


She wents to girl's washroom..

 

Abhay comes with icecream for them.. and gives each to them..


Neha: thanx Abhay..

Abhay: (wen he realize Piya is not here..)Piya kahan hai..

Tammy: wo abhi aa jayegi..

Abhay: okk..

 

Piya comes out of washroom and washes her hands.. In basin there..  And after done.. She comes out.. But in her way he bumps to a guy..

Piya: ouch..


Outside..


Everyone was waiting for Piya.. It's a l'll more than xpected time.. Piya has not come.. Abhay was still hold her strawberry icecream.. Which was now melted..


Abhay: shit.. its all melted.. now I don think.. Piya will have it..

Neha: Ya.. she wouldn't.. waise..  tumhe kaisepata ki Piya ko strawberry flavor pasand aayega..

Abhay: (he throws that melted dirty icecream..)aah.. Main janta hu..

Tammy: wo kar kya rahi hain..

Neha: I donno.. may be she is on her way..

Abhay: main Piya ke liye dusri icecream le aata hu.. (and he leaves)

Jay: Tammy.. Main tumhe drop kar deta hu..

Tammy: rehne do Jay.. Tumhe problem ho jayegi..

Neha: tammy.. tumhe late ho raha hai.. jyada der hui tohb Isha aunty pareshan ho jayegi..

Arjun: right tammy.. Jay tumhe meri bike par chorh aayega..

Tammy: par..

Jay: par war kuch nahi.. just come..

 

And tammy and Jay leaves..

Arjun: piya ko kuch jyada der nahi ho rahi..

Neha ya.. now its l'll worrying.. wo to yaha kisi ko janti bhi nahi..

Vivek: main jakker dekhta hu..


Piya bumps to a guy and he is Akshay.. who did that intensionally.. to touch her.. Piya gets angry..

Piya: idiot.. dikhayi nahi deta.. (recognize him but donno his identity) (thinking) ye to wahi ladka hai jo us ladki ke sath college me tha)

Akshay: tumhari jaisi khubsurati dekh kar to koi bhi andha ban sakta hai..

Piya: shut up.. 😡(And she crosses him) (But he picks her hands and piya gets angry)

Piya: tumhari himmat kaisi hui mera hath pakadne ki..😡

Akshay does not leave her hand.. Piya gets more angry..

Piya: chorho mera hath.. (And she manages to free it and slaps him)

Akshay: (gets angry and holds Piya's both the arms tightly and pushes her) tum jaisi ladkiyo ko sidha karna mujhe aata hai..

Piya: chorho mujhe warna main chillaungi..

 

End of Twenty First Episode

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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
akshat is misbehaving with pia...
hope abhay comes dere 4 pia..
ccont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
i hate akshay
i hope abhay saves piya(ofcourse he'll)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
awesome update..nw abhay is gonna save piya!