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PYAAR KII YEH EK KAHAANII

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Posted: 22 December 2011 at 6:40am | IP Logged

dear 4nds.. i know u all are missing pkyek badly.. so here i m presentimng a new PYAR KI YE EK KAHAANI


CAST N CREW

ABHAY KHANDELWAL Vivian Dsena smart, friendly, lovable, hot and intelligent guy of d town (shimla) lives with his mamaji . His father lives in UAE with his second wife.


Piyali Chandra Sukirti Kandpal beautiful, smart, but arrogant girl


Virendra Aggarwal Abhay's uncle who takes care of him. He is mla.

Supriya Aggarwal  Abhay's mamiji always busy in kitty parties.


Neha Aggarwal Heena khan Abhay's cousin sister Abhay loves her a lot. Dey spent more times together. No secrets between them.


Vivek Aggarwal Ritvik Dhanjani Abhay's cousin brother. He and Abhay and Neha are like best friends. As their parents Virendra and Supriya have less time for them. All three of them do lots of masti.


Aadarsh Khandelwal Abhay's father

Ashwini Khandelwal Kishwer merchantt Abhay's mother

Chandramukhi Khandelwal Abhay's step mother


Akshay Khandelwal Abhay's step brother always jealous of Abhay. He lives in shimla. Apart from his parents.


Tamanna Re Neha saxena Abhay Vivek and Nehas' friend is attracted by Abhay but for him a good friend.


Mrs. Isha Re Tamanna's mother, social worker.

Arjun Chauhan Abhay's friend

Malay Chandra Business tycoon of Shimla and Piyali's father.

Priya Chandra Piyali's mother.

Father David Fernandez Principle of St. Mary's

Mrs Shyamlata Teacher, St. Mary's

Jayraj Vardhan Neha's friend

Maanraj Vardhan Jayraj's elder brother

Geet Maanraj Vardhan Jayraj's sister-in-law

Pari collegemate

NEW MEMBERS WILL BE ADDED FOR NEW TWISTS AND TURNS

First episode

Students are moving in colidor. They all are in school unforms. A girl is looking here n there curiously as she is looking for someone. Then she moves to a couple.

Tamanna: Neha, Vivek kya kar rahe ho tum dono yahan. Aur Abhay kahan hai? Assembly suru hone hi wala hai.Confused

Neha: hmm.. hum bhi jante hai ki assembly suru hone wali hai. Par ye to batao. Gayab to Arjun bhi hai fir tumhe sirf Abhay ki hi fikra kyun hai.Wink

Tamanna: are ye kya keh rahi ho. Tumhe to pata hai na aaj hamara is school me last day hai aur Abhay ka yahan hona kitna zaruri hai.Confused

Vivek : exam to humne bhi clear kiya hai. Fir sirf Abhay hi itna important kyun hai. Aur wo Neha ko fi karta hai.and dey both laughs.LOL

Tamanna: yeh to tum dono bhi jante ho ki Abhay kyun important hai. Par hai kahan.

Neha: are dhundho to bhagwan bhi mil jate hai Abhay to tumhare ' u know na.

Tamanna : (with a blush) Blushingare tum bhi na Neha.. tumhe to chorungi nahi.

Neha runs. Vivek still laughing and tamanna chasing Neha.

Ajun arrives

Arjun: guys princi is calling us for assembly. Come fast.

They all go to downstairs.

 

 

Assembly is going on.

Father David: Good morning childrens. Jaisa ki aap sabhi jante hi hai ki aaj hamare school mein kuch naye students aanewale hai. Par sath hi sath kuch purane students ki jinhone iss saal senior secondary examination ko successfully clear kar dia hai. And aaj hamare school topers ko yaha vishesh samman diya jayega. Hamein garv hai ki hamare school ke students ne iss sal bhi 100% result aaya hai. Aur hamare hi school ke ek brilliliant student ne All over India mein top kiya hai. And now all top ten students will be announced.

Mrs Shyamlata handles the mike. Top ten in Arts stream are

No. 10 Arvind Mukherjee

No. 9 Rima Khalkho

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No. 2 lucky singh

And the no. position goes to Tani Ganguli who scored 95.8%

And now time for commerce stream

No. 10

Tamanna: dekha.. abhi tak Abhay nahi aaya. Abhi science stream ka time bhi aa gaya. Kaha hai wo

Neha: are fikar not. Aa jayega.

Vivek : are tere ko to pata hai na. last moment me entry marega apna hero.

Tamanna: but fir v. kam se kam aaj ke din to time pe aana chahiye.

Arjun: ssshh.. bas ab hamara no. aane wala hai. Abhay jarur aa jayega.

Tamanna: thinking lagta hai ki meri kismet me sirf intezar hi hai.

And our commerce topper who secured 98% is Amandeep Gill.

And now time for science stream.

And in no. 10th position Vivek Aggarwal

No. 9 Shwetha Priyadarsini

No. 8 Neha Aggarwal

No. 7 Arjun Chauhan***

No. 4 Akshay khandelwal

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And the top position goes to our most brilliant student of the batch who made us proud and who is topper in India is {tamanna: come on Abhay. Ab to aa jao} Abhay Khandelwal.

Abhay please come on the stage. 

Everyone is clapping. And a boy coming towards the stage. Having sexy smile. Shine in eyes.

Mrs Shyamlata: Abhay got 99.69%

The boy was looking extremely good in uniform. Face is not showing yet.

A student: Congratulations Abhay. Thanx (he replies)

Second student: looking nyc Abhay I knew you will be topper but national topper wow and she hugs him (thanks shipra and you too are looking very sexy today)

Shipra: you naughty boy. Now go princi is looking for you (face is still not showing)

Mrs Shyamlata: Abhay come on do it fast.

Abahy reaches to the stage.

Mrs shyamlata : Congratulations Abhay.

Thanks mad'm and he moves to father Fernandez for taking his shield.

Father: Congratulations Abhay. You made it. We are proud of you.

Abahy: (now his full front view) thank you so much Sir. Its all because of you and all teachers.

And father puts medal to him. And he gives him his award.

Abhay shows it to everyone. Everyone is cheering for him and clapping. Specially tamanna.

Akshay : Iss baar bhi tumne mujhe hara diya. Par kismet bar bar tera sath nahi deghi Abhay.

Arjun was listening it and he thoughts (tera kuch nahi ho sakta jalebi) and now claps for Abhay and ignores him.

End of first episode

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pm list:

pkyekvisu,  hema_rawatrajeevkiijann, rashi.rose--Rose-- bellaaaAkshi0019,dazzling_glory, Shifat, abhiya_pkyek, Princess_jiya, Jarin04, 

arunsunita_gm,  coolflora,shivanirajput,  peachgirl,   abhiyakreyasmdosi, visu12, 

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Edited by RajeevsKitty - 12 December 2012 at 4:30am

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Posted: 23 December 2011 at 12:13am | IP Logged

Second episode

Everyone is cheering and all are happy. Arjun and Vivek come to Abhay. They picked him up in der shoulder. Wo unko neeche utarte hai.ClapSmile

Vivek: thanks Abhay agar tumne preparation me hamari help nahi ki hoti to hume 80's kya 50's me bhi no. nahi ate.Big smile

Arjun: haan yara. Thanks a ton. Teri wajah se hi hume yahan ke best IT college me admission milne wala hai. Tu nahi hota to hum kaha jate.Smile

Abhay: bas bhi karo. Hum sab ne milkar mehnat ki thi. And now we have wat we always wanted to have.Embarrassed

Neha: par aise kaam nahi chalega. What.. Abhay ne all over india me top kia hai. Party to banta hi hai.Big smileWink

Arjun: pehli bar tumne aqal ki bat ki hai.. (to Abhay) boss party to banta hi hai.Wink

Abhay: (with smile on his face) ok mene kab mana kiya hai. Let's bang the canteen.Smile

Group: yeeeaahhh

Abhay: come on. let's go. But where is Tammy.

Vivek: kamal hai. Kabhi tu tamanna ko dhundhta hai. Kabhi wo tujhe search karti hai. Tum dono sath sath hi kyu nahi rehte jab ek dusre se door nahi reh sakte.

Abhay: aisa kuch nahi hai. Usne v top 5 me jagah banai hai. Party me wo nahi hogi to kuch missing sa nahi lagega.

Neha: oh'. Missing'

Abhay: Neha.. chup kar.

Arjun: chup toh tammi hai. Dekh na wahan akeli khadi hai tere liye.

Abhay Arjun ko ghurta hai and he says : tum sab canteen me jao main Tammy ko sath me lekar aa raha hu.

Neha: ok bro. hum log tum dono ko akela chorh dete hain kuch der ke liye.Wink

Abhay moves from der to tamanna with a blush.Embarrassed

Tamanna is standing near balcony. Cool breezy wind is blowing. Abhay comes nearer.

Abhay: Congratulations Tammy.Smile

Tamanna: oh Abhay. Congratuations. Mujhe pata tha ki tum hi school me top karoge.Smile

Abhay: thanks.. Par tum yaha akeli kyun khadi thi. Kya bat hai?


Tamanna: main bas yu hi inn hawao me kho gayi thi. Ye thandi thandi hawa kitni achchi lagti hai. Par aaj hum sab se inka akhiri rishta hai. Aaj ke bad in hawao ka, is school ka, hamara canteen, yaha ka sab kuch khatam ho jayega humare liye. Reh jayengi to bas yadein. Aisa kyu hota hai Abhay ki hume hamari sabse pyari cheezo se abhi na kabhi alag ho jana padta hai. Humne itne salo me yaha kya kuch nahi paya. Itne achchi education, lots of fun, itne achche dost, hume ye sab kuch chod kar jana padega. But. Mera insab se door jane ka bilkul bhi man nahi hai. I will miss them all.(she gets upset while talking and puts her head down)Cry

Abhay: kisne kaha hum ye sab chorh kar ja rahe hain. Mujhe to ye nahi lagta. Ye school humara hai. Humne yaha jo kuch bhi sikha wo sab humse sari zindagi koi nahi cheen sakta. Hamari dosti, hamari masti, Ye sabkuch hamari yadon me kaid hai. Aur in yado ko humse koi juda nahi kar sakta. Aur hamesha yaad rakhna(lifing her face) hum achche dost hain aur hamesha sath rahenge. Ok. Aur ab to hamara admission bhi same college e ho raha hai. Kuch khatam nahi hua. Ek nayi suruwat hui hai. Now comeon smile.(he wipes her tears and hugs her)

Tamanna: thanks Abhay. U r my best buddy.

Abhay: chalo ab canteen chalte hai. For our success party.

Peon arrives

Peon: (to Abhay) AApko Father ne office me bulaya hai.

Abhay: Tammy tum chalo main abhi ata hu.

Tamanna comes to canteen. Students are enjoying.Smile

Neha: Tammy u r alone. Where is Abhay?

Tamanna: ( picking a slice of pizza) father ne bulaya hai.

Vivek: pak raha hoga bechara Abhay.

Group laughs.

Arjun: Abhay tumne hamare school ko ek nayi unchaio tak pahunchaya hai. Hame tum par garv hai.

Tammy punches him. And says: shut up arjun. He is our principal.respect him

Arjun: yaar tum aur Abhay bhi na ek jaise ho. Ek dam sushil.

In principal's room

Abhay: may I come in Sir.

Father: of course my son. (Abhay enters). Abhay. U really made us proud. Tumne hamare school ko nayi bulandi tak pahunchaya hai. Ek nayi disha di hai. Aur aj main tumhekuch dena chahta hu. And he opens his Drawer and picks a pen. And he gives that to Abhay.

Abhay. This pen is not an ordinary pen. My son, this pen was given by my father. He told to give it to an xtra ordinary boy. And you are a sparkling student. You deserve this. Keep it.

Abhay tooks dat and clipped it n his pocket.

Abhay: thank you so much Father to give me this honor. And he touches his feet.

Father picks him up: God bless you my child.

Abhay lives with a smile of success in his face.

Father: (thinking) yeh ladka bahut aage jayega. Oh Jesus! Be with him.

End of Second episode

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Edited by KITTY&ME - 23 January 2012 at 1:44am

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character sketch

ABHAY KHANDELWAL Vivian Dsena smart, friendly, lovable, hot and intelligent guy of d town (shimla) lives with his mamaji . 


Piyali Chandra Sukirti Kandpal beautiful, smart, but arrogant girl


Virendra Aggarwal Abhay's uncle 


Supriya Aggarwal  Abhay's mamiji 



Neha Aggarwal Heena khan Abhay's cousin sister 


Vivek Aggarwal Ritvik Dhanjani Abhay's cousin brother. 


Aadarsh Khandelwal  Abhay's father


Ashwini Khandelwal Kishwer merchantt Abhay's mother


Chandramukhi Khandelwal Abhay's step mother


Akshay Khandelwal Abhay's step brother 


Tamanna Re Neha saxena Abhay Vivek and Nehas' friend 


Mrs. Isha Re Tamanna's mother, social worker.


Arjun Chauhan Abhay's friend


Malay Chandra Business tycoon of Shimla and Piyali's father.


Priya Chandra Piyali's mother.


Father David Fernandez Principle of St. Mary's

Mrs Shyamlata Teacher, St. Mary's

jayraj vardhan Neha and arjun's friend


NEW MEMBERS WILL BE ADDED FOR NEW TWISTS AND TURNS




Edited by KITTY&ME - 14 January 2012 at 5:40am

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nice start ..
 continue soon nd pm me next timeSmile

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Third episode

Aggarwal mansion

Mrs Aggarwal: (in phone) ya I want everything to be best. My kids came in top 10 position and my nephew is Topper of the country and the party also sud be top most page 3 party. I dont want anything less or unmatched with my standard. Nothing sud be left. Everything must be perfect for them. I don't want any compromise on it.

Man in phne: yes mad'm I will pay my personal attention.

Supriya: good. Any excuse will be borne by you.( disconnects).

{She comes near to a photo} Ashwini, I wish ki tum bhi aaj yaha hoti. Aaj tumhare bte ne tumhara sar fakra se uncha kar diya hai. Ab tumhe koi shkayat nahi hogi. I am really proud of Abhay.

Abhay walking in colidor. And he bumps to Akshay.

Abhay: I am sorry.

Akshay: haan sorry to tu bolega hi. Ek jaan bujh kar tumne mujhe dhakka mara. Ab ye natak.

Abhay: maine kuch jaan bujh kar nahi kiya. It was an accident.

Akshay: oh really! Tum mujhe baar baar neecha dikhane ki koshish karte ho.. but I will not let this happen again.

{Tabhi waha mrs Shyamlata aati hai}

Mrs. Shyamlata: Boys kya ho raha hai yaha? Kyun lad rahe ho tum dono.

Abhay: nothing mad'm. just an accident.

Mrs Shyamlata: Abhay, don't I know what was that? (both are staring each other)Tum dono ka ye hamesha ka jhagda hai. Ok leave. Mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai.

Abhay: Sure mad'm (akshay leaves with frustration)

Mrs. Shyamlata: Abhay main janti hu ki is bar bhi akshay ne tumhare sath jhagda kiya. But ye tum dono ka gharelu mamla hai. Isse ghar par hi rehne do. Tum samzdar aur suljhe hue ladke ho. Isliye tumhe samjha rahi hu. Akshay se kuch kehna koi matlab nahi. Par tum samajhte ho. Baat ko jitna kheencha jata hai wo utni hi badti hai aur fir bigad jati hai. Apne problems ko apne upper havi mat hone do.

Abhay: ok mad'm. I understand what you are saying and I'll take care of it.

Mrs. Shyamlata: mujhe tumse yahi ummed thi.

Abhay enters in the canteen.

Vivek: here is our hero. Guys!! three cheers for Abhay. Hip hip hurray. Hip hip hurray. Hip hip hurray. {every1 is clapping and cheering for Abhay}

Abhay: thanks everyone. And now let's begin the party. {Abhay coke ki bottle ko shake karta hai and then he opens that and spread dat} this is for our friendship and our bright future. We will stay in each others' heart forever. Isn't it… {and he pours it to friends' glasses}

{he comes to Tammy and pour it to her glass and looks into her eyes.}

Abhay: Tammy aaj sham ko tum aa rahi ho na.


Tamanna: (confused)Abhay I can't promise. But.. tum to jante ho na mama ko.. jyada der hui to wo pareshan ho jayegi. So m not sure.

Abhay: Tammy, u have to come. And I will drop u at home. Don't worry. I will manage everything.

Tamanna: Abhay but… tum samajh nahi rahe ho.

Neha: comeon Tammy. Its not first time you are coming to our party. So no more nakhra wakhra. You are coming. Abhay ne kaha na wo tumhe drop kar dega.

Tamanna: but yaar, abhi mama aur main hai sirf ghar par. Papa is out of town for a month. Mama will not allow me.

Neha: don't worry yaar. Aunty se main baat karlungi.

Arjun: ya Tammy. You have to come. Atleast for Abhay.

Tamanna: ok…(still having confusing face)

Vivek: ok guys ab chale… baki batein sham ko.

Neha: ya even I have lots of works to do.. shopping and all for tonight.

Abhay: (whispers to tamanna) Tammy I'll come to pick u up.. u get ready by time. Bye.

And they left. Tammy is smiling and blushing and she too lefts.

At home

Tamanna: mama… mama…

Mrs re: what happened. Why you are shouting.

Tamanna: mama, Neha has invited me to her party and Abhay is coming in evening for picking me up. Please mujhe waha jane ki permission do na.

Mrs re: ya. I know. Even supriya too has invited me. Tell Abhay not to come. U'll go with me.

(Tamanna looks l'll upset. Her mom notices it.)

Mrs re: kya hua koi problem.

Tamanna: No mama. Nothing.

Mrs re: look beta. Abhay is ur friend. Don't make it anything more. You both are kids right now. And your future is waiting for you.

Tamanna: mama aisa kuch nahi hai. Main aur Abhay. We are best buddies. And main bas ye soch rahithi ki sham ko kya pehanna hai. I don't have anything new in my wardrobe. Par aapne bat ko kaha se kaha pahuncha diya.

Mrs re: (smiling) bas ye bat thi. Hum abhi shoping par chalet hai. U getup and change urself.

Tamanna: thanks mama. She hugs her.

Mrs Re: now go, hurry up. {tamanna goes upstairs and closes her room with a smile on her face}

Mrs Re: (thinking) I wish baat yahi ho. Kuch aur nahi.

End of third episode

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nice start ..
 continue soon nd pm me next timeSmile


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Fourth episode

Abhay, Vivek and Neha reach their house . Mrs Aggarwal was talking to one of the party worker and she saw them coming.

Mrs. Aggarwal: Excusme pathak ji, {she moves towards upstairs} Neha Abhay Vivek come here.

Neha: ya mom.

Mrs Aggarwal: (rudely, but normal for Abhay,Neha and Vivek)as u all know ki aaj ghar me tum logo ki success party hai. Par ye bat tumme se koi na bhulna ki ye page 3 party hai. Bade bade guest honge. Media too will be there. And I will not forgive anytype of scene as u (pointing Vivek) did last time.Angry

{and se turns back to the party worker}

Neha: Mom I need money for shopping etc.

Mrs Aggarwal: Your party wear are kept in ur room. Infact tum sab ke aaj ke kapde tumlogo ke room me hain.

{And she moves. all gets happy}

Party worker: Mad'm aaj ki party me humne town ke sare page3 logo ke sath sath opposition party ke logo ko bhi invite kar diya hai. And Chandra's too. Suna hai ki unki beti bhi town me aa chuki hai. Aur sayad wo bhi is party me sirkat kare.

Mrs. Aggarwal: hmmm. Interesting. Pata nahi kyun. But these chandras' are very weird. Khair. Mr and Mrs Chandra se to kayi bar mil chuki hu. Aaj raat unki beti se bhi mulakat ho jayegi.

Party worker: mad'm aap in chandras' ke sath dosti badana kyunchahti hain. I mean, isse hamari party ke liye koi benefit?

Mrs Aggarwal: Pathakji. Aap ye sab se jyada dillagi apna kaam karne me lagaye. That will be better and rest left for me.

Party worker: Sorry mad'm

Mrs Aggarwal: now you may leave.

{he lefts}

Mrs Aggarwal:(thinking) Chandra's se dosti hamare political career ke liye faydemand ho sakti hai. Candra's have no blackspot in their names. Na kuch bure panne aur na hi bhale panne ai inki zindagi ki kitab me. Aur in kore panno ka fayeda main uthana janti hu. Jaise maine Mrs Re se dosti badayi to have benefit of her social service. And still she is having no idea about it. Chandra's ko bhi koi khabar nahi hogi.Stern Smile

{Neha at her room}

Neha: W*F! Main ab ye pehanungi(picing her blue colour suit) ye chudidar. No not happening. I wanna look sexy not behanji.Angry

{Abhay n Vivek enters}

Vivek: even I got a pj wear.(sitting in Neha's bed) Uff. Mom hame encourage kar rahi hai ya punish.Confused

Abhay: but Neha. It's such a beautiful and pretty dress. And you will look gorgeous tonight.Smile

(Neha gives anger look)Angry

Vivek: ya. Tumhe jo itne wonderful clothes mile hain. That black jacket, and all. Dude. Aisa lagega ki party sirf tumhare liye hai.

Abhay: to ek kaam karte hain. Lets exchange our outfits. Teri dress main pehan lunga aur meri itum.

Neha: par main kya karungi(with having pity look) Unhappy

Vivek: shut up Neha. And Abhay it's a bad idea. Tumhare size ke kapde pehanunga to joker lagunga.

(Abhay and Neha laughs. Abhay comes nearer to Neha and puts his hand in her shoulder)

Abhay: Neha. Trust me. You are going to rock tonight. (and he then tooks out some money and give it to Vivek) Vivek, take this and have an outfit of your wish.Smile

Vivek and Neha gets surprised.

Neha: itne saare paise aaye kaha se.Confused

Abhay: Bank robbery.Wink


Neha and Vivek: what? (they look like disbelieving and confused)Confused

Abhay: (with mischievous smile) relax guys. Mom ke account se jo mere name pe paise aate hain. It's from them.Wink

{Vivek hugs him. And says ok lets go together. Others agree to him and they go together}

End of fourth episode

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Fifth episode

All three reach to the mall. Neha moves to fragrance shop. And Abhay and Vivek are in men's outfit shop. Vivek is too confused while choosing.

Vivek: dude wat say. Is it better?

Abhay: try for left one.

Vivek: this one? Ahh i gues this will look hot on me.

Abhay: dude pik some and go to trial room.

Vivek: ya that wud be better. (he wents inside th TR

Abhay looks out and comes to a girl in another shop.

Abhay: green will look gorggeous on u.(pointing a green dress there)

girls shockedShocked

Tamanna: Abhay u here. Yaha kaise.Shocked

Abhay: hello aunty (mrs re was coming after seeing him)Smile

Mrs isha: hello beta. aap kaise ho. bahut bahut mubarak ho tumhe. May god give you more success in your life.

Abhay : thanks aunty.

Mrs Re: but what were u doing here. shoping for urself?

Abhay: no aunty. not for me. but for Vivek.

Mrs Re: oh to tum aur Vivek dono aaye ho yaha. where is he?

Abhay: do nahi aunty. teeno. Neha is in saomewhere (looks here and there) ya there she is. (Points to a shop) and Vivek is in trial room.

Mrs Re: oh. And u will not have anything.

Abhay: aunty mami already purchased a lot for me.

And are u coming tonight.?

Mrs Re: ya beta. m definitely coming with Tammy.

Abhay: oh aunty then i will come to pick both of you.Smile

Mrs Re: na beta. iski koi zarurat nahi hai. hum aa jayenge.

Abhay: are you sure aunty. i wudn't have any prob to pick u  up.Smile

Mrs Re: na beta. dont worry. i will come in time.( Vivek arrives)

Vivek: Abhay tujhe kitni der se dhund raha hu.

 oh hello aunty. how are you and hi Tammy.(whispers to Abhay) now no problem now i know tujhe itni der kyun ho rahi thi.Smile

Abhay: shut up Vivek.

Mrs Re: to beta aapki shoping ho gayi?

Vivek : ya aunty. and Abhay sponsered it.

Mrs Re: thats good beta. ab tamanna to itna waqt..

Tammy (interrupts): mom even i choosed my wear. (piks same green)

Abhay smiles.

Mrs Re: achcha bachcho ab sham ko milte hain.

Tamanna: bye( and gives a cute smile to Abhay.)

after they left

Vivek: Abhay chal ab payment kar de.WinkTongue

Abhay: ok chal.Smile

They piks their carriage. and looks for Neha

Neha comes after paying for her accessories and piks her bag and comes out.

Vivek while walking: itni der

Neha: han tune to do minute me hi sab nipta lia. ek jacket ke liye aada ghanta.

( they fight Abhay interrupts

Abhay: relax guys. baki ka jhagda ghar me.

they reach to their car.

Neha: lets lunch outside.

Abhay: ok but this time Vivek will sponcer.

Vivek: achca thik hai bacjhcha. tere liye kuch bhi.SmileWink

they goes to a resturant

Abhay orders for them. And his cell phone rings. He disconnects after seeing number. They are waiting.

Vivek: Abhay. Aaj fir se tera us jalebi ke sath jhagda hua na.

Abhay: kisne kaha?

Vivek: we know it Abhay. Chupa mat. Yaar aaj school ka last day tha par wo.

Abhay: chorh na. yeh to roz ka matter hai.

Neha: aise kaise dear. Wo hamesha bina kisii waja se tumhare piche pada rehta hai. Be wajah jalta rehta hai tumse. Even subah bhi jab tumhe award mil raha tha to tujhe haraane ki bat kar raha tha. Aaj job hi halat hai sab uski aur uske mom ki waja se hi hai. I don't understand usko aur kya chahiye.Angry

Waiter comes and puts their lunch in the table. He serves it to their plates.

Abhay: wow. Neha's favorite paneer…Wink And Vivek, tera dum aalo.Wink (he started eating)

Neha looks to him curiously.Angry

Abhay: (picking biryani with his spoon) kha lo warna ye tumse naraaz ho jayenge. (Phone again rings and he dis connects)

Vivek: (eating) tum nahi khaogi to mujhe de do na.

Neha: shut up u both. Abhay itna achcha hona bhi thik nahi. Ager tum kuch nahi kahoge to uski himmat aur badegi. Aaj kal to sage bhai bhi dushman ban jate hai wo to fir bhi sautela hai.

Vivek(looking angrily): what do you mean.? Main tumhara dushman hu.

Neha: dost bhi nahi ho. Jab dekho meri tang khichte ho. Us din meri earrings tumne us nikita ko de di.

Vivek: you sud thanks me. Bechari ke kan kat gaye.

(Abhay eating and laughing)

Neha: you are impossible. Main mom ko bata dungi ki tumne unke purse se paise churaye the aur dad ke soap me chilli owder bhi tumne dala tha.

Vivek : tumhare jaise chugaljkhor se to bhagwan bachchaye. Chugalkhor aunty.

Neha: main chugalkhor aur tum choro ke nana.. nana ji.. aur tum.. tum tum ek no. ke (Abhay after eating and putting his hand in lemon water)

Abhay: relax. Fir se suru ho gaye tumlog.(wipes his hand in napkin). Mauka chchiye tum dono ko.

Now let's go back to home. Mamu is coming or maybe he is already in. baki ka ghar par finish karna.

And he again gets call from same no. but disconnects.

Tamanna in her room. Opens her bag and piks that green dress. Remembers Abhay's word.

Tammy : ( thinking) Abhay. Thank you so much. You don't know how much precious this dress is for me. ( she blushes.)

End of fifth episode

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