Hi Amal,
I managed to catch up reading this FF of yours. Apologies for being late 😊
really interesting concept. Nice to see you giving a different twist to Arshi. I'm eager to see your further updates.
Just a tip, I could see some incorrect language usage at some points.. nothing too glaring, but just run it through a spell check and it will be perfect!
cheers! 😊
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