ArHiFF:Winter Storms & Cherry Blossoms [Note-Pg57] - Page 11

sounds nice
fab prologue do continue soon
will be waiting for chap 1😊

i liked how it started

wow! nice

do pm me updates!

thanks for the pm!!

Hi Amal,

Thanks for inviting me to read the prologue - really nice start. Have to admit that I was slightly confused at the start, as you seemed to flit from 'third person' to '1st person' then back to '3rd person' for Khushi's character. Found it very enjoyable though - thank you!

Edited to add: If you want to amend it, it starts where you write ''I had worked with him twice and that was enough for me.''   and  it is ''he hung around''  not  ''he hanged around''

Edited by DTeacher - 12 years ago

14 pages of prologue comments. I doubt you need a confirmation from me that you write really well. 

Originally posted by: DTeacher

Hi Amal,

Thanks for inviting me to read the prologue - really nice start. Have to admit that I was slightly confused at the start, as you seemed to flit from 'third person' to '1st person' then back to '3rd person' for Khushi's character. Found it very enjoyable though - thank you!

Edited to add: If you want to amend it, it starts where you write ''I had worked with him twice and that was enough for me.''   and  it is ''he hung around''  not  ''he hanged around''

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it was very interesting n different 

The story seems to be interesting and trust me i wanted someone to write a FF/SS/OS in which Khushi or Arnav are photographers and here it is. Wowiiee please add me in your PM list !