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Poem Series (Page 2)

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Posted: 23 December 2011 at 3:42pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Nadiamimi18

well here i go:

Her eyes  fell upon him, (gopi)
And little did she know
That from that moment forward,
she couldnt let go.

He was left with a broken heart,  (Ahem and anita past)
But she came right in. (gopi did)
Helping him forget the past,
While feeling new again within.

by nadia xx

Wowww Nice one Embarrassed 

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Posted: 23 December 2011 at 4:09pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by shaina.sharma

i am doomed...me and poems..not at all match

so i wil do a simple statment of love


The most painful thing in the world is the person whom u love cries on ur shoulder for his beloved.

hows thatWink



Ah.  That is so sweet.  Almost heartbreaking, especially if you have feelings for that person.Smile

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Posted: 23 December 2011 at 4:22pm | IP Logged
The wind whispered through the trees
Filling my ears with words I did not want to hear
Bringing images to my mind that i did not want to see.
The hurt, the pain in my true love's eyes
The loneliness that he has to bear
The tears he will shed
Knowing that I shall no longer be of this earth
To take my place in heaven and wait for my rebirth.



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Posted: 23 December 2011 at 5:26pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Xarina

The wind whispered through the trees
Filling my ears with words I did not want to hear
Bringing images to my mind that i did not want to see.
The hurt, the pain in my true love's eyes
The loneliness that he has to bear
The tears he will shed
Knowing that I shall no longer be of this earth
To take my place in heaven and wait for my rebirth.






OK. So it's not a Gohem poem. But it is the first thing in my mind that made sense.

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Posted: 23 December 2011 at 8:44pm | IP Logged
I think the chalenge was to answer in poetic form but i am not sure it is running that way hence here is a lil something from me,
 

I yearn for my love to look my way,

I yearn for my love to hear what i say,

I yearn for my love to stand by me today,

I yearn for my love to join me when i pray,

I yearn for my love to hold my hand if he may,

I yearn for my love oh i yearn for my love in so many ways,

But most of all I yearn for my love to  love me for always.

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Posted: 27 December 2011 at 11:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by tangam

I think the chalenge was to answer in poetic form but i am not sure it is running that way hence here is a lil something from me,
 

I yearn for my love to look my way,

I yearn for my love to hear what i say,

I yearn for my love to stand by me today,

I yearn for my love to join me when i pray,

I yearn for my love to hold my hand if he may,

I yearn for my love oh i yearn for my love in so many ways,

But most of all I yearn for my love to  love me for always.

lol you are right LOL 

i was thought they will right a 2 lines and another person will come and write a poem as an answer to the previous writer ok may be i didn't say it clearly 

any way we got a few poem writer here will g in this flow LOL  
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Posted: 27 December 2011 at 11:25am | IP Logged
your voice like rain shower, i see a sunshine in your glance 
where will i exist? without you my day light... 



Edited by Abiya07 - 27 December 2011 at 11:26am
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Posted: 27 December 2011 at 11:46am | IP Logged
I'm not good at it...but thought of giving it a try

My day is prolonging
With me longing to see u
(suits Both Ahem and Gopi)

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