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Posted: 12 years ago

Hello My dear SNS Loves 

This is a Poem writing Game 

I will write one line poem 
someone will write the next line it has to be 
linked with previous line like an answer 
for example 


"you are my love you live in my eyes how will i exist with out you my love"
"Looking into your eyes,I can see your every thought  they speak thousand words"
"I wish you could see my love for you it's deeper than the ocean wider than the skies"
"Sea of emotions running through my heart my untold love is stronger than yours"

 


Keep Ahem and Gopi in mind and write a few lines guys 
Hope you all will like this 
😳 

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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh i ve to start? I am pathetic at it. But who cares!!!!

I am gonna copy hindi songs for this now!!

Eyes eyes meet dil beating fast. Dil beating fast i cant walk. I cant walk i fall in your arms!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: vibz88

Oh i ve to start? I am pathetic at it. But who cares!!!!

I am gonna copy hindi songs for this now!!

Eyes eyes meet dil beating fast. Dil beating fast i cant walk. I cant walk i fall in your arms!!



Thanks for your poem 

Dear i think its good if its in English there are lot of non hindi speakers in this forum which includes me πŸ˜†
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: Abiya07



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lol dint i convert the hindi song into english???? Dil is the oly hindi word and it means heart. I thought v ve to come up with something funny!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

i am doomed...me and poems..not at all match

so i wil do a simple statment of love


The most painful thing in the world is the person whom u love cries on ur shoulder for his beloved.

hows thatπŸ˜‰

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Posted: 12 years ago
No poets Here πŸ˜­
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Posted: 12 years ago
well here i go:

Her eyes  fell upon him, (gopi)
And little did she know
That from that moment forward,
she couldnt let go.

He was left with a broken heart,  (Ahem and anita past)
But she came right in. (gopi did)
Helping him forget the past,
While feeling new again within.

by nadia xx
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Posted: 12 years ago
I think everyone should have a ago xx
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: Nadiamimi18

well here i go:

Her eyes  fell upon him, (gopi)
And little did she know
That from that moment forward,
she couldnt let go.

He was left with a broken heart,  (Ahem and anita past)
But she came right in. (gopi did)
Helping him forget the past,
While feeling new again within.

by nadia xx


Wowww Nice one πŸ˜³ 
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: shaina.sharma

i am doomed...me and poems..not at all match

so i wil do a simple statment of love


The most painful thing in the world is the person whom u love cries on ur shoulder for his beloved.

hows thatπŸ˜‰



Ah.  That is so sweet.  Almost heartbreaking, especially if you have feelings for that person.😊