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SS - 12 Days Of Christmas (COMPLETED. Chap 12 up!) (Page 18)

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sharneil92 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 28 December 2011 at 7:04am | IP Logged
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Originally posted by tina_1234

verrryyy nyc part...loved it sooo much!!


Originally posted by preethi12345

soo nce.. wow ! tx 4 pm

THANK YOU! and u r welcome!

Originally posted by X.Sisi94

Amazing Update 
They finally getting married
Cant wait too read the next part!

THANK YOU! i shall update soon!

Originally posted by reyabear

Gaaahhh I want to know what was in that letter!! 
Great update Shalu!

THANK YOU! and not yet reyabear! Wink LOL

Originally posted by magi11

wow so much in a single update..just loved it.. cant wait for the next part...

THANK YOU! i shall update soon! 

Originally posted by dumas

ok i need to know whats in that letter love it awesome update nani is so sweet loved it arnav and his lips thanks for the update 

not yet babe! and THANK YOU! Embarrassed

Originally posted by moon_mine

simply superb!!!!
jst loved it!!!!!


Originally posted by srahs

fab loved it


Originally posted by pinkpearlz

Shalu you are amazing! 'Are you a swimmer?' Rofl. raizada's teasing khushi was cute.


Originally posted by asumi0350



Originally posted by monkeydog18

Great update!! But I also wanna know what was in the letter??! Please!!


Originally posted by bookadict303

Continue soon :) :)

i shall!

Originally posted by LyssaPie


and oh my both of them are beastly romantic Embarrassed

THANK YOU! and yes, they are! LOL

Originally posted by bmtdluver

Amazing ss! I can't believe arnav is so romantic! Hmm, i wonder what mamiji had written in the note

THANK YOU! yes, arnie is super awesome! and the note, you'll know when the time is right! LOL

Originally posted by loveydovey

so so good Big smile loved the teasing of the whole raizada family LOL

and i really want to know what was in the letterSmile thanks for the pm

THANK YOU! and not yet dearie! LOL have patience! Tongue

Originally posted by Arhi-Sarun

hahaha three Indian hensROFL...

loved the update...waiting for the next part...

thanks so much for the pm 

THANK YOU! i shall update soon!

Originally posted by raii



Originally posted by littlemoi

hahahahah.. are you are swimmer?! then you must be monster!! loved tht part and the update!! but really really wanna find out wht was in tht letter tht mami sent to arnav!! plzz continue soon!!

i shall! but not yet! LOL have patience... and i'll update soon enough! LOL

Originally posted by shybabe

aww shalu...that was so lovely...bravoClap


Originally posted by thecraze92

It was good, but idk why i have a feeling that next one will be more interesting :)


Originally posted by MsCeylon

I enjoyed reading the naughty Arnav Evil Smile
Likes the prank the family played on Khushi LOL

THANK YOU! yes.. i was chuckling myself! LOL

Originally posted by DilMaaneet

i just loved it...
thanks 4 pm ..
btw, my name is also Shallu !!!
plzzz send me links of ur other writing works as well ...

hey shalu! Embarrassed or is it shallu? Confused
well, THANK YOU! and i'll PM you the links! Embarrassed

Edited by sharneil92 - 28 December 2011 at 7:25am
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Originally posted by Krishnaluv94

Three Indian hens.. Haha. That was awesome! Arnav can be so slow sometimes. Duh, swimmers are
known for their ability to not require oxygen for extended periods of time. ( Wow, that
sounded smart) LOL Hmm.. I still wanna know what's in that chit! I demand to know! Pretty please with Arnav in top ;) 

Can't wait for four calling birds! Ooh, we're getting close to the FIVE GOLDEN RINGS!! Haha, I'm excited 

Thank you! Embarrassed Yes, remember, Arnav was in the "Khushi Kumari Gupta Haze"? Because of his "important" work!? LOL 

and about the chit, HAVE PATIENCE, DEAREST! Wink LOL I wont reveal until after AT LEAST A WEEK! ROFL 

yes! next chappie will be.. interesting. Wink and five golden rings is NOT what you think beta! LOL 

Originally posted by mademoiselle927


LOL! Nani is too cool! :P

'Are you a swimmer?', hahahaha ROFL

But seriously, what was in that letter? I want to know!

Oooh, and I'm impressed, you aren't late at all today! Hug

nani is a rockstar. PERIOD. LOL
the letter. NOT YET! LOL "Patience is a virtue!" Wink THAT'S WHAT YOU SAID TO ME NAH? 
LOL. thanks for announcing my lazy fact to everyone! Angry LOL Embarrassed LOVE YOU! Hug

Originally posted by sparklystarstud

wow wow wow!!!!!!!!!  Icon Monkey Yoyo
shaaaliii...awesome n humorous update... Monkey Emoticon
HAWTIE HAWT starting... Monkey Winks
CUTIE CUTE ending... Monkey Icons Cici

 She was now going to be related to three very important females in her life, and all thanks to him. Her Laad Governor. And she smiled her Khushi Kumari Gupta Smile at him.

nani mami n anji di just for her from nw on...soooper cool... Monkey Icons
n shaaaliii...
pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls... Monkey Winks
tell us wat was written by MAMIJI nah!!!!!!! Monkey Icon
pls little one... 

"That's for me to know, and you to NEVER find out," said a smirking Arnav as he forcefully ushered her out of his room before she could question him any further.

this was just for kushi nah...nt for us...
so pretty pls tell  us  shaaaliii...
n love u for ur update on almost promised time... Monkey Icon
nw waiting for the nxt update ...

loads of luv
~~~~~~~~sam Monkey Winks

HAHAHA! thank you sammy! Heart
about the chit. NOPE. NOT YET! Wink LOL
hehe. THANKS UH. you and Naz, AKA MADEMOISELLE927 are gonna be the death of me. 
and i love you moreee!!! Hug

Originally posted by -_-harsh42



SWIMMER??!!! Really Shalu??!!! ROFL
That was a total : 

And their snogging session??? I was all. . . 

Thanks for the PM, Shalu!! Luv u!! Heart

HEHEHEHE!!! thank you!!! Embarrassed I LOVE YOU TOO HARSHITI! Heart

Originally posted by Pearl_mystic

That was amazing...

Are you a swimmer? Then you must be a monster! LOL... ROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL

And Nani teasing Arnav being headstrong... Too good, too good...!

Loved the update...!!! Smile

THANK YOU!!! Embarrassed

Originally posted by AquaBluez17

That was so cute Shalu!! Im sorry I didn't comment on the 2nd part but that was awesome!! they r getting married!! n she got 3 indian hens as moms lol!!

awesome work and yay!! you are doing it! 3 days in a row!

thank you!!! nah, it's okay! Embarrassed yes, i'm on a roll these days! ROFL poor me... this is gonna go on until 8 more days! Cry

Originally posted by -sia-

Lovely update!! Thumbs Up Poor Khushi she must have been so terrified looking at those faces LOL. They are gonna marry..that's great!!! Khushi got 3 Indian hens...that cracked me gurl LOL!!! 
Awaiting the next part,

P.S forgot to tell u earlier, the titles of each chap are amazing and I love it especially when you give the meaning/significance of it!!!  

thank you!!! Big smile yes, the significance is very important because only then you'll get the hang of what msg i'm trying to send across! Embarrassed and my SS is pretty much based on the metaphorical importance of the poem! Embarrassed

Originally posted by ..-Sanzz-..

Chemical Locha Line Cracked Me Up LOL Hahaa, ArHi Are Getting Naughtier Embarrassed I Want To Read About Their First Night : P Blushing Awww, Nani Was Kidding . Waiting For Part 4 ;) Hug

hehehe.. THANK YOU! okay. about their first night. AHEM. i'm innocent here please! LOL i can't stand too much explicit descriptive writing! Dead or else, i'll die of heart-attack. until 7th grade, i pretty much thought that babies grew in stomach after you get married. as in marriage lead to the baby growing in the stomach. was even confused as to how the mummies did not vomit them out? and then i realised it was important for the baby to say inside cos it needed to eat. Stern Smile

Originally posted by Sivaranjani

Shalu! Fab SS!!

Just caught up with entire updates!! Oh Man, I should not have missed that! Ouch

Firstly, what was mamij's letter?? I'm scratching my head so much**Still I couldn't find one good guess** and I blame you for any loss of hair!LOL reveal it soon yaaar!

With Arnav's proposal part..! Sanchari jewellers..! Big smile! And the proposal was perfect!Embarrassed

Another thing!! Kushi's presence of mind - "Are you a swimmer"ROFL! I loved that part!

Naniji is perfect! Allowed Kushi to ramble then said Yes..! I loved that part!!

Thanks for the PM dear!Smile

thank you! Embarrassed heheh.. about the chit. NOT YET! Tongue khushi's presence of mind = MY PRESENCE OF MIND. I'M AWESOME. *takes a bow*


Originally posted by minimuffin86


just put Eesa to bed and came to read this. *sigh* mayre jaan! this was sooo funny. hahahah he cant swim! hahaha the great Arnav Singh Raizada cant swim nor cn he change a tyre! sahi main Laad Governer he hai!

hahaha and the three Indian hens is just crack my sides with mirth worthy!

have i ever told you how amazing u are?

SAHAR! Big smile hehehe..
you don't need to tell me that babe. 


Originally posted by Harshiti4Lyf

Shalu this is amazing!!! Just complete Wow!!! 
Love the way you use symbolism in your work!!! 
Naughty naughty Arnav!! Cant wait for the next update!!

thank you!!! Big smile heheh.. next update's gonna be soon! Embarrassed

Originally posted by roshnidiya

such an amazing update
i mean d 1st part having all cute n romantic scenes...amazed me i thought u would nt update dat way bt thankx to u for it
 n d last part was really funny n nice too
loved it as usual
do update soon

HEY SHASHWATI! Embarrassed glad to meet you! Embarrassed
thank you! glad you loved it! Big smile
and i;m shalu. originally from India but now FROM HONG KONG! Big smile LOL

Edited by sharneil92 - 28 December 2011 at 7:46am

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sparklystarstud IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 28 December 2011 at 7:47am | IP Logged
"So you loved me back then, even when I used be cruel to you with my callous words."

 "And you have been devoted to me all this while."

"And you think that I am your Prince Charming who would come in a white Arabian horse, sweep you off your feet and take you to our palace of love."

She opened her eyes as she gasped, and then blushed at remembering AGAIN what he did to her after that.

poor kushi...arnav's taking a toll on her... 

just like u shaaaliii...tormenting me by telling abt 5th day n making me wait... Monkey Winks

AWE!!!! short LOVED it none the less hun... Monkey Emoticons

and love u sooo much for the promised looonnnggg update tomoro... Onion Icons

n it btr be on time little one... Monkey Winks

WOW!!!! u've done it...4 days continuously ...AWESOME!!!! Monkey Icon Cici

still 8 more days...WAY TO GO little miss muffet  Monkey Icons

a huge hug frm Onion Icon

sam...luv u  Monkey Icon

Edited by sparklystarstud - 28 December 2011 at 11:57am

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sweetie_angel IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 28 December 2011 at 8:49am | IP Logged
good one

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-Zara- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 28 December 2011 at 9:23am | IP Logged
aww this is adorably cute. loved the arhi convo

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-Zara- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 28 December 2011 at 10:33am | IP Logged
OMG ekkk! god the ending was tooo good. arnav proposing like that and khushi reacting so boldly, wow! always amazing work from you

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