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SS - 12 Days Of Christmas (COMPLETED. Chap 12 up!) (Page 10)

sharneil92 IF-Dazzler

Joined: 10 April 2011
Posts: 3157

Posted: 26 December 2011 at 5:53am | IP Logged
Replies AFTER Chapter 1.

Originally posted by nayika

Awww! This was sooo cute! 

Loved how Khushi remembered all the things that happened in the past and Arnav saying 'our nephew'.

Looking forward to the next parts already :D

thank you shuheda! next part, i have a hunch, you'll love it! Wink

Originally posted by mademoiselle927

Yay! You've updated!

Payal and Akash had a baby? Woah! That was a really nice surprise! So, I absolutely loved how Arnav and Khushi were so motherly - fatherly to the baby! And how Arnav gave the news to her! Awww!

Oh, and the explanations you give to your titles and all, that's damn cool too!

Can't wait for you to update tomorrow! Don't be lazy about it! Wink

yup! you'll get explanations everytime too! Embarrassed it's my job to reveal the secret nah? LOL and i promise, i am not being lazy! LOL AND THANK YOU! Big smile

Originally posted by AquaBluez17



wow Shalu!! It was amazing!! Great job!! I can't wait for day 2 already!! yay!! Well we all know when day 2 is coming!!

Loved the name of the child! You are so good at this Shalu!!Big smile

mya! you're so nice! Embarrassed yes, i love the name too! ARNAV! AAAHH!!! LOL

Originally posted by LyssaPie

very nice start!

thank you!

Originally posted by dumas

so sweet love how khushi told him about happy ji sorry for that guy so cute when she said our nephew loved it can't wait for day 2 loved it thanks for the pm          

haha! thank you! Embarrassed

Originally posted by harsh42

shalu!! i can't type longer co?ments through my cell phone! gimme like 12 more hrs.. n i'll give u a looong comment!! =D


Originally posted by shobrakapooor

so sweet! awesme strt! lovd it!

thank you! Embarrassed

Originally posted by reyabear

Shaluuu! That was too good! Khushi calling him Arnav and then Arnav saying 'our' nephew. It was all so adorable! Can't wait for the next part! :DD

shreya!!! THANK YOU MY JAANUU!! Embarrassed next part would be even mushier! well, muchy according to my standards anyway! :P

Originally posted by aashizin

owww dear  awesome upd seriously loved it it was cute 

thank you!

Originally posted by minimuffin86

i have butterflys in my stomach that was so cute and fizzy awesome!!!

i loved everything about it and the last para had me swooning!!! 
this is awesome
your awesome
we're awesome :D

Munching on Cotton Books iBB!!

HAHAHAHA!!! you're awesome my friend, SAHAR! Embarrassed

Originally posted by Fammakhan1

Great Update hun..cant wait for moree

Do add me to ur pm List.. X

thank you! i will!

Originally posted by Pearl_mystic

Very nice start...
Waiting for the next update...!

Thank you! 

Originally posted by moon_mine

hey pls pm me the nxt time u update!!!!

thank you! i shall! 

Originally posted by devishree

Starshalz it was gr8 superb and the title line and its explanation was fabulous ..i loved the whole update and u have written beautifully and fantastic and fabulous uncle and chirpy and bubbly aunt and a handsome lad nephew the trio rocks Party
this is for u 
cute little nephew arnav (yishu)

thank you! thank you! thank you! and the boy was lovelyyy!!! so cute!! LOL

Originally posted by Krishnaluv94

Awesome update! Loved it! Great explanation! Can't wait for day two!

thank you! Embarrassed day 2 would be better! Embarrassed

Originally posted by bookadict303

Continue soon :)

i shall!

Originally posted by SanayaBarun4eva

extra-ordinarily beautiful OS.. enjoyed it thoroughly.. cant wait for next update..

thank youuu!!! i'm glad it pleased you!

Originally posted by sparikh

cute beginning - 1st Day of Xmas! 


thank you sona! Embarrassed

Originally posted by shybabe

loved it my dear...thank youWink

thank you! and you are welcome! LOL

Originally posted by Bloem123

Amazing very nice start!

thank you! 

Originally posted by Harshiti4Lyf

That was sooo cute!!!!! Omg loved it dear:)

thank you!! means a LOT coming from you!! Big smile

Originally posted by angelic shaz

awww sooo cuteee  loved it!!

thank you! 

Originally posted by dbr_kmichi

how cute!!Smile
liked it a lot..!
"our nephew" niceSmile
continue soonSmile

thank you!!!

Originally posted by littlemoi

omg!! wht a start!! i loved it!! thanks a ton for the pm!!

thank you! and no problem!

Originally posted by harsh42

I'm posting a new comment!! LOL

Wow, Shalu!!! It was too good!!! Clap Star

When Khushi explained abut Happyji telling her call the Raizadas, and when she explained it to Arnav, all Arnav could catch was "Happyji"!! I loved the way he asked, who's Happyji?!! And trust Khushi to explain who Happyji was. In detail!!! LOL

And aww. . . . Arnav likes his nick name?!! Day Dreaming

And especially loved the moment they shared with Arnav Jr. in Arnav's arms. . . . . Day DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay Dreaming

Hope they'll have an ACTUAL Arnav Jr. in Khushi's arms by next year. In your SS, that is!!! LOL Wink

hahaha!!! YOUR'E BACK! LOL thank you soo much harshita! this mushy mushy chapter was NOTHING compared to what is about to come! Wink and yea.. an actual Arnav Jr would be adorable wouldn't he? Embarrassed

Originally posted by Vampire.wingz

Lovely Update I love this ! plz send PMS when u update the other part ! 

thank you! i shall!

Originally posted by Nici0306

it is so cute.. please add me in your pm list..

thank you! i will! 

Originally posted by MsCeylon

The best part was Arnav saying "Our Nephew" 


Originally posted by nyxx

A wonderful start for sure...and "our nephew"..AWWH! Love these two lotss!
Im eagerly waiting for the rest =) Continue asap girlll!!!

thank you dee!! yes.. in an HOUR OR SO! Big smile

Originally posted by roshnidiya

u updated 
i was waiting badly for it
do update d 2nd part soon 
specially d last part
sooo cuteee
thankx for d pm
loved it

thank you! i shall update pretty soon too! 

Originally posted by MrDarcyfan

Great story!

thank you!

Originally posted by mollycoddle

simply fab

thank youu!

Originally posted by Kaur89

Lovely story. I like your writing! Please PM me is it is possible!

thank you! i shall! Embarrassed

Edited by sharneil92 - 26 December 2011 at 6:36am

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sharneil92 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 26 December 2011 at 5:59am | IP Logged


Edited by sharneil92 - 05 April 2012 at 9:02am

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sparklystarstud IF-Dazzler

Joined: 21 September 2011
Posts: 2970

Posted: 26 December 2011 at 8:41am | IP Logged
ATLAST man...Monkey Icon Yoyo
u updated...
its MIND BLOWING!!!!!!!!  Monkey Winks Yoyo

wow!!!!! i love this ARNAV of urs sooo much hun... Monkey Icons Cici
MAMIJI surprised me... Monkey Icons Yoyo
n kushi n her "AAKRAMAN!!!!" made me like ROFL... Monkey Emoticon
poor the blow of a bag from the woman he's abt to propose... Monkey Winks

"Khushi Kumari Gupta, the one name that created havoc in me, body and soul, from the very beginning. Granted none of our initial meetings, heck most of our meetings started on the wrong foot, but that did not deter this heart," he said, pointing at his chest, "This stone cold heart from melting in your warm embrace. You are the only person that would dare to talk back to me, and that I like. Well, even NK does, but I really like him too. I just pretend to hate him anyways. You are the only person, who could ever dare to stand right next to me when the whole world does not dare to do, and for that, I thank you, because you Devi Maiya knows how much your presence is needed for this cold-hearted monster. I never thought this would happen, especially after I so cruelly wronged Lavanya a year back, that I would see this day ever again. But here I am. I guess your Devi Maiya has been kind to me. Especially after yesterday at the hospital, the epiphany that I am about to say could not have been stronger and truer than it is. Khushi Kumari Gupta, the Jalebi Bai, MY dearest Jalebi Bai, MY dearest Halwai, MY dearest and the most ajeeb girl, please do me the honour of accepting my hand in marriage, and become my wife." He kneeled on the floor, maintaining his intense gaze on her, and opening a tiny velvet box

the most beautiful proposal...whoa... Monkey Emoticon Cici
ON CLOUD NINE...hope sumthing like this happens on show Monkey Icons

Khushi looked back at him, at the end of his proposal in a way that surprised him. He expected her to either,

1. Cry.

2. Open her mouth in shock.

3. Jump up and down, bouncing her pom-poms as well in happiness.

But he never expected her to stand there with a loving smiled etched upon her, then walk up to him, pull him up from the floor back to his original height, grab his waist from one hand and a bunch of hair on the back of his head with the other and kiss him to give him real fireworks everywhere in his body.

she surprised HIM n me too...  Monkey Emoticons Cici
i love ur KUSHI KUMARI GUPTA alot...nt as much as arnav though Monkey Winks Yoyo

"I will marry you, you dumb Laad Governor," she said as she ruffled his hair affectionately.

that line was kinda cute... Monkey Winks
AMAZING update...LOVED it alot shaaliii... 
BEAUTIFUL...looking fwd to read more on cute little arnav soon... Monkey Emoticons

nxt update btr be upto ur PAKKA WAALA PROMISE missy... Monkey Winks
cant wait!!!!!! especially ur FF...
cant help bt wonder wats gonna be the nxt twist... Monkey Icon
u always make me want more n more to read wen i actually have to wait awhile for ur updates...nt fair dearie... Monkey Icons Yoyo

luv u loads...
~~~~~sam  Monkey Icon

Edited by sparklystarstud - 26 December 2011 at 11:25am

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devishree IF-Dazzler

Joined: 09 January 2011
Posts: 4646

Posted: 26 December 2011 at 10:44am | IP Logged
Starshalz that was great and i dont have any words to describe ur writing iam shell shockedShocked because of ur awesome writingEmbarrassed .u have chose the perfect words and they are best to put into use Clap
amazing lines of love and i loved mamiji's moment and today really love her she is too good Wink
ur phrases matching with the 2 turtle doves are fabulous Big need of proof reading it is all well said and written Thumbs Up
sapphire stone and tiny diamond showing the purity of love and auspicious start of their love life Star
thanks for the pm dear and waiting for the chapter 3 can't wait totally maddened by ur writingTongue
here is the picture for u !!!!!!!!!

thats it from  me bye

Edited by devishree - 26 December 2011 at 11:25am

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bookadict303 Goldie

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Posted: 26 December 2011 at 11:06am | IP Logged
Continue verrry soon :)

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dumas IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 26 December 2011 at 11:18am | IP Logged
awesome update finally the laad governor  proposed so sweet thanks for the pm can't wait for more love it 

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magss24 Goldie

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Posted: 26 December 2011 at 11:18am | IP Logged
loved both the updates...waiting for the next part...

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