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Shalu what can I say?!! Love the proposal!! I wish I was Khushi!! And khushis response?! Wow!! Loved the kiss and Arnav took her in for more!! Lol. I also really like your explainations of the song!! Great. Thanks for pm
Originally posted by: mademoiselle927RES!
So read it finally! :DIt was amazing, need I say!Arnav proposed, and they kissed. *sigh*Loved hw Khushi went all 'Aakraman' on him! 🤣Don't be lazy about updating today! 😉
Originally posted by: sparklystarstudres
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~'ATLAST man...u updated...its MIND BLOWING!!!!!!!!wow!!!!! i love this ARNAV of urs sooo much hun...MAMIJI surprised me...n kushi n her "AAKRAMAN!!!!" made me like ROFL...poor aranv...got the blow of a bag from the woman he's abt to propose...hahahaaa..."Khushi Kumari Gupta, the one name... and opening a tiny velvet box"the most beautiful proposal...whoa...ON CLOUD NINE...hope sumthing like this happens on showDAMN...!!!!she surprised HIM n me too...i love ur KUSHI KUMARI GUPTA alot...nt as much as arnav though"I will marry you, you dumb Laad Governor," she said as she ruffled his hair affectionately.that line was kinda cute...AMAZING update...LOVED it alot shaaliii...BEAUTIFUL...looking fwd to read more on cute little arnav soon...nxt update btr be upto ur PAKKA WAALA PROMISE missy...cant wait!!!!!! especially ur FF...cant help bt wonder wats gonna be the nxt twist...u always make me want more n more to read wen i actually have to wait awhile for ur updates...nt fair dearie...luv u loads...~~~~~sam
Originally posted by: devishree⭐️shalz that was great and i dont have any words to describe ur writing iam shell shocked😲 because of ur awesome writing😳 .u have chose the perfect words and they are best to put into use 👏
amazing lines of love and i loved mamiji's moment and today really love her she is too good 😉ur phrases matching with the 2 turtle doves are fabulous 😃...no need of proof reading it is all well said and written 👍🏼sapphire stone and tiny diamond showing the purity of love and auspicious start of their love life ⭐️thanks for the pm dear and waiting for the chapter 3 can't wait totally maddened by ur writing😛here is the picture for u !!!!!!!!!thats it from me bye
Originally posted by: reyabearShalu! That was so good! You write so so so beautifully! And Arnav's proposal...hayeee *faints*
Loved it! :D
So excited for the next part!
Originally posted by: dumasawesome update finally the laad governor proposed so sweet thanks for the pm can't wait for more love it
Originally posted by: harsh42res... :)
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THEIR nephew
You had me here!!!
Wonder what Mamiji had written in that chit, that made Arnav take such a giant leap!! Did she threaten that she'll fix up Nanhe and Khushi's wedding??!! 😆 Whatever, though!! I'm happy it brought out such a strong reaction from our Arnie!!!
And AAKRAMAN??!!! What the!!! 🤣
"Khushi Kumari Gupta, the one name ... in marriage, and become my wife."
That was so friggin' awesome, it made me go all 'AWWW. . . . .'
'Sanchari' jewelers, eh??!!! 😆 😆
And that kiss was. . . . . . PERFECT!! That's the only word that I can come up with, right now!!! 👏 👏 😍
Update soon, Shalu. . . . ⭐️
Thanks for the PM. . . . 😊
Originally posted by: Fammakhan1Awww d kiss... :)
And Arnav damnn loved it, da way he confess her his feelin's ..
Simply a Great updatee..
Cant wait for 3rd part...
P.s Thnx for d PM hun...
Originally posted by: shybabeawesome sweety...just love it...feels as if christmas is still going on😉
Originally posted by: minimuffin86Shalu my Pallo!!!
aww u dedicated this to me and Eesa and my hubby?!?!?! awww! awww! awww! i just cant stop awwwing!!!it was fantasticlly done! amazing! love it to bits tiitsy pieces!!MUNCHING ON COTTON BOOKS iBBARNEY!!!
Originally posted by: ..-Sanzz-..Ahhh, Beautiful <3 😍 This Part Has Everything . The Proposal Was One Of The BEST I Have Read 😳 If This Happens Then I Would Die Of Excitement :) 😆 Awww, Mami Jee Apologized, Very Sweet . Update Soonishh 🤗
Originally posted by: littlemoiarnav's proposal almost had me fainting!! lol... LOVED THE UPDATE!! thank you so much for the pm!
Originally posted by: tina_1234awesomely amazin ss..loved it...pm me plz when ya updt...wat did mami wrote in d letter..i sooo wanna knw
Originally posted by: Krishnaluv94Loved the proposal! What was in that chit that Mamiji gave Arnav? Can't wait to read about Three French Hens...
Originally posted by: pinkpearlzWonderful job. I really like how you writing the story out. What did mami write on that paper that lead to the amazing surprising proposal? Forget arnav, i also didnt expect khushi reaction to be that. Lol hope arnav gets out of his khushi haze soon.
Originally posted by: dbr_kmichiit was so so so nice..😊
totally loved the chap..😊
still wonder wat mami wrote n gave..
wonderful how he proposed her n al.,😊
Divya
Originally posted by: Arhi-Sarunjust read both parts and they were so beautiful...loved it to the core...
loved loved loved the proposal...and the kiss was so beautiful...I'm in love with this SS...
waiting for the next part...
thanks for the pms
Originally posted by: roshnidiyaCHAPTER 2 - On the second day of Christmas, my true love sent me two turtle doves.-----wow dis part touched my hearti'm glad! 😳"I'm so sorry bitiya, for being rude to you and your family all these years. I have no idea why I did what I did, but I'm sorry for it, I hope you'll find it in your heart to forgive me," whispered Mamiji, as she wiped away a lone tear from the corner of her eyes.
mamiji surprised khushi by dis dialogue n her actions n me too...i was like wat the...is it really her...too gud
yea, i wanted her to be good in this SS, thus the change!😳
i didnt get like wat she wrote a msg gave her to give anav...i guessed she asked arnav to propose her...dat was so sweet bt u didnt disclose wat was in dat note...anyways i m surprised by dis mamiji
you'll know soon enough! 😉
Ah! When this Laad Governor is there, then which other monster would be scarier, thought Khushi as she rolled her eyes and stomped off to the pool, ready to face the demon.
so cutee...khushi n her thoughts amaze me a lot...gud dat u could give dat flavour to her character.
aww! i'm so glad you think so! i wanted her to be her bubbly, over-dramatic, too-cute-to-be-true self! and i do tend to be as whacky as her sometimes... but not so constantly! 😆
dis 1 my god! touched my heart...hope he proposes me like dis...i mean so cuteee. dont worry khushi i wont take away ur laed governor...he is all urs...hehehe...bt awstuck by his proposal
sooo cuteee
HAHAHHA! i see, you're in the queue to grab arnav eh? no worries, the whole lot of us are! 😆
i mean u r amazing every ff, ss or os writers dont make it dis way...u did it...i was literally bored after reading all works which were all same bt u surprised me n also arnav by dis act of khushi...fab job...too gud for words...
thank you soo much! 😳 i am so happy you think that i bring in the element of surprise! really! and i'm happy you think so well of me! THANK YOUUU!!!
"Oh! That! I see," said Arnav, still not really understanding what she was saying, and pulled her into another kiss as he lifted a squealing Khushi Kumari Gupta off the floor and led her into his room so that he could properly satiate his thirst for a good kiss from this adorable woman he just proposed too.
sooo cute... n romantic...u no i was blushing badly after reading it.
hahaha!!! no worries, they DID NOT do what you are thinking! NAUGHTY GIRL!😆
usually i dont give such detal comments bt after reading dis part i couuldnt help bt comment...i only do after reading amazing updates.
aisa thankx for dis wonderful update toh banta ha bosss.
pl keep it up n do update part3 sooon.
i loved it as much as i could n enjoyed it too.
byeee
THANK YOU SO MUCH! may i know ur name please? i'm shalu btw! 🤗 that was one of the loveliest comments i have come across so far! 😳
Originally posted by: -sia-Shalu that was such a beautiful update..
Loved the way Arnav proposed to Khushi...Both her nephew and her LG have the same name I like thatWaiting to know what happens nextUpdate soon and thanks a lot a for the pm hun 😊P.S i'm sorry yaar I dont comment always!! 😔 With Uni exams bombarding me every single week I hardly get time give a proper neat response *sigh* but I do make sure I press the like button the least I can do...😳I loved all the previous updates and I must say you are such an amazing writer ⭐️ And love u loads for writing such beautiful stories!!
Originally posted by: monkeydog18Shalu what can I say?!! Love the proposal!! I wish I was Khushi!! And khushis response?! Wow!! Loved the kiss and Arnav took her in for more!! Lol. I also really like your explainations of the song!! Great. Thanks for pm
Originally posted by: Pearl_mysticChooo chweet.. ... Loved that everything at Shantivan is going brilliantly!
Originally posted by: thecraze92aww that was so cute, loved how accurately you described khushi's reaction and actions. I could just totally imagine this scene! 👍🏼
Originally posted by: MsCeylonI just could give a big 🤗 to mamiji
what ever did she write in that paper ?
Originally posted by: priya_lunaAbsolutely love it ,Shalu . The way Arnav proposed to Khushi ,how romantic. It was just so beautifully described and written . 😍. Amazing!Just love the ending of this chapter :)
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