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Dee-

@Dee-

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Posted: 12 years ago

my favorite update of the SS so far ! Just the other day my friend who goes hunting often told me that geese scare him coz they are territorial..he said that they literally lunge at you if they feel that their family is at risk..Loved how you tied six geese to six people standing up for khushi .. brilliant ! The last para made me go awww.. <3

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Posted: 12 years ago

oh god!! this part was so so fabulous!!😃 so far i think this was my favorite part!! so so good really!! just loved it how each and everyone of them stood up for khushi!!😊

u r such a good writer!! keep it up and thanks for sharing ur creativity with us🤗

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Zeba

@FebruaryFlower

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Posted: 12 years ago

A fab update Shalu.

You described the guys and the girls perfectly. I loved all the looks.

The way they all defended Khushi was just the sweetest thing ever.

I loved her cute tiff with Arnav...very romantic.

Thanks for the PM sweety!

⭐️

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SunriseGreen

@SunriseGreen

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Posted: 12 years ago

Adorable update! Just like all the other ones! 😃

Gosh, they are SUCH a sweet family ❤️

Khushi's rage was hilarious 🤣 Bechara Arnav 🤣 Loved the way you described all of their appearances and choice of outfits 👍🏼

Pam is just a filthy little s***. They gave it to her gooodd. 😆

Can't wait for the next part!

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Posted: 12 years ago

that was a wonderful update..love how they stood up for khushi... awesome😊

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Mandy

@MrDarcyfan

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Posted: 12 years ago

This was a great update! Waiting for day 7!

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fareeha

@pinkpearlz

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Posted: 12 years ago

Shalu i love you!!! you are great, what a chapter.

All the geese... i mean all the family supporting Khushi was sooo sweet.

The dress!!!!!! is indeed atrocious, my goodness!

my Fav line "Khushi, where did you get those beautiful doe eyes?"

LOL, seriously Arnav?

great update (i feel like i keep on repeating the same comment over again for you, but all your updates are great so what can i do?)

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Posted: 12 years ago

nice updates

thanks for the pms

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MsCeylon

@MsCeylon

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Posted: 12 years ago

OMG that was sooo sweet darling

loved it to the core

I'm eagerly waiting for day 7

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Sanchari

@.hea.

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Posted: 12 years ago

damn I am late..am late all over..with my ones and others too

So I will be back after I have my one sorted, and expect a good deal of 1500 words.. [300 words for each on an average]

promise!! I love the way you get it all done by time man! can you give me some tips?

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