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SS - 12 Days Of Christmas (COMPLETED. Chap 12 up!) - Page 17

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Posted: 12 years ago
res... 😆

I'm first Shaluuu!!!!

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It was short!!! Harshu likes longer updates. . . . . 😲 😃 😆
When is she gonna get 'em??? 😳 😉

And Khushi dressed for Arnav??!! Aww. .  So cute of her!!
And Arnav quoted Byron??!! That so goes with his character!!

Absolutely loved it!!! ⭐️ 👏 👏

Longer update next time?? Pweaassseee. . . . . . Yeah??!!!
Love you, Shalu!! 😃


Edited by -_-harsh42 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW!!!!!!!! 
there...FIVE wows for the update...
nw i have to say this... 
im truly madly deeply in love with this SS shaaaliii...
and the same goes for ur un-updated FF too...bt its ok coz ur giving us this perfect ss makin me forget abt ur ff... 
u were on time today...AWESOME hun 
nw im the one who was late to read ...
the yucky medicine n pills made me doze off... 
bt i suddenly woke up remembring to read ur update somewhere in my dream...seriuosly... 
u got me hooked with ur words little miss... 
the update was damn cute...
KUSHI DRESSING UP FOR HER ARNAV N ARNAV BRINGING JALEBIS FOR HIS KUSHI...
AMAZING!!!!! 
arnav quoting BYRON sounds just like him...
poor akash bitua...i badly wanted to hi fi    anjali di wen she said this

"Arrey Aakash Bitua, just because we did not explicitly described your state when you first got engaged, does not mean you get tease my Chotey. And anyways, even after one year of marriage, you cease to be the MUSHY, GLAZY-EYED LOVE-SICK FOOL you were even before you got engaged to Payal. Plus, Chotey is no fool. If he got a girl like Khushiji here. In fact, in Chotey's language, it was the best and the smartest deal he ever made."

and at this line

 Arnav's mouth had gone dry, as he stared on at her, moaning and sighing.

i was like OMG!!!!  
poor poor arnav...well...kushi doesn't know wat she's doing to him...bt once he shows her the result of her innocent actions i guess she'll shut up... 
sooper dooper update of the engagement ceremony princess... 
n love u alot for quoting me in PINK... 
BTW blue's my fav color...n i think urs too shaaaliii... 
lovely bt a bit shortie update...awaiting the next 

with tons of luv
~~~~~sam  


Edited by sparklystarstud - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awww, This Was Very Cuteee Especially Khushi Dressing Up For Her Arnav 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
res.. 
will read these later...
i have to catch up on the entire thing
was a lil preoccupied and i wanted to patiently read this one..
wil get back soon

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firstly m sorry 4 not commenting regularly... so here is a feeble attempt to make up for every comment i didnt make.. sorry sorry... 

.day 1: amazing... i loved the start...the whole concept of christening and khushi and Arnav who are the same n yet different.. at least they have accepted their love to themselves... nice nice and Arnav is treating her with a fond indulgence... awesome
Day 2
 i think that was the best proposal ever... it was so very cute n so asrish.. lol... loved it..
day 3: awww i loved these two,,,,, always love to read when arnav is totally in love with khushi.. gud gud.. btw m curious what did mami write in that note??
day 1: amazing... i loved the start...the whole concept of christening and khushi and Arnav who are the same n yet different.. at least they have accepted their love to themselves... nice nice and Arnav is treating her with a fond indulgence... awesome
Day 2
 i think that was the best proposal ever... it was so very cute n so asrish.. lol... loved it..
day 3: awww i loved these two,,,,, always love to read when arnav is totally in love with khushi.. gud gud.. btw m curious what did mami write in that note??
day 4: wow wat a word nk fnds to get stuck on patiji... lol... :) u r amazing gal truly amazing
Edited by Lyraa99 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
cute update shalu pls continue soon awesome
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG loved the poem Shalu!!! Gosh how much more romantic can our ASR get!! Man I really wish I was KKG..would love to be Mrs. ASR!!! lol

Awesome update dear...looking forward to reading more!!:)
Edited by Harshiti4Lyf - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awww tht ws so cuteee 😃

esp Khushi knowing everythng tht Arnie likes n wearing her dress accordingly 😳
Posted: 12 years ago
oh wow
amazing and the most beautiful update
soo cute
most i loved was khushi's jalebi as gift from him
n her hug after d engagement
sooo sweet...
i just love dem
dey r just perfect...
byeee
so dere was a ravva ve moment in ur ss tooo
loved it

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome updt sooo cute <3