Beautiful UpdateβοΈ
Beautiful UpdateβοΈ
CHAPTER 4 - On the fourth day of Christmas, my true love sent to me four calling birds.
awsum update.small and sweet...loved it
Enthralling eyes. Longing looks. Lovely lips. Teasing tones. Sexy smirks. Kindling kisses. Torrid touches. Sensual sighs. Blending breaths. Soothing susurrations. Heavenly hugs. Genial goodbyes.
my god!!!! dis was something which touched my heart...so sweet...
Stupid ear-ring. Just like the stupid Laad Governor. Stubborn to no end. Hmph, she irritatedly, as she gave the ear-ring one more try and ah! Done.
Really like that stupid Laad Governor. Will not listen to you until you scold him, she thought, smiling at his cuteness.
Stupid clock. Completely slow like that stupid Laad Governor, she again started mentally abusing him.
so cutee...this is something like khushi. awsome struck.sooo cute once again...khushi type...
A gush of wind. Hair swishing away upwards. Hands flying all around. Eyes closed awaiting pain. Grabbed by strong arms. Clutched onto sturdy shoulders. Familiarity of the feeling. Eyes opened slowly, shyly. Smile directed at him. Smirk directed at her.
awww...so romantic...nice idea and dere meeting is always special n cute.
"Khushiji, what a way to invite your hone-wale bhatiji," said NK smirking at the two. Khushi laughed at his pathetic attempt at trying to tease and said, "Bhatiji nahin Patiji."
oho...isse funny part ko kya naam doon...really u gave it a fab flavour...enriched each one's characyer...
"Pa, if you're done, can we get on with what we are actually here for?" asked Akashji, as he tugged Shyam and NK along with him.
wat the...is this now. shyaam. niw has he become good now or he was never bad in ur story...i m confused only of shyaam and i guess he was considered as one of the four calling birds...right!!!!
ok
i couldnt help again n had to give a datailed comment as it again touched my heart.
fab job n good going.
even i am glad to meet u dear.
bbbyeee...
Originally posted by: sparklystarstud
poor kushi...arnav's taking a toll on her...
just like u shaaaliii...tormenting me by telling abt 5th day n making me wait...
hehehe... π³
AWE!!!! short update...bt LOVED it none the less hun...
thank you!!!
and love u sooo much for the promised looonnnggg update tomoro...
it took me BLOODY LONG to type it out. LOL. so i consider it LONG! π
n it btr be on time little one...
it was on time! π
WOW!!!! u've done it...4 days continuously ...AWESOME!!!!
i know. PHEW!
still 8 more days...WAY TO GO little miss muffet
:D LOVE YOU SAMMY!
a huge hug frm
sam...luv u
love you too!!!
Originally posted by: mademoiselle927RES!
Am I awesome or what?!*Thank you thank you!* πThat was like half an update Sha!But I'm impressed with your keeping up with the rule of updating daily!Coming to the update!I loved how Khushi kept getting irritated at everything and blaming her LG for it πI want to know the mystery of the chit NOW!Now, you don't need to be mysterious in everything you write! π
Originally posted by: ZeeeOMG ekkk! god the ending was tooo good. arnav proposing like that and khushi reacting so boldly, wow! always amazing work from you
xxx
Originally posted by: nyxxThe 4th day was wonderful Shalu!
and i could completely imagine Khushi waiting like that and then, falling right into her bhatiji's arms..oh wait, patiji's arms LOOL!πIm in love with these twoo..and the ending was even sweet, pleasee do continue soon with the 5th dayπ
Originally posted by: SivaranjaniI was wondering why I did not receive a PM from you! And got it π!
Short update..! Yes but still it was cute! Funny when Kushi was thinking about Arnav as Stupid Ladd Governor again and again!!π€£NK..! He's really a cartoon... right?? πThanks for the PM..! Expecting a long 5th day updateπP.S: Still you are not ready to reveal the chit secret..! Very bad!π€’
Originally posted by: LyssaPieNice SHORT update. Chapter 5 better be long hehe.
Originally posted by: ..-Sanzz-..Very :X I Liked It :) Can't Wait For More π€
Originally posted by: minimuffin86i was actually blushing when Khuhsi was in the shower reliving her *ahem* conversation! there is still hope for u girl! i'll corrupt you yet!
and i love the banner!and the next one BETTER BE LONG!!!MUNCHING ON COTTON BOOKS iBBARNEY!!
Originally posted by: Harshiti4LyfWould love to start off my mornings like this βΊοΈ
Lol...seriously Shalu how much cuter n romantic can this get!!! I'm always in ASR dreamland π Totally loving this SS!!!
Originally posted by: littlemoiaww...what a sweet update!! love how arnav is always ready to catch khushi when she is about to fall!! but really dying to know wht was in tht chit!!! plzz continue soon and reveal the maha mystery behind the chit!! plzz
Originally posted by: nishiawww ... wasnt that cute ????
the best part was "Bhatiji" comment from NK ... ππ
n Shyaam ??? ππ u need to clarify tat dearie ...
Originally posted by: -_-harsh42shalu!! so sorry for late reply!!
but i've been sooo damn busy!!!
It was an awesome update love!
so sorry that i can't post a longer comment, since i'm using my cell phone!!
but i love, love, loved it!!
thanks for the pm!!! ;D
<3
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