SS - 12 Days Of Christmas (COMPLETED. Chap 12 up!) - Page 16

Posted: 12 years ago

Beautiful Update⭐️

Loving this series...Thanks for writing this wonderful FF😊
 
 
 
Posted: 12 years ago
awww ... wasnt that cute ????

the best part was "Bhatiji" comment from NK ... πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
n Shyaam ??? πŸ˜•πŸ˜• u need to clarify tat dearie ...



Posted: 12 years ago
great update...

love how Arnav is always there to catch his Khushi...

waiting for the next part...

thanks for the pm
Posted: 12 years ago
Extremely beautiful
Cant wait for day 5
Posted: 12 years ago
hey dear loved this part it was cute u penned down it wonderfully keep rocking and thanks for pm 
Posted: 12 years ago
oh my gosh!! dis is such a beautiful SS!! 😳

jst read d 4 parts in a go, awesome yaar ⭐️

do update soon n add me to ur PM list πŸ˜ƒ
Posted: 12 years ago
loved it 
thankx for pm but plz increase the length and cover whole day stop this recap style update plz plz plz
Posted: 12 years ago
shalu!! so sorry for late reply!!
but i've been sooo damn busy!!!

It was an awesome update love!
so sorry that i can't post a longer comment, since i'm using my cell phone!!

but i love, love, loved it!!
thanks for the pm!!! ;D

<3
Posted: 12 years ago

CHAPTER 4 - On the fourth day of Christmas, my true love sent to me four calling birds. 

awsum update.small and sweet...loved it

Enthralling eyes. Longing looks. Lovely lips. Teasing tones. Sexy smirks. Kindling kisses. Torrid touches. Sensual sighs. Blending breaths. Soothing susurrations. Heavenly hugs. Genial goodbyes.

my god!!!! dis was something which touched my heart...so sweet...

Stupid ear-ring. Just like the stupid Laad Governor. Stubborn to no end. Hmph, she irritatedly, as she gave the ear-ring one more try and ah! Done.

Really like that stupid Laad Governor. Will not listen to you until you scold him, she thought, smiling at his cuteness.

Stupid clock. Completely slow like that stupid Laad Governor, she again started mentally abusing him.

so cutee...this is something like khushi. awsome struck.sooo cute once again...khushi type...

A gush of wind. Hair swishing away upwards. Hands flying all around. Eyes closed awaiting pain. Grabbed by strong arms. Clutched onto sturdy shoulders. Familiarity of the feeling. Eyes opened slowly, shyly. Smile directed at him. Smirk directed at her.

awww...so romantic...nice idea and dere meeting is always special n cute.

"Khushiji, what a way to invite your hone-wale bhatiji," said NK smirking at the two. Khushi laughed at his pathetic attempt at trying to tease and said, "Bhatiji nahin Patiji."

oho...isse funny part ko kya naam doon...really u gave it a fab flavour...enriched each one's characyer...


"Pa, if you're done, can we get on with what we are actually here for?" asked Akashji, as he tugged Shyam and NK along with him.

wat the...is this now. shyaam. niw has he become good now or he was never bad in ur story...i m confused only of shyaam and i guess he was considered as one of the four calling birds...right!!!!

ok

i couldnt help again n had to give a datailed comment as it again touched my heart.

fab job n good going.

even i am glad to meet u dear.

bbbyeee...

Posted: 12 years ago
REPLIES

Originally posted by sparklystarstud



poor kushi...arnav's taking a toll on her... 

just like u shaaaliii...tormenting me by telling abt 5th day n making me wait... 

hehehe... πŸ˜³

AWE!!!! short update...bt LOVED it none the less hun... 

thank you!!!

and love u sooo much for the promised looonnnggg update tomoro... 

it took me BLOODY LONG to type it out. LOL. so i consider it LONG! πŸ˜†

n it btr be on time little one... 

it was on time! πŸ˜†

WOW!!!! u've done it...4 days continuously ...AWESOME!!!! 

i know. PHEW! 

still 8 more days...WAY TO GO little miss muffet  

:D LOVE YOU SAMMY! 


a huge hug frm 

sam...luv u  

love you too!!!



Originally posted by mademoiselle927


RES!
Am I awesome or what?!

*Thank you thank you!* πŸ˜ƒ

That was like half an update Sha!
But I'm impressed with your keeping up with the rule of updating daily! 

Coming to the update!
I loved how Khushi kept getting irritated at everything and blaming her LG for it πŸ˜†

I want to know the mystery of the chit NOW!

Now, you don't need to be mysterious in everything you write! πŸ˜‰



thank you naz! πŸ˜³ and NOPE. NOT TELLING YOU! πŸ˜†

Originally posted by Zeee


OMG ekkk! god the ending was tooo good. arnav proposing like that and khushi reacting so boldly, wow! always amazing work from you
xxx

THANKS ZEE!!! πŸ˜³ yup, khushi has the spunk in this ss! πŸ˜³

Originally posted by nyxx


The 4th day was wonderful Shalu!

and i could completely imagine Khushi waiting like that and then, falling right into her bhatiji's arms..oh wait, patiji's arms LOOL!πŸ˜†
 
Im in love with these twoo..and the ending was even sweet, pleasee do continue soon with the 5th dayπŸ˜ƒ

THANK YOU DEE!!! hehehe... me too! esp. after today's episode, I'M ALL ARHILICIOUS! πŸ˜³

Originally posted by Sivaranjani


I was wondering why I did not receive a PM from you! And got it πŸ˜ƒ!

Short update..! Yes but still it was cute! Funny when Kushi was thinking about Arnav as Stupid Ladd Governor again and again!!🀣

NK..! He's really a cartoon... right?? πŸ˜†

Thanks for the PM..! Expecting a long 5th day updateπŸ˜ƒ

P.S: Still you are not ready to reveal the chit secret..! Very bad!🀒

hehehe... thank you! and i'm sorry for the late reply! πŸ˜­ NK is a sweetheart! πŸ˜³ and the secret shall not revealed JUST AS YET! πŸ˜†

Originally posted by LyssaPie


Nice SHORT update. Chapter 5 better be long hehe.

hehehe.. TOOK ME LONG ENOUGH TO TYPE IT. so it's long. πŸ˜†

Originally posted by ..-Sanzz-..


Very :X I Liked It :) Can't Wait For More πŸ€—

THANK YOU SANZZ!!! πŸ˜³

Originally posted by minimuffin86


i was actually blushing when Khuhsi was in the shower reliving her *ahem* conversation! there is still hope for u girl! i'll corrupt you yet!

and i love the banner!

and the next one BETTER BE LONG!!!

MUNCHING ON COTTON BOOKS iBBARNEY!!

BAH! you are the woman of the world. you're like the Naniji in ur Big Bang FF! πŸ˜† there's no way you would be blushing! πŸ˜† the next one. SIGH. πŸ˜³ it took me long enough to type it out! LOL!πŸ˜† so it's long.

YEA! MUNCHING ON COTTON BOOKS iBBARNEYYY!! πŸ˜ƒ

Originally posted by Harshiti4Lyf


Would love to start off my mornings like this β˜ΊοΈ

Lol...seriously Shalu how much cuter n romantic can this get!!! I'm always in ASR dreamland πŸ˜ Totally loving this SS!!!


ahahaha!!! YEA! guess what, I DO! bloody ASR won't leave me alone in my dreams too! πŸ˜† and thank you!!! πŸ˜³

Originally posted by littlemoi


aww...what a sweet update!! love how arnav is always ready to catch khushi when she is about to fall!! but really dying to know wht was in tht chit!!! plzz continue soon and reveal the maha mystery behind the chit!! plzz

THANK YOU GIRL! πŸ˜³ and nope. NOT YET! WONT TELL UNTIL VERYYY LONG! πŸ˜†

Originally posted by nishi


awww ... wasnt that cute ???? 

the best part was "Bhatiji" comment from NK ... πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
n Shyaam ??? πŸ˜•πŸ˜• u need to clarify tat dearie ... 




shyam is a positive character in this SS. didn't wanna have much complication in the story so yea. πŸ˜³ and thank you nishi! for the lovely review!

Originally posted by -_-harsh42


shalu!! so sorry for late reply!! 
but i've been sooo damn busy!!! 

It was an awesome update love! 
so sorry that i can't post a longer comment, since i'm using my cell phone!! 

but i love, love, loved it!! 
thanks for the pm!!! ;D 

<3

it's okay love! it's you constant support that's keeping this SS up! πŸ˜³ even if you type "res" and then just type "read", I'LL BE THE HAPPIEST! heck, you could just hit the like button, so that i'd know you read this, AND I'LL BE THE HAPPIEST PERSON EVER! πŸ˜³

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