Os Cocktail party (part 2 at page 1 added) - Page 3

Posted: 12 years ago
lolll.. tooo gud ,, tx 4 pm
Posted: 12 years ago
Loved it !!!!! Thnx for the pm !!!! Continue soon !! 👏
Posted: 12 years ago
so sweet of you dear...I love it...can you please write the next part like the previous cockroach style???
Posted: 12 years ago
oh nadz ur amazing
haha i was just laughing at khushi she was drunk and telling him to finish  what was not done on diwali night 🤣🤣🤣
super fantastic os
Posted: 12 years ago
that was hilarious 🤣  Khushi is khushi...I was expecting "what the.." from Arnav...superb yar..thanks for the pm😊
Posted: 12 years ago
Nadiya...Very cute OS😳...luved the end part and drunk Khushi..superb👍🏼..continue soon..
Posted: 12 years ago
Oh Shoot Khushi all drunk...
OMG ab kya hoga...
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by coolsabs


so sweet of you dear...I love it...can you please write the next part like the previous cockroach style???
updated check
Posted: 12 years ago
LOVELY OS 👏...i really hope it happens in the show as well.
Posted: 12 years ago
prt 1

Title was very attractive.One of my ffs has this title.Theme was so interesting.Khushi's dress is like wow.
Khushi: jiji he is taking me to complete what he left that day ?
That is so sweet & romantic

Part 2

Khushi's drunk dance scene was so hot & funny.Suits her a lot.It reminded me of KYPH scene.They recollected Lavanya's words & admitted their luv.The way u described their confession scene was mind blowing.Too good.Khushi revealed d secret.I think u shud write one more part 2 show what happens 2 Shyam
Edited by jasminerahul - 12 years ago

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