Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

Kagaz ki Kashti-Luv tht Sacrifies Life MG ff THRD1 - Page 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: yashviagarwal

Guys is this story is going too slow? Shall I speed up tis or u want to see as it is? Suggestion please,,,,, thanks for all of ufor accepting me and my small ss'. I don't have enough word to thank u''.

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tichuuu plz 

speed up ...

vase thiss part was awesome 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Maan turn to see a beautifull girl with wet curly hair,, rubbing her hair with a towel and she is wrapped in a TOWEL'. He stars at her without blinking,,, U know I really don't know what to wear in this kind of situation' she sense there is no response from her maa so she turn and a man was standing right infront of her merely some inch away,, he un knowingly walked to her when she was muttering something'.  She saw the handsome man is standing there,, looking at her eyes,, he has some freezing gaze on her that didn't let her move or blink

maan ka face dekhne layak hoga ...

ha ha ha 😛 😛 😛 😛

an aftr dis how could he disregard geet ... ðŸĪŠ

post nxt part soon

waitng 😍


hmmm samajh gayi baccha,, will speed up from next part,, hehehehe he is a  arrogent dude who is only know how too behave rude... and trust me there will be more rudeness...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow... A beautiful update
Fabulous
Read all the parts in one go.
Geet dadima got along very well. Maan-dadima have a great bonding.
Dadi is superb. How she blackmails maan to do everything.
Loved geet maans first meeting. Geet in towel. Hehe

Continue soon. Will be waiting.
Luved it.
Keep writing.

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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: Remya_Pillai

Awesum part dear..

But i cant understand geet's intentions..
is she doing all ds for daadi?

dear u'll have to wait a little to get the answer 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
loved it 
dont understand whether geet is doing all these for Daadi...
cont. soon 
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: crazydream

Wow... A beautiful update
Fabulous
Read all the parts in one go.
Geet dadima got along very well. Maan-dadima have a great bonding.
Dadi is superb. How she blackmails maan to do everything.
Loved geet maans first meeting. Geet in towel. Hehe

Continue soon. Will be waiting.
Luved it.
Keep writing.

thank sooo much dear,,, love ur comment from the bottom of my heart...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: Mishti13

awesome update

loved it 
dont understand whether geet is doing all these for Daadi...
cont. soon 

thanks mishti,, hmm u'll get know as the story will grow...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Love it graphics
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 2
nice part...
Sujal has left to Mumbai...
Geet has agreed for this marriage?
why?
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Posted: 12 years ago
superbbb upd8... my xams are going on..so not much into IF...will be back once xams r over..😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 3
what is wrong with Geet?
why has she given up on Sujal?
grrr...
my baby Sujal dear...
and Maan is too rude...
why is she doing this?
cont soon...