Kagaz ki Kashti-Luv tht Sacrifies Life MG ff THRD1 - Page 6

Originally posted by: angili

Story is great but since it is ss you should pick the pace up a little but it is great I love it to the core I am dying to know why geet is distancing herself and why maan raped her the attraction is visibale between them

Originally posted by: zohafarheen

superb yaar

Originally posted by: sammy4u

great update yaar

loved it 

Originally posted by: etrika

awesome part.

so maaneet met for the first time n had a verbal fight.

but i didn't get one thing when geet loves sujal then why she agrees to marry maan.

the story is now really interesting.

continue soon n thanx for the pm.

Originally posted by: meena..

awesome dear

Guys is this story is going too slow? Shall I speed up tis or u want to see as it is? Suggestion please,,,,, thanks for all of ufor accepting me and my small ss'. I don't have enough word to thank u''.

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tichuuu plz 

speed up ...

vase thiss part was awesome 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Maan turn to see a beautifull girl with wet curly hair,, rubbing her hair with a towel and she is wrapped in a TOWEL'. He stars at her without blinking,,, U know I really don't know what to wear in this kind of situation' she sense there is no response from her maa so she turn and a man was standing right infront of her merely some inch away,, he un knowingly walked to her when she was muttering something'.  She saw the handsome man is standing there,, looking at her eyes,, he has some freezing gaze on her that didn't let her move or blink

maan ka face dekhne layak hoga ...

ha ha ha 😛 😛 😛 😛

an aftr dis how could he disregard geet ... 🤪

post nxt part soon

waitng 😍

awsome update dear

but i want to know why geet is behaving lyk dis as she love sujal

Originally posted by: punam2712

THE STORY IS INTERESTING

GEET LOVES SUJAL BUT IS WILING TO MARRY MAAN, WHY

WHAT IS THE SECRET

LOVED THE MEETING BETWEN THEM

WHAT WILL GEET DECIDE, WHY WAS SHE SO SCARED

UPDATE SOON

THE PACE IS FINE