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The 'Captured' Life#2-Last part Updated-Pg 146 (Page 83)

t_areeb IF-Sizzlerz

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like the update
so is geet leaving :(

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eagrly waiting 4 nxt prt...cntnue soonn
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superb update

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awesome update 
maan will also go with geet nd whn unki shaadi hojaye 
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interesting update...

loved how Dev is nervous...working in his own company and he is so nervous...

waiting for next update...

thanx for pm...
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awesome part
cont soon

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                                                        PART 40

Geet accepted Shravya's invite , after all her cousin is so excited for her marriage and wants Geet  to be a part of those celebrations so Geet accepted the invite.

But she was not so happy as she  more or less knew about the situations that she is going to face.

The next day , Geet reached the office but she was lost in her own thoughts.

She sat in her cabin and just then the phone rang.

Geet , are the blueprints for the new Hotel venture ready??

Yes Sir ...I'm just bringing them.

Geet took the files and knocked the cabin .

Good Morning Sir.

Good Morning Geet.

Geet  gave the files to Maan and stood there.

Maan looked at Geet and signalled her to sit.

Geet sat there quietly.

Maan was going through the file and Geet still remained silent



I have asked you for the Noida's venture and you have brought some other files.

I'm so sorry sir , I was..I'm sorry..I'll just bring them .

 It didn't take much time for Maan to understand that something is bothering her.

She soon came with the right files ,Maan was busy looking at them.

Geet...Is everything alright? Asked Maan while looking into those files.

Yes Sir ,absolutely.

Geet  I'm not asking this as your I don't expect any blind excuse or lies to this question.

Geet looked at Maan and narrated the incident ,Maan understood Geet's problem.

Geet...why are you worrying about others...people always have something or the other to speak..don't bother ,just go and enjoy the celebrations ,you just can't stop enjoying something because of some previous and past incidents.

Don't run away from anything ,just face it and I know that you are strong enough to face anything.

Maan went near her and sat on his knees , he slightly kissed her forehead and then hugged her.

I believe you Geet ,his words were enough to strengthen her ,she smiled.

Aj concert ke liye ready ho na..

She smiled ...bilkul.


After the office hours ,Maan  Geet and Dev met at the coffee point to go to the concert.

They reached the place where the concert was about to happen.

The ground was filled with people , excitement  was all over.

God...I'm damn excited!!!

Even I am...I just waited for this moment like anything ,they literally set the stage on fire..Absolutely crazy!!

I'm damn excited bro..I just can't wait more.

The crowd that was gathered there was waiting for a single glimpse of their favourite performers.

Finally the performers climbed the stage and there were cheers all over.

Dev  and Maan totally went crazy after watching them. Their typical brother bonding was coming out after listening to the raw beats of music.

OMG!!  Hassan!!

I love you !!!..shouted Geet!!

She was so busy admiring her favourite lead guitarist!

His one glimpse was enough to drive her crazy.

The way he played his guitar was completely rocking , guys and girls each and every person was jumping there.

The crowd repeated their words , they completed their lyrics.

The atmosphere that was created was driving them crazy.

They danced ,jumped and finally one of the band members threw a stick of his drums and that got in the hands of Maan.

All three of them came out and Geet was busy admiring her favourite performer.


He is so handsome ,his attitude ,his talent ,his eyes ,his voice Haaye...kya insaan hai yaar woh!!

He is Killer dude!!

Kya guitar bajaata hai!!

I just can't blv that I just saw him ...He even looked at me once.

Oh Please Geet...why would he look at you??

And waise bhi..He is not as good as the other members of the group..He is not that rocking ,said Maan with a tinge of jealousy 

Not crazy!!?? Please Maan..anyways...he has the capacity to drive others crazy!! Haaye Day Dreaming

Geet was not ready to come out of her dream world.

Geet , tumhe wohi mila...and what's soo special about him?? Asked Maan  with a bit of jealousy reflecting in his question.

What's not?? Aise poocho na!! Haaye..kya style hai uska!!

Okk what's not!! repeated Maan

Tum bhi na Maan..areh chodo!!

Chodo kyun?? Mujhe bhi bataao!

Dev tum hi bataao na..isn't he damn rocking.

Dev was completely lost in the world created by their music.

Geet...tum na mujhse baat aur mujhe donon ko koi aur hi you better stop admiring him said Maan in a jealous and complaining tone.

Aur waise bhi baal bade karke , phate hue kapde pehene se koi cool nahi ban jaata..said Geet without realising that he is criticizing a member of his favourite band.

Dev shouted...


What happened to you??? Achanak se why have you started shouting??

BHAI..THE STICK...mujhe chahiye..

No no no...I got it...yeh mera hai!!

Bhai...aise karoge apne chote bhai ke saath!!

Oye...tu na yeh drama band kar!!

I'm not gonna give it to you!!

Maan what happened to you ,today you have promised yourself that you'll not listen to anyone...said Geet in an angry tone ,she was first angry on Maan because he was not admiring her favourite band member with her LOL

Nahi main nahi doonga

Kaise nhi doge??

Dev, I once won a race in my school said Geet while winking at Dev

Me too geet Dev winked back.

They both started to tun behind Maan , Maan ran as fast as possible.

Geet and Dev tried their best to catch Maan ...they chased and chased ,Maan ran and ran..

Finally Maan got so tired that he landed on the ground and lied there.

Even Dev and Geet went there and lied down.

They panted and burst out laughing.

After sometime

The closed their eyes for some time while lying.

They came out of their craziness and started to think about their lives .

Maan opened his eyes and looked at the sky ,It looked beautiful with the stars.

Geet looked at the sky...tomorrow she is gonna face all those  from which she has been running for so long. Finally she stopped running and is ready to face everything.

Dev looked at the sky ,tomorrow he is gonna again stand up after falling ,fulfil his own expectations.

A new day , a new beginning.


Precap : Geet goes to Shravya's house.

               Geet sees Shravya's fianc ,who is  he??!!! Shocked

                If Geet is crazy behind Hasan..Maan Singh Khurana is no less..even he                  is  a cool and handsome photographer for all the  photography lovers.

                 Who is that  , who is crazy over Maan?? LOL


Next : PART 41 -

Edited by World-of-Dreams - 09 March 2012 at 4:08am

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